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It has been five years since the last of the Element bearers has passed away.
Well, at least I think it was about five years, probably six now give or take.
Everyone calls me Blunt, I'm one of the various Pegasus guards that can be found milling about the palace when Princess Twilight suddenly snaps and drags me down one of the corridors by the collar of my armor.

"This place is boring! Let's go find something interesting!"

Oh joy.

Inspired by The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 25 )

First Pinkie and now Twilight? Wow, Haruhi is popular lately.

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Mind linking me to the Pinkie one you've mentioned? Never seen it yet and now curious~

Nice touch, setting the cake height to e.

I don't think Twi is out of character here. How likely is it that she'd remember a minor offense committed by a Guard, five years later? Probability: 100 percent. And she's always been at least somewhat prone to doing unexpected things in response to circumstances that other ponies might simply shrug off.

2693469 Sure, here I also have written one, it's on my profile if you want to read it.

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I'll be sure to read it ASAP...
But it's like 5am over in NZ at the moment XD

Not at all out of character. That kind of passive amusement is the sort of thing I would expect from twilight+95 years.

You have peaked my interest. Continue.

Stupid mobil site. Cant find emoticons.

This looks like its gonna be fun! :pinkiehappy:
I can't help but wonder at the reaction that 'Blunt' will have to Alicorn!TS actually being God!TS.
If thats the case anyway..... :pinkiesmile:

Also...... :rainbowhuh: a fellow Kiwi? Huh....

little disappointed that you didn't go with him being a guard for her and spending long periods of time together. no interaction, just close proximity. remember, haruhi didn't turn a guy down who asked her out. and kyon never asked her out, just kept talking to her. then gave her an idea, which she dragged him into.

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Do remember that Haruhi technically met Kyon in middle school under the alias John Smith.

On a side note: This is not a direct rip of Haruhi Suzumiya, most of the ideas and such is inspired by Haruhi and the characters in it but I don't plan on following the plot of TMOHS to a huge degree although it will influence this story.

And also, the reason for her suddenly dragging him along will be explained (hopefully anyways) in the next chapter (which I am currently working on).

Good idea, keeping it in character for the guard. I like this story. More.

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NEVER CALL LUNA A LOON! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Hmm Twilight thought he would make a good element of laughter because of his pratfalls. While that may or may not be true, I can say that if he actually goes out and finds a Laughter, Generosity, Honesty, and Kindness, that he qualifies for Loyalty just for doing the job.

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Huh, fruit for thought. Still sorting out the kinks with the laughter arc but got the basic idea down, main arc should continue next week once exams are done~

Yes please. I like this very much.

Will there be romance at some point? There has to be a romance genre in this story.

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Was considering it, started working on these stories again since the holidays are kicking in but if there was any shipping involved it would probably just be a minor point and not really a main piece so i'm not sure if it would qualify for the romance tag...
By the way, Big fan of your story 'But I AM evil', truly brilliant work.

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I re-read my comment, now I myself am confused...

Oh god that is hilarious! Can't wait for your next update!:rainbowlaugh:

Poor Luna, she gets no respect and neither does Blunt is seems.

well this is starting out nicely.

this....this was a very good chapter good sir, I like how you wrote this. every chapter gains more and more of my interest good sir, I shall read on.

well tis seems interesting, I have no idea what's going on but please continue, I want more.

I am still here just waiting and hoping for a grand return to this fic.

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