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"Welcome to Reliable Excavation Demolition. Today you will be attempting to capture intelligence from the Builders League United. This being your first mission, you must have some questions. First, do not be afraid of death. We at Mann Co. have an unlimited respawn system. This allows you to die as many times as you want, but still return to continue your missions. Second, the BLU team will look exactly like yourselves. Do not be perturbed, we ensure no clones of yourself exist within either team. Third, there will be no relationships between opposite teams. Mission begins in 60 seconds."

Backstories for every class, explaining how they came to where they are now, and how they did on the first day of fighting. I will do them in order (ie Scout, Soldier, Pyro, etc.). Please be patient between chapters I update slowly. Also my first story, so beware.

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Well, Rainbow doesn't sound like our scout. But it is your story and I'm liking it so far.

Um not bad but I think you wrote Rainbow Dash rather poorly. Even the Scout wouldn't be as much of a jerk as Rainbow Dash is here. She just beats up ponies for the slightest offense, at the least Scout only did it due to being picked on.

I hope you don't ruin anyone else.

It's a good story, but Rainbow is clearly more over reactive than the scout in this story. Try to bring the anger down, just make her more sassy and provocative:pinkiehappy:

I would say this is a bit to extreme for both, Rainbow and Scout. Maybe a little cool down for our speedster from now on would set the character to a more recognizable ground. Anyway, this fic seems interesting, so have a track.

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