You are an excellent writer. I did notice some typos and other miscellaneous junk, but nowhere near enough to detract from the story's impact. Allorian lives on in the hearts of those who remember.
Thank you so much for the Fave of The Youth in the Garden. That you would means that my efforts to commemorate a life and a battle worked to some small degree.
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You are an excellent writer. I did notice some typos and other miscellaneous junk, but nowhere near enough to detract from the story's impact. Allorian lives on in the hearts of those who remember.
Thank you so much for the Fave of The Youth in the Garden. That you would means that my efforts to commemorate a life and a battle worked to some small degree.