Visiting

by Mixin Husky

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How did this happen? Who did it? And does Applejack have to find the person? Only to find out he's been under her nose this whole time.

Fluttershy has come to visit Applejack, only to throw up. She's been taken to a doctor only to be giving bad news. (I don't think it's mature but to be safe.)

An One Hour One Shot.

Ages:
Fluttershy and Applejack: 22.
Big Mac: 26
Braeburn: 24
Applebloom: 18

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Sweet Apple Acres. In Summer is possibly the best place to go, high mountains to relax on and not to mention the sun shows it's best showing around there. Applejack had planned for Fluttershy to come down for the day as for the rest of the Elements. Pinkie was babysitting the cake's twins, Twilight was spending time with her sister in law. Rarity went to Canterlot with new designs for Sapphire Shores and for Rainbow Dash, she had the feather flu. So the only person free were Fluttershy. Not to mention Braeburn's surprise visit.

Applejack finished her chores for the day and laid down against a tree, she happily sighed as the sun were at it's highest point. She then heard a faint voice that seemed to be right next to her.

"Hi Applejack."

She turned around and yelped jumping back as Fluttershy were next to her smiling. "Hiya Sugar."

"Did I scare you... I'm sorry."

"No um.. you surprised me."

"Oh.. Okay." She smiled as Applejack returned to laid down.

"Fluttershy... Where was you two days ago?"

"I was out, with Rainbow Dash"

"Okay, anywhere nice?"

"To drunken melody down in Manehatten."

"Fancy."

"Yeah, but I had too much to drink. I don't remember it very well."

"That doesn't sound like you."

"That's what Rarity said as well."

"Where was Rainbow?"

"She went home, she started to burn up."

"That's when she got the feather flu then." Fluttershy nodded.

Applejack sat up as Fluttershy crossed her legs letting her wings relax. "I've been getting strange wing spasms lately." She said.

"What do you mean?"

"I mean when I'm too relaxed my wings start tensing up so I have to stretch them out which only hurts even more."

"Can I see?"

"Sure."

Fluttershy turned around so her back was facing Applejack. "Okay now, slowly spread them out."

She did as she was told, first she lifted her top over her head so Applejack can see her wings and slowly spread them apart, Shy moaned in pain as she did. Applejack spotted a gash down her back where the wings connect to her body so she placed her hand there.

"Ahh." Shy closed her wings as Applejack looked at her hand. Blood.

"Okay Sugar look."

Shy turned around to see the blood. "Oh my.. Is that from my wings?" Fluttershy asked as she put her top back on.

"Yeah, a small cut... Well gash. Come on into the house I'll fix it."

She nodded as the two got up and walked back to the Apple's house. Arriving they saw Big mac and Braeburn around the kitchen table.

"Where's Applebloom?"

"She's down at Scootaloo's remember?" Mac said as she looked up.

"Um... oh yeah."

Fluttershy smiled at the two guys as Applejack lead her upstairs.

"Hey your sister's friend is cute.."

"Don't think about it Braeburn."

...

Fluttershy took of her shirt and let Applejack sort her out.

"Thanks AJ."

"No problem Flutters. After all the things you've done for me. You earned it."

Then Fluttershy lost color in her face, Applejack turned around and dropped the towel. "Fluttershy?"

She ran to the toilet, lifted the seat and vomited. Applejack quickly moved Fluttershy's hair out of the way and gently stroked her back.

"It's okay let it out..."

She did as she were told letting more vomit escape her. Big Mac were off to bed only to hear retching, he opened the bathroom door to see that Fluttershy were leaning over the toilet, wings spread and hair being held back by Applejack who was stroking her back.

"Is she okay?"

"Yeah I think... I'm taking you to the doctors."

After Fluttershy stopped she flushed for the tenth time and went downstairs, her arm over her stomach and Applejack with her. Braeburn were cleaning the table and watched the two walk out of the house as Mac came back downstairs.

"What's wrong with her?" Burn asked.

"I think she's gotten ill."

"Ya think."

...

It's been 2 hours since Applejack and Fluttershy left for the doctors and being a supportive big brother and friend he stayed downstairs with Applebloom, Braeburn went to bed as he had to clean the barn out the next day. The door swung open as Fluttershy ran off upstairs and into the secondary spare room, Applejack walked in.

"What's the matter with her."

Applejack looked up as she sat down. "She's pregnant."

The two gasped. "Really?" Mac asked.

"Eeyup." Applejack said as Applebloom stared down.

"How though... She's into mares."

"How did you know?"

"She tell's me everything Applejack, and her status is in a relationship with Rarity, no hard."

"Okay... Anyways I've contacted Rarity, she's talking to Sapphire about it."

"To let her come home?" Bloom asked.

Applejack nodded as Applebloom get a message, she took her phone out and smiled. Her fingers worked away at the touchscreen.

"Who you texting at this time?" Mac asked.

"Sweetie Belle."

Soon they heard loud knocking's. Before she could have got up the door opened. Stood there was Rarity, she looked out of breath.

"Sorry- Where.. Is.. She?" She said between breaths.

"Second spare room."

Rarity ran to the stairs as the door closed by it's self, she ran up them and to the second spare room like Applejack said. Getting to the room she heard sobbing and. "Rarity's going to kill me."

She knocked against the door and opened it. "Fluttershy?"

"Rarity! I thought you were in Canterlot."

She walked to the bed as Fluttershy stood up. "Applejack contacted me."

"So you know?" She looked down.

"Of course I do, but I'm not going to kill you. I'm going to kill Rainbow Dash for leaving you in Manehatten for two days." She smiled.

"I knew I had to much to drink."

"No dear. I know your drinking. You have one or two then stop. Someone must have spiked one of your drinks when Rainbow left. They must have known you were with her and waited."

"Oh."

"Yeah. We'll get some rest then go down to the Drunken Melody tomorrow."

"Okay."

Drunken Melody

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The sun shun brightly and Rarity rolled over, to her surprise Fluttershy were gone. She sat up and looked around her room then up at the clock. half past 10. " She's up early." Rarity thought just then she heard the toilet flush and walking downstairs. She got up and walked over to the drawers the place she had gotten changed last night. Rarity got changed, slipped her shoes on and brushed her hair as she went into the bathroom to brush her teeth. She levitated the brush and placed toothpaste on, she started to brush only to hear a knock against the bathroom door.

She spat out the paste and turned around to see Applejack. "Morning."

"Hi Applejack." Rarity cleaned the toothbrush. "You need anything?"

"Yeah the guy who did this to Fluttershy. Cause I'm gonna find him and wish he never laid hands on her."

"What do you mean?" Rarity asked as she styled her hair.

"Let's say he wouldn't be able to walk when I'm done."

"I'm glad you want to help, but it's a bit harsh dontcha think?"

"Yeah, but he raped your girlfriend..."

"Don't remind me, but if we do find him, he's going to jail. If you find him, do whatever feels right to you." Rarity said as she walked out of the bathroom and downstairs as Applejack sighed.

Downstairs Fluttershy were already ready to go. Rarity smiled as she got up.

"Ready?"

"Ready."

...

It had been 4 hours since they left and Braeburn finished cleaning the barn only to hear soft moaning, he walked over to the corner of the barn which was hidden by hay bales only to spy Applebloom and Sweetie Belle. "Um Applebloom?"

She gasped and turned around. She didn't have a top on nor Sweetie Belle.

"What are you doing here?"

"Cleaning the barn. What are you doing?"

"Hanging with Sweetie Belle."

"Hey Braeburn."

"Hi... Um"

"Don't tell Applejack and defiantly don't tell Mac." Bloom said.

"Okay." He walked away uncertain what to do.

...

"You sure can."

"Thanks dear." Rarity said as the mare leads them to the back room.

"Right what date?"

"Two days ago."

"Right.... Here."

The video showed Fluttershy sat down with her drink and Rainbow across from her.


"I'm going home, Fluttershy." Dash said.

"Why?"

"I don't feel well."

"Okay then."

Rainbow got up gave Fluttershy a hug then left as someone sat down across from her.

"Hey there beautiful."

"Um.. Hi."

"I see this is your only second drink tonight."

"Yeah.. Um I'll be back soon. I need to use the bathroom."

Fluttershy got up leaving her drink and belongings and went into the bathroom. As for the guy he pulled something out of his pocket and placed it in her drink.

"That will do it."

About a minute went and Fluttershy came back, she sat down and had some of her drink. It took effect quickly.

"So.... What's your name?"

"Flutter... Shy." She began to sound stupid and dizzy.

"What are you into. Sexuality?"

"Um... I'm in a... Relationship with.... I forgot."

"Come on I'll take you home." Fluttershy stood up and grabbed her belongings and left with him.

He lead her behind the building. "I don't think... This is the way... Home."

"I don't care." He pulled her closed.

"I want your body...."


Fluttershy slammed her fist down which made the footage stop.

"You were raped?" The bar mare asked.

"Must have been."

"Wait a sec doesn't that guy look like..."

"Shit."

...

Buzz Buzz.

Applejack looked down at the table and answered the phone. "Hey..."

"What!"

"Right I'll deal with him."

Applejack forgot to hang up and stormed off upstairs. She knocked against the door. He answered.

"Hey Applejack."

"Don't hey Applejack me. Braeburn!"

"What's gotten into you?"

"You!"

"What did I do?"

"You fucking raped my friend!"

"So she shouldn't have left me with her drink."

She slapped him. "I want you to leave!"

"I'm not leaving."

Applejack screamed and started punching him. She were quick in action kicking him in the stomach as he bent over in pain only to grab her lag and push it up as high as it can go. This made Applejack fall to the ground she was kicking as one of them hit Braeburn in the face braking his nose. Braeburn kicked Applejack in the gut making her gag.

"BIG MAC!" Applejack shouted as he kicked her in the face.

"You shouldn't have tried to kick me out."

"BIG MAC!"

She got another kick to her face and dragged to the bed. He grabbed the rope above his bed and tied her to the end of the bed and grabbed the lamp.

"BIG MA..."

He threw the lamp and shattered within collision, then Big Mac ran in.

"Apple..."

He saw her sister covered in blood.

"What did you do!"

"She attacked me."

Mac ran out and to a phone. He called the police.

"Hello I need your help... Please hurry... Sweet Apple"

Braeburn smashed a glass bottle over his head.

"Bitch don't call the police on me."

...

"Sweet Apple Acres boys!"

They got into the cars and headed towards the farm.

...

"Right head back to Sweet Apple Acres Fluttershy I'll get Twilight."

She nodded and took the short cut to the farm arriving in mere seconds, she walked in. The place were dark. She walked in only to slip on water and land on the ground.

"Shit."

Getting up she noticed glass in her arm. "Ah."

Then the light switched on.

"Braeburn! Leave me alone!"

"Fluttershy... Sorry. Flutterslut. Your sweet. Come here and I'll get rid off the glass."

She started to walk over when she hears sirens and then the door kicked down. Braeburn grabbed Fluttershy by the neck and switched of the light.

"Shhh." He said quietly holing her mouth shut.

"Hello!" One said.

"Turn on the lights Idiot."

He flicked the lights on as Braeburn helt a knife to Fluttershy's throat.

"Stop he has a hostage."

"That's right. A pregnant one as well."

"Watch out guys. One wrong move and she's dead same with the unborn child."

The captain of the police force walked in.

"Careful Armor."

"Okay what's the matter."

"The attacker has a hostage. Who is pregnant he claims."

"Alright... Um what do you want?"

"I want her child!"

"You're not going to take her child." Shinning said.

"I'm the one who gave her it... Ahh."

Fluttershy bit down on his hand to let her speak. "He raped me!"

"Shut it!" He placed the blade on her neck making a small cut.

"Ahhhh..." Her mouth were covered up again and the blade pointing out to the officers.

"I'm not letting her go until the child is born!"

Shinning spotted Applejack with a rope and her finger over her lips.

"Let her go so she can make sure it's healthy."

"I'M NOT LETTING HER GO SO FUCK O..." Applejack got the rope around his neck and kicked his legs making him fall to the ground.

Fluttershy ran over to Shinning as he hugged her. "Thanks Applejack."

The Twilight and Rarity ran in. "Braeburn." Twilight said as he laughed.

"How's your little one."

"He's fine and you can suck it."

"That's not nice."

"And it's not nice to fucking rape someone but you did it."

Shinning picked Braeburn up as Fluttershy gave Rarity a hug.

"You going away for a long time."

"Yeah, yeah."

The police left with Braeburn as Twilight turned to Fluttershy.

"Okay you have two choices. Keep the child, or get rid of it."

"I'm going to keep the child." Rarity smiled. "I don't want to kill it, even if it belongs to Braeburn."

"Okay."

"Now lets clean the blood from your neck... and Applejack." She looked at her. "Thanks."

"No problem."