Ty for the informative/descriptive comment. Hopefully I can make sequel successful too.

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wow, err I could give it a shot, but I cannot promise that I'll always be around, or the best of editing skills/advice. as you may notice by my grand total of 0 stories, blog posts, and friends/followers along side my nearly empty account, I'm not exactly the quintessential writer here. so I'm surprised you would turn to me for help on something.

That whole post was because the guy was obviously new to the writing scene and I wanted to give examples as well as constructive criticism to help start him off. I know how ridiculously tense it could be just starting out and wanted to help ease the guy in so he could get better.

Anyways, if you wanna continue this line of conversation, mind it we take it to PMs?

I read your comment on the Story "The Xenoverse" and couldn't help but notice how descriptive you were, I was wondering if you'd be interested in maybe helping me out with my own Xenoverse story?

Thanks for commenting on my story. Why don't you fave it?