• Member Since 23rd Sep, 2011
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GearheartHound


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An ancient evil has awoken after millennium of slumber. A dark shadow from the very beginnings of Equestria itself threatens to blanket the lands in a darkness the likes of which no living pony has seen before. It falls to Twilight Sparkle and her stalwart friends to hold the line, to stand tall least their world is torn down around them.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

Although I felt the first two chapters were a little rushed, the third and fourth was maybe the best thing I've ever read. That was beautiful.

I love this!!!!!!!
:twilightsmile:

I really like your idea of how it all happened, with everypony being earth ponies and then later having the first unicorn and pegasus giving 'birth' to the tow alicorns, but I'm a little confused how that would happen, you more or less say they died to give them life; so does that mean they are some sort of reincarnation of themselves? But if that was the case then that would be rather odd why Luna and Celestia wouldn't be lovers then... so I'm guessing that is not how it all went down. But poor Celestia and Luna for being parent-less, I wonder who taught them about life and such.
Anyway, so far I like the story, good thing its already finished, I hate having to wait for updates! >_<

Aww... poor Gloom and Twilight :/ sad ending is sad >_<
Anyway, congratz with the fiction ^_^

I still don't get it. Who/what the heck is "Gloom" and what does bound evil have to do with Twilight?

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