An account of how Night Light and Twilight Velvet, parents of Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle, got together and fell in love (and how Princess Celestia helped).
Great story so far. I may or man not have read the line “…And last but not least… a toast to me! Because I’m just always that awesome.” and asked one of my friends what the hell he was doing in your story. Also, the lipstick part had me pounding my desk laughing. That was hilarious.
Nothing!! He's in the military!!! After a drunk night out, two hours late is early!!! I should know, I was three hours late this morning and my Flt Sgt asked why I wasn't still in bed!!
*Reads the title* I prefer 'Agitated, not distressed' myself. X3 Reading the first chapter, at least, it doesn't seem to be just a clop-fic, so I'll read. I can always skip over the clop parts, right?
2476629 You're sgt was a pansy who let you get away with way to much, lol. We sent my nephew a letter & drew a picture on the outside of the envelope. Written wit the pic were the words "hey Drill Sgt, Steven says you're going to easy on him." The Sgt made him carry the letter around in a little plastic bag for the rest of Basic and any time he was asked for it he had to bust it out. If he didn't have it the Drill SGt put him and the rest of his team through hell. Lol!!!!! He wasn't very happy with us.........
Very very interesting premise. The extended Twilight family needs more love. I don't believe I've read a story about their past before, so this should be interesting!
Somewhere in the lofty metropolis of Canterlot, in a high-rise apartment complex facing the dawn, a young Unicorn stallion named Night Light awoke in crippling agony.
A perfect way to start a perfect day, I always say~
Are Pommel's lines supposed to be hidden? It took me a while to notice it wasn't just empty space between the blue and the purple lines. Not sure if it's a clever take on not properly remembering a drunken conversation or if the text colour just doesn't work with FiMfic's background colour. (In dark mode)
This is going to the top of my read later list. The premise bears too much of a striking resemblance to a scene in one of my stories to pass up reading this. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
How I have waited for this moment.
And still I want more!
Great start to the story!
Favoriting and upvoting! Definitely looking forward to some more.
I like it!
And it is wonderfully refreshing to again come across a well-written story with sex just another aspect, if an admittedly large one.
Ah, what the hell, I'll give it a shot.
-Mis
well color me interested
whatever color that is...
And guess what happened the next night... XD
Great story so far. I may or man not have read the line “…And last but not least… a toast to me! Because I’m just always that awesome.” and asked one of my friends what the hell he was doing in your story. Also, the lipstick part had me pounding my desk laughing. That was hilarious.
princess Celestia is twilight velvet.....am i right? if you are cool with fulfilling my need to guess an entire plot by just its short description.
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That would be interesting, if it wasn't for the fact that Twilight Velvet and Celestia have been in the same room before, three times now.
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Shadow clone no jutsu!
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MORE! Shadow clone no jutsu!
I need more of this story!
Looks like Velvet's only gonna get more into it later. If you know what I mean...
Thanks for an amazing story, man. Hope to get MUCH more from it.
Nothing!! He's in the military!!! After a drunk night out, two hours late is early!!! I should know, I was three hours late this morning and my Flt Sgt asked why I wasn't still in bed!!
Vodka Martin, shaken not stirred
2476629 Oh, my friend was 10 minutes late and 'Seal Clubbing' happened. Seal Clubbing, is hard to explain.
*Reads the title* I prefer 'Agitated, not distressed' myself. X3 Reading the first chapter, at least, it doesn't seem to be just a clop-fic, so I'll read. I can always skip over the clop parts, right?
I died.
2476201 I don't think I've seen a mare want the D so badly
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Twilight Sparkle with the Encyclopedia Britannica glued to her face.
She wants the D. The whole 45000000 pages of it.
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No, twilight velvet is sparkles' mom.
He gave the right answer there. When you buck up, you fess up, then fix it. Good officer.
“Hehe, I love it when you go all knight in shining armor for me."
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When you fuck up, you lie, you lie until your lips turn to dust and you cant lie no more.
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What would that require... lifting one leg up, 90 degrees in the air, while keeping the others level on the ground? Ow.
Something like this?
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And no, Pommel. I don't think we HAVE caught you doing worse.
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Well if he was hung like a horse....er....more than a horse he could just bend it like a firehose.
LOL! Pommel is an absolute twit, I loved the mailbox bit!
A great start with a lovely combo of various emotions. I eagerly plan to read the next chapter.
Commence read.
Looks like the start of an enjoyable read.
4554171 agreed.
2476629 You're sgt was a pansy who let you get away with way to much, lol. We sent my nephew a letter & drew a picture on the outside of the envelope. Written wit the pic were the words "hey Drill Sgt, Steven says you're going to easy on him." The Sgt made him carry the letter around in a little plastic bag for the rest of Basic and any time he was asked for it he had to bust it out. If he didn't have it the Drill SGt put him and the rest of his team through hell. Lol!!!!! He wasn't very happy with us.........
2487432 Don't drop the soap, boy! Squat if ya have to!
I like that side of Velvet.
6525986 And years from now she'll tell her kids how its obscene to get drunk and she was always a proper lady growing up.
Very very interesting premise. The extended Twilight family needs more love. I don't believe I've read a story about their past before, so this should be interesting!
If nothing else Pommel at least knows how to end them rightly.
I doubt anyone who will see this will get the joke but oh well.
A perfect way to start a perfect day, I always say~
At first I thought this Pommel pony was a particularly brazen Coco Pommel.
Are Pommel's lines supposed to be hidden? It took me a while to notice it wasn't just empty space between the blue and the purple lines. Not sure if it's a clever take on not properly remembering a drunken conversation or if the text colour just doesn't work with FiMfic's background colour. (In dark mode)