Chances are nobody will read this or nobody will care.  I appreciate those of you who liked my first chapter of my story and gave me feedback.  However when I asked someone to help me edit it and make it better the individual instead insulted me and instead of giving me constructive criticism he gave me desconstructive and harsh words. But it did point out what needed to be fixed so i am currently rewriting everything and fixing things that could be better.  Therefore i am erasing "Chain Of Memories" and making it better,  The new chapter will have much of the old chapter but a  few pieces of the story will be altered  and/or changed including the title and characters. Please be patient with me if anyone is actually reading this.