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Perfect Prime


Saw a lot of FanFics on EQD, so I decided to make an account for reading them. Got my exams in a few days though, so I probably won't do much for a few days. Can anyone actually see this?

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There was once a time where Equestria didn't have the best of relations with its neighbouring countries, and though they tried to promote a message of friendship throughout the world, there are still some who wish to claim their land for themselves.

The Crystal Empire has decided to invade Equestria and they've seized most of it. The battle is now just down to the few left in Canterlot, and they refuse to give up.

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This is just a story that I wrote for the sake of writing it, and though I quite like the way it turned out I think that it could have gone a lot better :twilightsheepish:

I was really conflicted about the names of the characters (Queen Carina was originally Queen Faust :facehoof:) and I was confused when I tried to pick a tag for this story :derpytongue2:

Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the story and if there are any places where there were mistakes or if you have any suggestions on ways I can improve please let me know!

Thank you!

P.S. I was also very unsure about the ending, let me know if you liked it :derpytongue2:

Tis a good little tale. Light and crazy.

Dat Ending...

2457946 I debated for a long time whether or not I should write dat ending :derpytongue2:

Oh don't worry, I liked it. Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

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Thanks for saying that :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And I was hesitant to submit it to EqD at first because I didn't think that it had a chance, but if one of my readers feels that there is hope then I will do it :twilightsmile:

I'll submit it tomorrow and I'll let you know how they respond.

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