> THE BLITZ OF LOVE > by Assassindog117 > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- > NEW TOWN NEW LIFE > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the day whent on in ponyville everything was quiet and nothing was going on.At the weather station ther was going to be clear skys.At the library it was quiet and spike was sleeping.At Sugar Cube Corner Pinkie was helping the watch the cakes babys.And at Sweet Apple Acers Apple Jack is working on some apple bucking.As the train pulled in a blue stalion came out with nothing on his mind.the stalion.As the stallion walked throught the roads of ponyvile."Great a new town for a new life" he said with some spring in his step.As he made his way to town hall he got the papers for his new home.As he walked throught the streets he noticed a pink mare bouncing her way throught town and as she noticed him she gassped and started talking. "HI IM PINKIE PIE " she said with a big grin. As she continued talking he was dumbfounded obout how she could say all of that in one breath and she disapered in a blink of an eye.As he walked to his new home he noticed a farm on his left and his hous on the right.As he walked to the nighebers home he was stopped by the sight of a stunning mare with a blond mane and orange fur and a stetson on her head. GOING TO A 2 PERSON VIEW As you head to the mare mare still staring but not knowing it until you get to her. "Howdi there" she said with a southern tone. "Hi there"you say back with a small grin on you face. "Im Apple Jack" she says while shaking your hoff. "Ow I think you just dislocated my shoulder" you say with a grin as you lagh a little. "What do you do here on the farm"you ask with a questioning look on your face. "Here at Sweet Apple Acers we farm apples and it is almost apple season" she says with a big grin. "Hey can i try bucking a tree" you ask with a grin. "Sure but it is hard for ponys on there firs"she stopes ant the middle of her scentense as she noticed you bucked the tree and nocked all the apples out of the tree and make them all go in the basket. "Like that you" you say with a smile on your face and a shocked expresion on Apple Jakes withch makes "How the hay did you do that on your first try?"she says with a questioning expresion. "Weeeel I worked at Applelousa for two years" you say with a smile. "Weel that proves the apple cutie mark."she says while looking at your cutie mark. "Ya do you know Braeburn"you ask with a half smile."Because he told me before I came to ponyville to see if you cam get me a job". "Ya I do and yes you can"she says with a smile that makes her face that makes her look more perfect. As you look behind her you see a big red stallion with a green apple as a cutie mark,and a brown mane.As you stand there still paralized of the sheer size of the stallion you think in your brain."Wait is this stallion her colt freind" you think. "Hello there ummmm" you say with a little nervousnes. "The name is Big Macintosh and your name?" he says with a deep southern acsent. "The name is Blitz Field Big Mac"you say trying to get on his good side. "Good name I see that you found my sister"he says with a smile. "Wait he is your brother great" you say out loud witch you face hoof about what you just said and blushing very hard. "What is that supposed to mean?" he says with a questioning face on. "uggg i just thought because of the sweet mare--" you stop in the middle of what you were saying and blushing even more of what you just said.As you look over to Apple Jack you see that she is now blushing a deep red. "What was that partner?" she says with a small smile coming on to her face. "Weeeellll I think I just called you a sweet mare in front of your older brother that scares me a little to be honest" you say to the. "Well that is very kind of you partener"she says while tipping her hat while you able to see the blush she is trying to hide. > The party at Blitz house > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- As you walked to your new home in ponyville you notice three things that are missing. ONE- nopony is around. TWO- there are no lights are on. AND THREE- the mare that you where talking with is now walkin besides you"wait what?"you say out loud as you notice the mare walking besides you.Your mind is still raceing about the mare besides you. "Sorry if i scared you partener but i whanted to talk to you with out my brother around"she says with a blush. "Yaa sorry about that about making you look all flusterd back there it's just that i never really talked to a pretty mare before and I never actually seen a pretty mare like you" say with a grin and blushing a deep crimson. "Yaa and I have never meet a stallion that can express there feelings like you did" she says while giving you cute smile. "Thanks and I never met a honest mare like you and a pretty one in fact"you say while putting you r forehoof around her neck wich makes her give off a giggile. "Woow I know i got on your good side but i didn't think you were the mare that giggeld"you say while giving a little laph. "I didn't think that yowere the stallion that knows how to talk to girls" she says while giving a sly smile.she says while leaning her muzzel close to yours. "Weel I never actually talked to a mare like you before how am I doing?"you ask with a sly smile. "Yaa you are doing good " she says while bringing you into a deep pashionet kiss that you kiss her back in the lust of love that you and her share in the night under a nice night with a cute mare. After the kiss of your life with the mare you two are now starring into the eyes of one anothere and you turn to your left to see that you guys are at your house. "Weel we are at my house i think this has been a good time"as you oppen the door and getting a light flip on and everypony yelling "SUPRISE" in your face and almost getting a heart attack.As you fall backwards from the shock you got from the suprise you almost fall on AJ. " UGH Blitz are you ok?" Aj asked as she looked down at you. "Ya I am just got scared thats all" you say as you got up as she starts to lagh. As you walk inside of your home with a smile on your face you see a pink cotten candy mane right in your face as you enter the room with all the pony's. "Hiya this is your WELCOME THO PONYVILLE PARTY"she screames and the party gets started,the music starts pumping,everyone is talking,and you are with you a great mare.As you walk up to Aj you see that she is talking to five other mares. "Hey AJ"you say as you walk up next to her. "Hey Blitz"she says while smiling back at you."Blitz these are my friends Twilight,Rarity,Rainbow Dash,and wait where is Flutter Shy"she says while looking around. "I am over here"you hear as you look over to the couch were you see a yellow pegasus hiding behind her pinck mane. "Hello there Flutter Shy I am Blitz Field and you know that you are missing the party"you say in the quietes voice so that you dount scare her. "Ya I know I just doun't like party's that's all"she says while using a regular toned voice. "Ok I'm not forcing you two but it is happening if you want to join in"you say with a smile. As the party is going on one song comes on and start singing the words that remind you of your previous life. LISTEN TO WHEN YOU ARE READING As the crowd dies down every one can here you singing. As you walk up to the stage you grabe the mic and start singing as the croud goes wild and you feel weight being lifted off your shoulders and feel like your past is behind you. > What did I do last night > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- As you woke up in the morning you had a spliting headace and didn't remember what happend, after the hard cyder you drank.As your mind tryed to remember what happened you felt a warm felling on your chest.As you look down you notice a specific orange mare on your chest fast asleep.Still stuned by the mare right now your mind is now freaking the fuck out.Now that you stopped freaking out you quietly make your way out and into the livingroom down stairs.As you flop on the couch. "What the hell happend last night" you say to your self as you facehoof."Did we no we couldn't have" you say trying to calm your self down.As you look to your left you see on your fridge you see some pictures from last knight that you dount remember. As you get up to check the pictures you see two ov witch you were having the time of your life rocking out, the other picture is with you and AJ drinking some hard cyder, and the last picture is you and AJ making out."Ok that is the best knight of my life but What happened after that" you say to your self.As you turn around to head back to your room you notice it is 4 in the morning.As you head back to your room you see that AJ is now holding a pillow were you used to be.As you get back in bet AJ lets go of the pillow and now lokes you back in the hug you were in before. 5 HOURS LATER As you wake up from the peacefull sleep you were in you open your eyes to see two emerald eyes staring right back.As you give a big yawn she is just a little shocked. "Sssssoooo" you say with some confusion in your voice." Do you know what happend last night?" " Wwweeellll we had some drinks we made out and I think i passed out" she said with a honest face. "OH THANK CELESTIA"you scream out in salvation. "What dose that supposed to mean"she says with a "what are you talking about" look, "Wwweeeelllll i thought we did some things that I could have had my limbs ripped off by Big Mac" you say with some nervousnes. "Holly crap Big Mac" you say with fright in your voice."We have to get to work" "Ya that sounds like a good plan" Aj says with nervousnes in her voice. AT SWEET APPLE ACERS "APPLE JACK WERE HAVE YOU BEEN!!!!!!" a angry Big Mac. "Ok Big Mac i can explain every thing just give me one second"you say with honesty. "Ok but you get one chance" he says while backing up a bit. "Ok so AJ and I got drunk and AJ pased out I put her on my bed and I went on the couch nothing else happend I promis on my mothers grave" as you said the last part you put your head down of remembering your past. " Ugghh Blitz are you ok?" AJ asked with a questioning face. "Ya im fine just rememberd my past thats all"you say while giving her a reasuring smile. "Ok Mac are we good because I am really sorry for getting you worried"you say with your ears down low. "Eeyupe"he says with a smile. "Thank celestia ok Aj lets get to work" you say with a smile. As the day went on it was queit and nothing was going on most of the time and it was hectic.As the day ended you and AJ say your goodbys and you head home.Still thimking of the past events you still think it was worth it. > the truth comes out > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- It has been two months later since you and Applejack have been going out. You and Applejack were just resting inside of the house, in Sweet Apple Acres. In a couch, you and Applejack were just sitting beside each other. "Hey Sugarcube." Applejack calls out. You gaze back at her. "Where're your parents?" Applejack raises her eyebrow. "I don't think telling it to you might end well for me." you reply. "Why do you say so?" "It's just that... It seems too sad for me." "Don't worry about it." Applejack wraps her fore leg around your neck. "A'l be right here to comfort y'ah." "If you say so." you take a deep breath and then let out a big sigh. "My mother and father died because of a fire accident." you feel your heart pounding, just trying to remember those painful memories. "My brother committed suicide because he couldn't face the fact that our parents are dead." you cover your face with your fore hooves. "N'aw,n'aw Sugarcube." Applejack tries to remove your fore hooves away from your face, but you resist on letting her remove it. "C'mon n'aw Sugarcube. Don't be like t'hat." you still didn't listen to her. "Looks like you're n'at going to listen to me a're y'ah?" you nodded. "Then you left me no other ways." Applejack pins your fore hooves down on you lap and then she gives you a long kiss. You can feel her tongue, slowly making its way inside of your mouth, trying to find your tongue. You couldn't explain the sensation you are feeling, as the farm pony's tongue is now inside of your mouth. You couldn't resist the urge on returning the favor, so you tried to work you tongue. You can hear her moans as you and Applejack's tongue fight inside of your mouth. After a few seconds, she finally backed away from the kiss, leaving behind a trail of salive on your muzzle. She left you breathless, giggling at your blushing and clueless face. "Y'ah okay now Sugarcube?" you stared at her blankly, trying to search for an answer. "Do I need to kiss you again?" Applejack jesters. "I don't really no what to say." you touched your muzzle with your hoofs, trying to remember the pleasure that hit you muzzle. "You could just ask f'er another kiss, or you could just tell me if y'er want something more?" Applejack licks her lips in anticipation. You were speechless, thinking that an honest and hardworking farm pony could be so seductive. "Do accept it Sugarcube?" you nod, still unsure of your answer. "C'mon n'aw, just choose." "Er... Some-something more." you're still not sure with your answer. "It's settled t'hen, why don't we go to my bedroom so that we could be m'er comfortable?" you nod. Applejack stands up and then helps you get on your hooves. She escorts you upstairs quietly. "We don't wanna wake up Applebloom." Applejack warns. After you two went inside of her room, she drags you to her bed, throwing both of your bodies on the bed. "You do know how to do this right?" Applejack gave you a weird grin. "Su-sure." actually you don't. "Then let's see how skillful y'er a'r." Applejack lays on her back and then spreads her hind legs in front of you. The only thing that is covering her marehood is her tail, which she removed after a second. You could now finally see it, the farm pony's wet marehood. You slowly descended your head down to her nether. You could smell the musk her marehood is releasing. Smells more like tropical fruits then an apple. You stop for a moment, trying to experiment with her marehood. You move your hoof at the lips of her marehood in a circular motion. "Ye-yes." Applejack cooed. You place your hoof at a certain location where mares really liked to get touched. The clitoris. "Here goes nothing." you thought to yourself. You press her clitoris down, using the tip of your hoof. Applejack suddenly wraps her hind legs behind your neck, forcing you to put your muzzle into her marehood. An inch of your muzzle is now inside of Applejack's marehood. The musky smell became even more tougher, making your shaft hard in anticipation. You hang your tongue outside, circling inside of Applejack's marehood. "Rougher Sugarcube." Applejack muttered. You follow her commands, so you instead of moving your tongue in a circular motion, you move it back and forth. You could feel Applejack's marehood clenching around your tongue. You know that she is now at her limits. so there is no reason to slow down now. You move your hoof back to her clitoris as you eat Applejack's marehood. You felt yourself suffocating a bit, but you didn't mind it, making Applejack cum was your goal. "A'm cumming!!!" Applejack yells. In just a flash, you feel a stream of fluids hit your muzzle, even at the snout too. You back away, as some of the fluids went inside of your snout. You coughed a bit. "You okay Sugarcube?" you nod, while also wiping your muzzle. "I think it is time to return the favor." Applejack pushed you down. "Wait, what?" you lay down on your back as Applejack parted your hind legs. You could see her face, staring at her target like a greedy pony. She slowly descends onto your shaft. You could feel her hot breaths, touching the tip of your now hard shaft. She gave your shaft an experimental touch. You moan as you felt her, touching your exposed shaft. She moves her hoof up and down at the base of your shaft. You could feel the pleasure, building up on your shaft. You couldn't resist the urge to moan, so you moan. "Don't worry Sugarcube. There's something more where d'at came from." she licked the tip of you shaft in a circular motion, slowly getting it inside of her mouth. You felt her wet and slippery tongue, wrapping your shaft in wetness. In each passing moments, Applejack got your shaft slowly inside of her mouth. In just a few seconds, she got your whole shaft inside of her mouth. She gazes at you for a moment before bobbing her head up and down. Your mind is now in a bliss. You tried to think of how great it felt, but the pleasure is still blocking your thoughts. Applejack stops for a moment. You were breathing heavily, and you also didn't knew that you were now sweating furiously. "A-ah, come on now Applejack." you beg. Applejack giggles for a moment before continuing on bobbing her head. You felt your cum, slowly rising up. You placed your fore hooves on Applejack's head. She knew that you were at your limits, she was waiting for you to cum, so she bobbed her head more violently. You felt yourself cumming. "Ah!!! Applejack!!!" you pushed her down as you release your semen inside of her mouth. After you emptied yourself inside of her, you released you grip on her head. Applejack slowly raised her head, some white fluids still dripping off of her muzzle. "A'h didn't know you could be so rough Sugarcube." she smiled at you. You just smiled at her back. You slowly close your eyes, feeling a bit sleepy. You suddenly felt something hot and wet at the tip of your shaft. You open your eyes and saw Applejack on top of you. Getting you shaft slowly inside of her marehood. "Don't think we're done yet." you just moaned as your whole shaft is slowly making its way inside of Applejack. After a few seconds, your whole shaft is now inside of her marehood. She slowly moved her hind legs, causing her to move ups and downs. Unwanted moans is now escaping your mouth, your tongue hanging out of your mouth, still shocked that the farm pony is now bucking you. This time, you knew that you wouldn't last so you warned her. "I-I'm al-almost at my limits." you muttered. "Me to-too Sugarcube." you felt yourself at the edge of your climax. You don't have any choice since it looks like Applejack wants you to cum inside of her. In just a flash your dam finally releases. "A-Applejack!!!" you emptied yourself. Your body, still twitching at the pleasure you have just felt. After what it seems like a minute, Applejack finally got off you and then lays beside you. "You sure got me tired Sugarcube." Applejack whispers to your ears. "I'm tired too Applejack." you slowly close your eyes. "Let's just hope that we didn't woke up Applebloom." you chuckle a bit. "Yeah." > not so boring day > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the you wake up from the of sex with Aj you remember one thing that you didn't think of before sleeping."Big mac" you say to your self as you freak out in your mind so you doubt wake anypony especially Aj. As you look out by the window you remember that Aj closed it so you and her can stay a sleep. You smile a bite because of last night and from the warmth of you and her body together and you fell more happy then fear."uuummmm" you hear Apple jack murmer as she nuzzeled more in to your chest. " ugh blitz" you hear her say as she fluttered her eyes open as you look behind you notice Aj's trademark stetson on the coffie table next to you. As you grab the stetson and place on your head she notices and giggils about how you look. "What is so funny I actually look good and might I add stetson's are cool" you say as you wink at her " and you ware it all the time so it makes you look quite adorable " you say and wink at her. She blushes at the comment and she nuzzels you a little more " and you whole get one to it makes you look even more attractive" she says as she takes her hat off you. " aww your making me blush Aj and yes I was thinking of getting one I will head to rarity after we finish work" you say as you get up. " Well let's get up and take a shower first we probable smell like sex after last night" she say. You are a little of shocked after the "the take a shower" and give a smile at saying that. As you got to the shower you and Aj walk in as the warmth of the water hit use both you give a relaxing sigh. " ugh do ya think ya help" Aj says with a smile that makes her completely sexy. "Ss sure " you say "Thanks partner and don't be scared to help with my special parts" she says while puting the emphasise on special. "Sure" you say with a sly smile and a bite of a blush. After the shower you and Aj made thee way downstairs they were met by apple blom with a big smile on her face as she notices you and Aj. "Hey Apple jack why is blitz hear?" Apple blom ask with a questioning look. "Well I couldn't make it home last night and I was going to crash on the couch but Aj insisted I stay with her so I did" you say while giving a really good serious face witch she buys and continues her coloring. After breakfast Aj and you head out to the field and see Big Mac working on the trees. "Hey Big Mac is there any work for me and Aj today " you say with a smile. "Noop" he said with a half smile. "Really well I am going to get a work hat I will be back Aj " you say and giver a peck on the lips. "Ok see you later". After a breef time at rarity's you come out with a black stetson and you feel good about buying it and wondering about what Aj would think about it. "Blitz ?" A voice comes from behind you and you see a light blue peagus with dark blue mane and tail. "Holly crap is that you soarin" you say looking at your old friend. "Ya it is me why are you wearing a stetson?" "Just got it because my marefriend said I looked good in one so I bought one and I have to say I look good" you say with glee. "Oohh you got a marefriend let me guess you got laid last night". He says with a sly grin. "I did and it was great"you say with a blush. "I have to go so I will see you later" you say see you rush off to Sweet Apple acers. As you get to the farm you notice that Aj is sleeping under a tree and her hat is on her face to cover from the sun. As you go to Aj she let's a adorable snore that makes you thank that you are with her. As you lay down next to her you put that over your face and take a snoze. As you wake up you feel the warmth of Aj on you and smile because of the feeling with her in your forewhooves. As you hold her tight and she dose to and you feel at peace. "Hey Aj wake up come on wakie wakie. You say as you nudgg her soft. As she wakes up she notices your hat. "Well howdy cowboy and why don't we go to some place more romantic" she says with a sexy smile. "Ok I got a place in mind" you say with a grin. At the top of a hill you and Aj are laying down and Aj is nuzzeling your neck and staring at lunas moon rise from the horizon. "Wooow when did you find this spot" Aj says "because it is a romantic spot". "I found it when I was walking home one night and I thought it would be a perfect to bring you hear "you say while brushing her mane. "Hey how about we have some fun" she say with half closed eyes and a sexy smile. "Sure you see the lake down there no one will be there so we can have some private time. As got to the lake you and Aj wasted no time and you booth locked lips and you and her savor the moment as you and aj 's tonge wrestled in a pashion at the lake side as you move your kisses down Aj's chest to here mare hood as you touch the pedals of your mare you hear her moan with pleasure. As you stop teasing her you move your muzzel close to her mare hood you like the sides and hear her moans now turn into screams of pleauser "block blitz I am gona -" she was not able to finish as her sex juices of her as you look at Aj she has a smile one her face and closed eyes." Now its ma turn sugar cube " she says. As she goes down your body and massage you stallion hood with her whoof. After the massage she now moves her head down to your now erect dick. As she puts her mouth over your crotch you moan in pleasure and movement as she moves her head you feel the peek of your climax " a Apple jack I a-am gona cumme" you say as you explode in her mouth. As you look at her you see her face with a grin as she moves close to your face you go back into a long kiss. Add Aj moved her mare hood over your erect cock and you enter inside of her you move up and down. As Aj moans in pleasure you feel the peek of the event. "Aj I am gona " "I know me to" she said. As you both cummed and you fell next to Aj as you both fought you breath you get up and head to the water with her as you clean up. After the quick clean up you both head to sweet Apple acers to drop off aj. "That was better than last time" aj says with a grin. "Ya that was something "you say. "It sure wwwaaaasss" she didn't get to finish as she passes out on the floor. "APPLE JACK !!!" > suprising news > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was Saturday morning you are in the hospital and waiting for news about how Aj is. Just thinking about her being user makes you feel sadness was over you thinking about. "BLITZ WHAT IS WRONG WITH AJ!" Big mac says with anger in his voice. "I DIDN'T DO ANY THING" you yell back at him "I don't know what happend I just was walking her home and then she just feel over the only time I remeber that happening was when I found out my mother was ---"you stopped before you said "pregnant". "Ma sister is what!" Big mac said as he pushed you against the wall. "Uggh big mac I didn't know until now" you said trying to calm down the stallion witch works as he puts you down. "Big Mac I was going to propose yesterday as we got to the farm I love her nothing is going to stop me" topic say with complete truth As you made you way to the room Aj was in you open the door you see Aj fast asleep on the bed. You move to her side to se how she is doing as you get close you hear her give a cute small snore that made you smile and be glade she is ok and not hurt. "Aj wakie wakie "you nudge her awake. As she wakes she has a smile that gives you a warm groping of love. "Blitz you talked to the doctor yet " she says with a questioning look. "No but you are probably going to tell me what's wrong"you say looking at her. "Ya you should know I'm". "Pregnant "you finish for her as she smiles at you answer. "How did you find out?" "When my mother was pregnant with my bro" you explain to Aj. "Really I thought you would be nervous"she says. "No but you will be after I ask you a question"you say while giving a stupid grin. "You know what that face reminded me of ma cousin braeburn"she says while giving a giggle. "Fine now my question"you say with a smaller smile" Will you marry me?" "I don't know what to say"she says. "But yes sugar cube" she says then comes close to your face and kiss passionatel. "Aaaawwwww"you hear from behind you. You see behind you see 5of Aj's best friends and you see soarin with his ARM around rainbow dashes neck. "I see that there is now to couples in the room now"you say while making rd and soarin blush. "Wow rainbow I didn't know you blush "Aj says while giving her a wink. "S-shutup"Aj says at Aj witch makes every one start cracking up. > discord > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- ''OK you we are getting back from the hospital and you already whant to get back to work'' you say as you and Aj get back to sweet apple Acer. She nodes her head and continues walking.''What is wrong with you Aj ''you say while laughing a little. ''Okay partner I know I am pregnant but I have work to do'' she was cut of by you putting you whoove to her mouth'' Aj calm down me and Big Mac got this all covered ok so go to bed and relax'' as we got up to the farm house applebloom jumps on your back and gives a big hug. ''Oh my celestia my sis is getting married'' applebloom says as she jumped off of you and hugs Aj. ''Ok who told you we were getting married wait was it granny smith because your grandma is like a mind reader'' you say as you put the little filly on your back. ''No it was big Mac and he sounded a little happy '' said the fillie. ''That is the second biggest suppries I got in my life and I feel happy''you say giving a smile and putting you forehove around aj's neck . "Wa would that be a supries sugarcube"Aj asked with a questioning look on her face. "Nothing to talk about right now" you say reinforcing to Chang the subject "hey Aj what was the name of the villian with the pink clouds" you say still trying to change the subject again but still failing. "Discord stop trying to change the subject what happen at the hospital" she says with a little anger in her tone. "Ok give a stallion a little credit for trying" you say with a small grin on your face. "Hey Aj blitz what is up" a lumbering voice comes from behind you. "Aaaahhhh"you jump up and latch on a branch of a tree. "What the fuck big mac don't do that crap" say while jumping down. "Big mac what happend at the hospital between you and blitz and don't lie blitz tried already. She says with anger in her voice. ''OK you win I got pushed against the wall and couphed some blood but we are OK so don't get angry ok it could have gone worse though your husband could be on a hospital bed'' you say giving a big grin and Mac trying to put on a grin of his own. ''OK but if something like that happens again I will take the kid with me and leave'' she says in a play full tone. ''Aj you have a weird sence of hummor''you say with nurvessnos. ''So what are we going to call him when it is born''you say with a questioning look. ''It why call the baby it?''she say in a questioning look. ''Ya it because we stilldon't know if it is a boy or girl'' you say in a stupid way. ''Ya you don't have to sound stupid talking I know now please now can we go home''she say with puppy dog eyes. ''Aaww that is so cute I see were apple bloom gets the face from''you say while laphing a bit. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At your house _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________"Woow we got every thing right"you say while relaxing on the bed of your room and Aj next to you. "Yeuup"Aj says while giving a little giggle. "Wait we forgot something"you say. "Really what "she says. "This "as you say that you put her stetson on her head and bring her in a passionate kiss. As the kiss breaks you hear screaming from outside. As you both go out side you and Aj see a pink cloud in the sky tall legged Bunny's and choaclate rain. "What the hell is going on hear" you scream. "I think it is discord again"she says. "I see your suspisons are true dear apple jack"you hear from behind you. "Okay discord what did you do and fix it now"Aj says in anger. "Oh this isn't really my fail this time"he says with sadness."I reformed remember and I didn't want to my magic just exploded I don't know what went wrong" "OK so if you made this happen than you can make it stop" you say while giving him a serious look. "I have tried but nothing worked trust me I am very annoyed"he says. "I am sorry discord but I have a idea but there I one and only solution"you say with a serious tone in your voice. "What is it I dont like being beat at my own game so do it and get over it"he says. "Aj sweetie get the girls and the element and come back home OK " you say giving a smile. "OK watch discord" she says while giving you a peck on a cheek. As she runs off you are stuck with the god of chaos and are sitting other pationtly waiting. "Hey discord can you give me a cup of milk or something it is hot out here"you say looking at him. "Fine but I am going to ask some questions thought"he says. "So how did you become the god of chaos?"you ask. "Was born this way never liked it"he says while having a sad look. "OK my turn how did your parents treat you"discord asked you. "They treated me like shit if you wanted to know they never loved me and only loved my brother when they died I felt like they deserved it but when my committed suicide I was crushed and a moved to applelousa and started a new" you say keeping a even face. "Woow that must have been horrible for you I actually met my parents I was a baby and I got adopted" discord says. "Really you must have had a life like mine I didn't know this but we might have more in common then I thought" you say " so why don't we be friends I needed this kind of talk you know that" "Ya I guess we do" he says. As you continued talking Aj and her friends came back with the elements and are looking at you and discord. "What are y'all talking about"Aj says with a questioning look. "Passing the time drinking choaclate milk and talking"you ad discord say at the same time. "OK why did you need us blitz" twilight asks. "Wheel I only saw my mom do this a couple of times to some living things she turned something into a pony"you say. "What OK I have only one request dont make it hurt"discord says. "OK so are you guys ready"you say. "OK ready I'm going let you guys use me as a figure for your magic like a manicuin and a dress" you say. After the transformation everything went back to normal but one thing discord is now a pony as he got back up he was a Grey stallion with a weird cutiemark. "OK so how do I look"discord asked. "You look my brother"you say tearing up. "WHAT!!"every pony screams. "No joke he is a splitting image" you say. "OK so blitz what was your brothers name blitz" discord asked. "His name was paradox"you say"it will kind of sut you well so you that name for now on so no pony gets suspicios OK ". " YA got it I have one question thought"'he says " I need a place to stay so any one have a place" "OK paradox follow me inside I have a guest room so stay her while you get reacuented with your new body"you say "that means no coming in power room with out knocking and I mean that seriously so follow me". "OK got it"he says. "Ohh I forgot to say something before you are not going to be able to use magic sorry " you say. "OK I really didn't like my magic" he says with a smile. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________"OK so you got every thing down and got all the rules" "Ya ya ya I got it count worry " "OK I will be back need to get wenona from the farm be back Aj I will be back" As you leave and go to the farm you give a big whistle that wenona hears and runs up to you and jumps on you. "OK get off of me I can't tack the cuitnes "you yell. As she gets off of you she sits down next to you as you get up. "OK girl let's go to your new home"you say. As you look around you see her wagging her tail. "I actual have to do something common"you say. As you walk up to the farm house you see apple bloom playing with sweetie bell and scotaloo. "Hey bloomy" you say giving a smile. "Hey blitz what is up ?" She asked. "Nothing just giving you something" you say giving a smile. "Really what is it" she says excitingly and practicly jumping. "Hear this is my stetson you might look better in it so hear you go" you say putting the hat on the fillie giving a soft smile. "Thanks blitz this is great" she says giving you a big smile. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "Babe I'm back and guess who I brought"you say. "Hey blitzy who did you--"she was cute off by wenona jumping on her. "Wenona what are you doing hear wait did you bring her hear"Aj says getting up and hugging you. "Ya I'm great" you say. As she goes up stairs you go you paradoxes room. "Yo paradox want to play some colt of duty black ops 2" > guys night out > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Today you and Aj are buying a suit and a dress for the upcoming wedding and you are a little well just nervous because of the shit that will probably happen and can't think of bad things. What might happen can be catastrophic. "Oh darrling this dress looks beautiful on you"rarity says walking around Aj. "Wow rarity it looks great but can you take away the jewels I just want a regular dress" Aj says. "Well darling it is your speci-"rarity didn't get to finish as she hears a a big snore from behind Aj. As Aj turns around she sees you sleeping almost passed out on the couch with her stetson on your face to block out the light. As she sees you she gives a small giggle and gets back to what she is doing. "Woow he passed out from bordem" Aj says with a grin. "I might join him later when it is over". "Well Aj you sure no how to pick them" "I heard that" "What how did he do that" "Well in school I could keep a conversation when I am asleep" you say still asleep and giving a big snore"and Aj you speack when you sleep it is quite cute". "Thanks I know I am"Aj says as she pecks you on the cheek. As they got back to work it took like about 2 more hours to finish and you wook up right as it finished. "Oh my celestia this is not my wife she was replaced with a angle" you say the corny complement in the whole world. "Really thats sweet"she says kissing you. "Hey Aj I am going to get paradox and soarin probably big Mac to if he wants" you say giving a smile. "OK be back soon " she says. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "So guys how about get some drinks" soar in says while whoove pumping in the air. "Yo sorry Soarin but I really don't drink I just don't want to get drunk anymore you already know from me getting the black eye" you say and he nodes"ya and big Mac I got in a bar fight stopped drinking after that never making that mistack again". "Really a bar fight how many points"he says. "About 5 stallions they all got 2 broken ribs and cracked jaws"you say rubbing the back of your neck. "And only a black eye wow impressed" paradox says "and when did you learn how to fight". "I don't want to talk about this"you say. "Yo blitz can you tell me something?" Soar in asked. "Sure what is it" "What happened between you and spitfire?"he asked and other was a long silence. "She cheated on me and she tried to get back but I was heart broken I didn't want to talk to any pony after that then that led to the bar fight" you explain. "Wait you went out with spitefire" big Mac said. "Ya and no more talking about her" you say. "OK so why don't we go do something like go camping that will be cool"paradox says. "We have a forest hear we are all brave strong and we can do anything just no girls". "Ya dude camping trip wait we need two more people before we go" you say" oh and we need to tell everypony before we go" _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "OK we got every thing spike"you say. "Ya I think so let's go"he says. "OK caremel you got all the food" "Ya we got food let's go already I am really getting bored" he says trying to sit in the chair but slipped and fell on the back of his head"aaaahh god that fucking hurt" "Well we just have to slip out door hay you might be good at to things"soar in says as we all laugh walking out the door. "OK guys to the everfree forest"you say. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At the clearing at the every free forest you and the gang get all set up and are all getting ready to tell one of those all pea your self scary movies that you can't tell because there are girls around(exepte raindow dash because she is one of those mares)and can't get through the story. "OK guys who is going first except paradox because he is the god of chaos( if you guys didn't read the last chapter you will be lost) OK who is going first" you say. "I would let's get started it was a cold night in a mansion at the edge of a hill in appleousa there was five friends that were getting Bord and disieded to go and explore the mansion. As they entered they were scared as they entered by a scream of a girl and take long the boy in the middle 'please help he is coming he is coming for me please help' the girl said as she still shaking ' OK who is coming after you-'he wasn't able to finish as he looked behind her to see a tall skinny pony taller than celestia with no eyes and no mouth just nothing as they stared at there vision started going blurry and one buy one they all fell down before the two of them passed out they ran out of the mansion into the woods but as they entered he right behind them. "Aaaaahhhhh" you scream and everyone except soarin scream in fear and spike ya he fainnted from fright. "Woow that was awesome hey soar in I think we killed spike" as you laugh. And fall on the floor holding your gut with soar in. "OK guy no more scary story's we agent a little over bored let's go to bed" you say while putting spike in his sleeping bag. > need new book picture > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- To everybronie and pegasister I need a new book picture I have tried making a pic but always fail I need some help if I am holding a competition who ever sends in the best pic I will add there oc in my next book or final chapter and be in the sequel with my follower thank you my email is bbonet98@gmail.com or send in messages on the messages. Thank you it will be over in 2 weeks so get drawing. Oh I almost forgot I need the name and details of your oc. > new guy in town > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was a regular day in ponyville you were working in the apple feel and nothing was going on Aj is at home relaxing and paradox is some were probably getting drunk for the 5th time he has been a pony. As the day went down you just are helping Mac move some apples to the apple stand as you made your way to the stand you see a sand colored Pegasus with a black mane looking very lost. "Yo dude are you lost?"you ask. "Ya do you know were town hall is I am new hear and you can see I am lost" he says. "OK partner follow me yo Mac I am going to help some pony can you hold down the fort" you say "Eeyyup"he says. "OK follow me"you say. "So you lived hear for how long"the leagues asked. "Ya for like five months and I am still happy the day I got hear"you say with confidence. "Really wow that must have WAIT who is that?" He says while looking at a butterscotch peagus with pink mane. "That's fluttershy she lived hear before I can know of"you say giving a smile. "Wait flutter shy we went to flight camp together oh wait don't tell me rainbow dash is hear to"he says as you continue walking. "Ya why don't you say high"you say with a smile. As he walked over he seemed nervous about talking to her but goes back to reguler. --THE PEAGUSES POINT OF VIEW--- As you walked over you tapped her on the shoulder and gives a 'eeeppp' in supries and hides behind her main in a ball. "Hey flutter shy do you remember me" you say giving a smile. "Omy celestia dust storm"she says giving you a huge. --back to blitz-- "Hey flutter shy I see you know this peguses who is he" you say giving a questioning look. "Oh blitz this is dust storm he was my second closest friend in flight camp" flutter shy says. "Ya me,her and dash did almost everything together" dust says smiling. "OK so flutter shy can you tack your friend hear to town hall because me and Mac have work to do so I have to go OK" you say "Sure buy blitz" she says as her and dust walks off. ---dust storms view it is going to be the rest of the story---- "So how have you been flutters it has been like about 5 years" you say "Ya how have you been I remember that you left for some adventure"she says. "Ya moving along alone no beside me"you say in a sad tone. "Oh poor thing now you don't have to be"she says giving you a huge. Your heart melts from the feeling and warmth of her. "Thanks flutter shy I needed that"you say embracing her. As you both leave the embrace you are stuck starring into watch others eyes. As you both move closer your noses touch and as you both get even closer your lips touch and are both in a deep passionate kiss and you feel that you both are there for what feels like hours. As you both break the kiss you both have a deep crimson blush. "Uumm that was something"you say stiil shocked. "Ya and look we are hear so I will see you soon" she says rushing off. "YAA BUY!"you yell. "OK time to buy a home" you say to yourself giving a grin. > one day left > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- As the day started you were still working Aj was talking to her family about how she was so exited that she is getting marryed tommorow and every pony was there but you were not the only pony helping you were with soarin,caramel,and dust was there helping and it really took some weight off your shoulders and really helped with preperations. "Yo guys let's take a break I need to talk to Aj"you say. "Ya go I have to go to flutter shy" dust says as he flys away. "Ya and I need to tell skittels that I am getting the batular party ready"he says. "No I am not having a batular party I really think I am going to stay with Aj we never had time alone I am thinking of bringing her to diner"you say with a smile. "OK man just don't have to much fun" caramel stays with a sly smile. "Ya ya ya she is already pregnant"you say with a smile. As they leave you head over to Aj and she is talking to a stallion that you have never seen before. "Hey Aj who is this" you say with a questioning look on your face. "Blitz this is my ex coltfriend black streak" she said in a discusted tone. "Ya and I don't believe she fell in love with a stupid fillie" he said with disgust. "OK man what is your problem" you say. "I don't know but I can get my mind around the fact that she fell in love with a idiot" as he said that it hit a nerve and made you angry. "OK streak shut up and get off my family's property" Aj said with a scream. "No I deserve way this idiot marryed this bi-"he didn't say anything else as you struck him in the jaw with your right hoof. "Now get the fuck out of hear before you regret calling my wife a bitch"you say with anger. "What the fuck is going on out hear"you hear big Mac say as he comes from behind you. "This ass called my wife a bitch and he got a hoof to the face" you say. "Get the buck off my farm streak you are not allowed near hear and my sister and brother in law or I swear you will regret it and if you pop up at the wedding the guards will escort you." He says in full rage. "G-got it mac "he says in a nervous tone. As he said that he ran off and didn't look back. As you look at Aj she had some tears and embraced you in the hug still tears in her eyes as she looked up at you. "Are you OK aj " you say to her. She shacks her head and tittens the hug. "Its OK Aj we are going home we need to talk"you say giving a jentle smile. She nodes and you both walk back home. "Aj tell me what happened between you to tell me the truth please" you say. "It happened 2 years ago me and him went to get some drinks and he got to drunk and asked if we could have sex. When I said no he got enraged and hit me over the head". She said with tears now coming out of her eyes." And he didn't take no as a answer and he tried to to rape me"she finished saying and she bringed you into a scared in brace" but he wasn't able to until a stallion came over and hoofed him in the back of the head". "Wait was the stallion wearing a black hoddie" you say with a suspicious look. "Ya how did you know"she asked. "Well hello nice to know I helped someone that night" you say giving her a smile. "Really you helped me back then"she says tightening the hug. " eeyup now don't I deserve a reward for helping those years back" you say picking her head up. "Yes you do" she says with a half closed eyes" now how do I repay you" she says with a sly smile. "Aj you should know we can't do that your pregnant and to match stress can me bad"you say. "OK but you can't stop me from doing this"she says as she looks lips with you. As you both deepen in the kiss you feel something trying to go in your mouth as you feel it you notise it is Aj's tounge and you you join her as both your tounges wrestle you mind is in a completed blank and nothing can ruin it. As the kiss breaks their is a trail of saliva is connected to both of your muzzels. "Hey Aj we should get home I will make dinner OK"you say with a smile. "OK but don't forget about paradox" she says with a giggle. -- at your house --- "Wenona come hear girl" you say giving a wisstel and she comes running and tackeling you. "OK wenona down"you say still when she is on top of you. "Yo paradox we are home what do you want for dinner" you say while he is sitting down playing colt of duty. "How about we have some grilled chases I never had that in a long time" he says still not tacking his eyes off the screen. "OK but after me and you are playing zombies I got the new dlc" you say giving a smile. --after dinner you,parodox and wenona are sitting on the couch--- "That was awesome we got to round 45 on our first time we are bosses" paradox says hoof pumping in the air. "Ya that was awesome now it is me and Aj's turn to watch a movie" you say giving a smirk. "Ya ya ya ya now go get her but don't get lovey dove on me" he says. "Ok " you say. As you walk up stairs you see Aj fast a sleep in your bed. 'Awww' you say under your breath. As you go up to her you go under the blanket with her and embracing her. You peck her on her fore head and you drift asleep but not before wenona jumps on the bed and lays down at the end of the bed. > wedding day > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- The day has come the day of the wedding it is being held at sweet apple racers and you met all of Aj's family and the you and Aj are back at the boutique and rarity is helping Aj with her dress. You left to sweet apple acer as you get there you see every thing is there your friends your new family and your new life ahead. You move up t the alter every pony takes there seats. As you turn you see five of you best friends soarin ,caramel,dust,mac,and spike. As you look, at the audience the music starts the music. [youtube=http://m.youtube.com/index?&desktop_uri=%2F] As she walks down the lane you can feel a smile coming a cross your face as you see her. And behind her 3 fillies applebloom,scotaloo,and swite bell are the flower girls. As she steps on the alter your heart rate increases and you feel like you are dreaming. As you both stand there facing watch other celestia starts talking. "Mares and gentlecolts we are gathered hear today to embrace the is to in loving marriage"she says ect. "Will you blitz field take apple Jake to your wife" "I do" "And do you apple Jake do you take blitz field to be your husband" "I do" "And now with power invested in me I pronounce you husband and wife"she finished saying and both of you are now deep passionate kiss. As you finish the kiss you look at the crowed and the party gets started. "Yo tombstone scratch let's get this party"you yell and the music starts and every one is dancing. You quietly walk to the field and stand there looking at one star in particular that you stare at every day a star that changes sharp and color one star that your parents bought you on your 5th birthday the day your parents died in a fiery death. "Yo blitz what is up its your were ng day chest up and what are you looking at " dust said as you pointed to the star. "Wow its beautiful man let's get back thought it is you and your wifes dance come on"he said as you both walk away. --2min later--- "Hello hint how is the party going " you say coming from behind her. "It is really good but it it was a little bad without you" she says coming up to you giving you a peck on the cheak. "How about we get our last dance and go on our honeymoon"you say giving her a peck. "Ok let's go and have fun"she says with a smile that warms your heart. (Sorry I don't do dance scenes) ---4 min later ---- As you and Aj say your goodbye you guys rushed out and got in the carriage and you traveled to the most relaxing place you can think of the crystal falls in the crystal empire. As you both get there Aj is a sleep in her gown and is shivering.as you look at one of the gifts you open it up and there is a leather jacket with AJ's cities mark on it and the other with a apple and a lighting bolt striking a Apple ( the jakets are made of fake leather) as you take off your suit and help aj with her gown you put her maker on and yours on. As you look at one more present that said you name on it as you open it there is a dark blue stetson. ---30 min later--- Apple Jake point of view. As you wake up you see that you are on the lap of your colt friend with your stetson on your head and a jaket with your cities mark on it. As you look up he is awake and giving a smile. "Hello bony how was your sleep"he sated kissing your forehead. --blitz point of view-- "It was good but how did I get in the jaket"she said with a questioning look. "When you fell a sleep you were shivering and rarity got use jakets I put yours on and i put mine on and guess wear we are"you say with a grin. "I don't know but is it private"she said in a seducive tone and half closed eye lids. "It sure is but were no to having se- actually screw it this is our honeymoon let's have some fun"you say kissing her. "Ok but you are carrying me it is more romantic that way"she sated kissing you. As you kiss back you fell Aj's tonge creeping into your mouth and both of you are now in a wrestling match of pleasure. As you break the kiss there is a trail of saliva trailing from both of your nuzzels. As the chariet stops you get out you carry Aj on your back to the cabin and when you get there a note is on the door. 'Dear blitz and Aj this cabin is wear I lived when I was traveling I hope you guys like the present dust storm'. "Wow that was sweet of him write blitzey"Aj sated looking at the note. "It sure is and we still got a honeymoon to enjoy we will thank him when we get back" you say giving aj a seducive smile. "Ok sugar cube but I'm on top"she sated with a sexy smile. > today is the day > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Shit shit shit i am going to be late for my own kids birth come on train move faster"you say while on the train back to ponyville and you just got the news. "Hey blitz relax you are going to make it"dust storm says while smacking you with his hoof. "We will be there in no time" "Was the smack really nesisary" "Yes yes it was" "Wow you fucking suck"you say Before he could say anything the train stops at ponyville train station and you burst out off the train in a flag galliope. As you get in the hospital you ask were Apple Jake is and you rush into the door. As you look at her she is has a grin that makes your heart soar. She is holding 2 adorable babys two of them are colts. "Oh my celestia I have we have kids"you say holding one of the babys. "I named on Apple buck and you pick the others name"she said holding Apple buck. "Ok I think we should name him Apple blitz"you say holding him with your forewhoove. As you come up to your wife you hug her and the doctor comes in with the nurse behind him. "I see the father is hear now may I please have the name of your twins"he says levetating work and board to him. "There names are Apple buck and Apple field"you say smiling. "Ok now congratulations on your kids"as he finished there comes a knoking on the door. "Come in"you say. As the door opens there is all you and Aj's friends come in the room. "Aaaaaaawwwwwwww"they say when they see the kids. As the day goes on you tell them there names and you fell the happiness come back to you. (Sry guys if I forgot to tell you that blitz was in cantorlot looking at his parent graves.) ------ 5years later ------ "Kids come on we have to get you too school"you say while you and Aj rush around the house while parodox is on his lazzy ass. "Coming dad we are just puting on our sweaters"they say goin down the rails of the stairs and you catching them. "Guys how many times have I told you not to go down the rail"you say with a angry look but not really angry. "Sorry dad we didn't mean to please don't be made"they said at the same time. "Woow sugar cube I didn't know she you were so strikte"Aj said coming up to you and you look around with a smile and a wink and puting back on the angry face. "And I like it now kids come over hear and give your dad a big hug" you say smiling at them. As you said that they had smirkes on there faces and hug you. "You guys know I still can't tell you to appart and don't forgget we are going to canterlot so we can pay our respects to your grand parents"you say telling sad still. "Ok dad by mom by wenona"they said kissing there mom and petting wenona. Before they could leave a knoking on the door comes and two fillies are there with one rainbow streak and rainbow dancer.