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Angel


"And it was all over." -Understanding Eternity The hardest thing I've had to type. Ever.

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Ponies need to die, just like people. Or the effects can be poisonous. All our princesses can do is think back now. And they need an idea.

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"She knew that fact all to well." - too
"The guard's face wen't blank after he heard Luna was dead." - went
"And she lit let horn light up with magic." - Something is wrong with this sentence... :trixieshiftright:

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I can count the number of stories that have brought tears to my eyes on one hand :pinkiesad2: This is one of them
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Thank you so much for your support. It's nice to know someone cares enough to correct my mistakes. Also, I can't find the "She knew that fact all to well". Little help, please?

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"Calm down, Celestia. That was thousands of years ago. We can't bring her back."

Celestia silently nodded in agreement. She knew that fact all to well.

"..."

The moon was fully out by now, and it wasn't helping Celestia's mood at all.

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Thanks! It's all fixed.

That was just... amazing... This needs more views! It was perfectly written and had a great emotional impact. I loved it, so why on't other people... I SHALL ENDORSE!

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Thank you. I'm trying to get it submitted to EqD.

faving this so I won't forget about it...but I jsut got off of a spree of tearjerkers and I'm not ready for another

dear lord...that went waaaaaay too fast to bring me to tears, but it came damn near close

hehehe..hahahahaha...AHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA IT'S PERFECT THIS IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!! I can't thank you enough Angel AHAHAHAHAHA!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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Are you laughing or crying?

732783 Sad and tragedy fics makes me happy, I love to see ponies suffer. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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If you love to see ponies suffer, then bronyism might not be right for you.

734172 Don't misunderstand me, I love the show it's just that I like it when the worst case scenario happens. :twilightsmile:

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You are truly strange, but judging by your initial reaction, you liked the story a whole lot?

738524 This is how much I liked it. Even if you don't do sad stuff anymore it's a great job.

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Thanks for the compliment!

738571 Dark Colt Sabata
I know that guy, he's my friend.
So, can I ask you a question:
Do you have skype or MSN?

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No, why do you ask?

It's stories like this that make reading worthwhile.
You sir, are a gentleman and a scholar.

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I'm incredibly glad to hear this! Thanks for taking time to leave a comment!

(After returning to FiMFiction, I'm feeling inspired! Be sure to watch for and read my other stories!)

1699566 This story deserves much, much more attention than it has received!

:ajsleepy:Ehh... seemed rushed and there was no real emotion behind it. i could see this as having great potiential but.... there was no heart to it. Sorry.

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I tried.. thanks for the feedback anyway,

Suicide is always the answer I would say.

Good story, fave'd it.

733236 you should read Luna's lunacy just saying Nightmare moon screws every pony to death. then theirs another one that is basically another where immortality is seen to screw you in the face called Our Last Goodbye, then finally if your ok with rape then you can read about twilight an her friends getting owned by dragons in Dragon's Tragedy.:rainbowwild: think you can keep up with the evil and still laugh?

suicide is only the answer to those who cant find their own way out of a problem. immortality is easily fixed when you figure out how to cherish being a loner. or you can remove memories of the past and record them in outside devices for later use that way you don't suffer from the painful memories:twilightsmile:. their are many outs to the pain she just chose the more permanent solution.

1707786 alrighty then tell me what you think once you've read them. cheers:twilightsmile:

I just now noticed that this story has both the 'Sad' & 'Tragedy' tags, which are mutually exclusive and they ask authors not to label stories with both...though it doesn't seem like they enforce it...?
Sad is just a good tear-jerker. You know little Timmy's dog gets hit by a car, or X pony comes down with an incurable disease.
Ex. The Unread Letter

Tragedy is when your (main) character's life is torn apart around them, usually because of their own failings or shortcomings - a true, classic Tragedy will always end with them worse off than when they began.
Ex. TAC: The Fall (Yes, this is a shameless plug...)

From what I have read here, this is a good, classic Tragedy. Celestia looses everything and in a fit of despair, ends it all.

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Wow.. thanks for letting me know!

1715689 No problem... :raritywink:
I really liked that ending, by the way. A little dark, but completely believable! :eeyup:

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Trust me, unbelievable was what I was going for!

Oh my god , that was ................. HORRIBLE !!!!!! OH PRINCESS CELESTIA!!!!! I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND U !!! I once had a nightmare where I had gone into a 500 year coma, It was horrid, I woke up in the middle of the night and cried myself back to sleep ......... All my friends and family were gone…… D)

Okay, this is old and you're not around any more, but... this just doesn't convince as being the Celestia I know. She seems to be prepared to throw the whole of Equestria into chaos to get away from the pain she's herself caused through her idiotic idea.

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