The Royal Sisters rule side by side, their co-rulership bringing prosperity to the land of Equestria. Yet, the youngest, Luna, grows jealous of her sisters seeming control and use of Luna as a puppet. When Luna rebels against her sister, she does so as the mare, Nightmare Moon.
How will Celestia cope with the loss of her sister?
This story is based on my own personal headcannon of the events that occured that night, so long ago. Leave feedback if you want, but this is how I view it and nopony will dissuade me from my path.
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Bravo. Very well written. Only one spelling mistake that i saw ("silence" near the middle should be "silent") and it is minor. i like the story. There is only one thing i can think to add to improve it.
At the end, she walks back into the castle, up to her room, exhausted. She goes to her bed but doesn't lie down, just looks up to the moon, closes her eyes and begins to sing through tears "Fate has been cruel and order unkind..." A lullaby for a Princess. (if you havent heard the song, you must look it up, its truly beautiful "lullaby for a princess" by ponyphonic)
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Thank you my princess. I used the end I did to be largely open ended. It was supposed to only be that night, and that is where it ends.
Yes, I see that. I was only suggesting that it can also be attatched very canon to the only song ever to have made me cry both ic and irl
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... I see. Well... I'm not at a computer currently and not sure what you are referrencing, but I could do something small.
Next time you are at a pc, go to youtube and look up lullaby for a princess by ponyphonic. A truly heartbreaking and wonderful song about lunas banishment sung by celestia.