A hobbyist writer who just enjoys stringing fancy words together.
A filly by the name of high hopes growing up in Ponyville finds herself caught up in the rise of a home town heroine, but when her hero is reveled to be only a ruse she takes it to heart. She finally copes with her loss by doing a little heroics of her own, but after she get's an idea to take it to the next level and take up the mask herself.
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Oh, forgot to mention. It says completely, but I may open it up to some more chapters if I feel the need. I have other projects, but I like Hopes and wouldn't mind telling more of her story.
Awww, man. You really should have used that for the end of the story, full circle and all that.
Still, great story, definitely worth a sequel. I think we all know who the "cute brother" from Ruby's date is, yes?
This is actually very good for a first fic. It packed a larger punch than was expected...
I really hope you progress as an author, your talent is unlike most others. If you ever need any help from an editor if you can't find one, I'm always open.
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There are a few things that could have been done better, I'll admit. I'd started the ztory a year beforeI finished it and after waiting all that time my style chanved, so when I came back to it I had to redo alot of it. By the end I was ready to be done with it.
"I think we all know who the brother is."
who is he?2874361
I found this pic a while before I started writing that I drew off of.
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Thank you kindly. I've worked on other fics before, but this is the first one I've gotten to spit and polish. Writing is easy. Making your idea presentable is the hard part and really where you improve as a writer the most.
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Why, I have no idea.
But if I had to take a wild guess, I'd probably assume him to be a pegasus, with a coat not unlike that of a famous cellist mare and a quite colorless dark mane.
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Thanks!
And verb tense! My one crippling weakness!
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Seriously, who where you thinking of? I don't know.2874898
Huzzah, High Hopes gets a happy ending! That pic always depressed me.
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I wouldn't say happy ending just yet. The adventure's only just begun.
This is Awesome!
This is one of the very best Mare Do Well fics I have read. Love the character development, and you have a good eye for detail in your writing as well.
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Yay!
Say can I use your character to write other stories as well?
A happy ending to this comic:
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I loved the character progression here. The change from admirer to the one who becomes the hero is just so compelling!
I really like the story you got set up. I hope that you are able to create more stories for your portrayal of Mare Do Well. But I like how the first chapter ended on a strong note, and thus I would be okay if this becomes the only chapter of this story.
Though for the summary page, you forgot to capitalize "High Hope's name...
A filly by the name of High Hopes growing up in Ponyville finds herself caught up in the rise of a home town heroine, but when her hero is reveled to be only a ruse she takes it to heart. S