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Holla Jolla
I'm that one black guy. "Easy reading is damn hard writing." Nathaniel Hawthorne
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...You seriously think you're a fluke?
I call bullshit. Seriously. Bullshit. I don't even like clop, but that was fucking fabulous.
This is glorious.
Sweet jesus that was a great story, i didn't really mind the fact that it was a clopfic but that fact that it was a good story overall
LOVE IT ( in a high pitch girly scream)
I'm sold. Followin ya, brah.
This was AWESOME! You actually have a real knack for writing these types of stories, so don't put yourself down about your talent. Seriously, this was one of the best I've read (aside from some spelling and grammar errors that seem to be in most stories). Great distraction in the beginning with the description of the mare that sounds like Cheerilee, only for it to turn out NOT to be her. I love it when writers mess with the readers like that. Also I'm glad you did this in a slow and sweet sort of style, not the run-of-the-mill "I know what to do cause I've done it with everyone in every way and have all the experience" type of clop stories. Those stories show no passion for writing or for the real subject of the tale and that's nothing like what I just finished reading.
its good
Shit <--- This word right here, was just perfect! It was so well placed, so hilarious, so... so... simple
Haha, usually I'm not all that much into clopfics, but this was glorious
-Glassed
well it's not romance or anything like that. It's... simple,as you put it :D and sometimes, simple is good
I do not see how you can think of yourself as a fluke my good sir
this is bloody amazing
Yep. Definitely reminds of this week's episode involving Big Macintosh, Cheerilee, and love. XP
the votes are in....
you, my good sir...........did not fluke
*743 viewers* those damn dirty people
Yay!
Inb4 saturday!
Wow.
Just what we needed in preparation for the upcoming episode. Also, it implied to me that she was in heat.. was she? Honestly, that'd kinda make it better. Don't know why.
That was excellent...fucking....wow
Write more. I'm giving you a watch, favouriting this story and waiting for more.
Before he could answer (not that he could even form words at this point), Big Mac felt the head of his member be engulfed in hot wetness. Not being able to resist the urge any longer, he bucked his hips hard into the source of the heat, wanting more.
Cheerilee took it all in stride, sucking in even more of his hardened length. She teased the tip with her tongue as she caressed the sides with her mouth. Moving farther and farther down, she gradually took in more of him, before finally meeting the base of his cock. She looked up at him innocently, his member still reaching far into her mouth, and winked right in his face.
Big Mac threw his head back and groaned loudly, knowing that if he watched her for any longer he would cum for sure. Hell, that cute little wink there nearly pushed him over already. He felt like he was about ready to explode.
SOMPONY, ANYPONY! MAKE A COMIC, PICTURE OF THIS SCENE!
Simply GREAT!!!
Eeyup.
Hard to picture in places; it felt a lot like a humanized fic with some pony terminology thrown in. In future, make sure you accommodate for the different positions required for quadrupedal creatures. Maybe a nitpick, but in stories with this level of rich, detailed description discrepancies like that stand out.
No, say no, say no, say no... C’mon, we’ve rehearsed this... Just say...
Sure
Shit
... XD That made me crack up SO badly! XD
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
Fluke my blue rump! That was one hell of a clopfic, if I do say so myself... it's not often that one sees this side of Big McIntosh... or Cheerilee for that matter! Really, really well done as far as emotions go. Just a few spelling/word choice issues.
Well... guess I wouldn't be doing my job if I didn't tell you what I meant... lemme look... ah!
"Cheerilee, teasing him playfully, purposely pushed back and rubbed up and down the head of his girth with her entrance, electing a loud moan out of his moan."
I think you mean "eliciting" and... I'm not sure people can moan out of their moan.
If Big Mac was so sheltered, how would he know the term boner?
That and a few grammar and speeeling mistakes were the ONLY issues I saw here, flukemyass.
Impressive story, I daresay I enjoyed it tremendously. You have rightfully earned yourself a watcher, my good man.
Yum.
I started losing interest when Cheerilee started swearing, but i decided to keep reading.
CONGRATULATIONS! For your prize of not being a fluke, we present you with: Your story being featured on the site!
200495 I'd rather have that picture stay in my head, thank you very much.
i enjoy
that is all
kthanxbai
Pony hell, it's where I'm already going might aswell Follow you.
198748 LOL! Exactly!
I'll never look at Cheerilee the same way again... LMAO! BRAVO!
dont listen to whoever says your bad at writing cause it aint true. this was a brilliant story
198748 yes, I agree. It was... It was...
It was...
FUCKTASTIC!
Yes, Mah Boi!
What all true warriors strive for!
Amazing!
200658
Ahahaha. Thanks for the quick eye. I didn't realized I had messed that part up so badly.
What did I just read!? Hot DAMN!
That Hearts and Hooves episode is going to be awkward now because I'll be thinking of this. eep!
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Haven't even started reading and I'm already laughing. "Wrote this story to show the last one was a fluke, I'm a terrible writer!" 5 stars from 70+ reviews.
200689 Probably Braeburn's porno that he had.
all we need now is one of bigmac and ditzy doo/derpy hooves... docter can be raped by timber wolves for a change
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If this is how you write when trying to prove your stories are a fluke... My suggestion? Keep doing it. It's awesome.
great fic 10 / 10, just one question, why does the picture attached to the story have 'DICKS' written on the black board?
201177 Lol... I didn't notice that until a minute before I read your comment.
This story needs a followup!
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dayum. this is GOOD.
i just remembered something.......my little pony.................oh god
You know, i had a nasty picture posted, but I'm not going to keep it up.