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At long last, Princess Celestia has found a potential successor, a pony of great magical ability and strong heart. Young Twilight Sparkle has barely gotten settled at her new home at Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns when her teacher decides to give her her first and most important lesson.
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I actually like the idea that she doesn't do it by herself.
Another story for the reading list. Will get around to reading this as soon as my writing project is over and I have the A I deserve
3477019 Good luck!
Nice story! I really like stories involving young Twilight and Celestia, and this delivers in spades.
Maybe I am reading into this too much, but I think that it is interesting that she would need the help of five others for both raising the sun and lowering the moon, and that, in doing so, she acts as the transition point between both – the twilight, if you will.
3487345 I'm glad someone noticed the numbers.
I read this intending to leave a comment, but I find I don't have much to say
I know the story was about something, but I feel like nothing happened. It came off like a declarative sentence: "Celestia has help raising the sun." The attempt to set up the resolution felt hasty. So nothing really sunk in for me, sorry.
3494673 I know what you mean, and I should have spent more time on it. Ah well, not much I can do about it now...