Hey anypony who's reading this. I just want you all to know that this is my first fanfic and i'm open to any and all criticism. If you want to... that is.

just judging from the description,it should aslo have "OC" as one of the cast

also,if it IS an oc story,do you know how many times the "woke up not remembering anything" thing has been done? its like the premise of most of the original OCfics

for the hell of it,il actually read it....at some point

>>196007196007 I know it's been done but I wanted to try my hand at my own take on it. As for the lack of an O.C. mark in the description, like I said I'm new.

Hey, sorry the update took a while, I've been busy with school and was sick earlier this week. All that said, I'm gonna do my best to make as many chapters as I can. I already have a basic idea of what I want to do, but I'm a bit of a sporadic thinker and change my mind rather quickly.

If anyone has any critiques or anything please don't hesitate to tell me. Any and all reactions to the story will help me better my writing. Thank you.

interesting story so far. keep up the good work.

>>269339269339 agreement has been reached

well, me gusta is the only thing running through my head right now.

...... Well the voice at the end had an accent so that narrows it down to about 4 ponies.... and unless Applebloom is talking to herself its not her.

And BOOM goes the peacefulness

Man I wish this would update more often

MOAR!

>>11583741158374 Yes, this.

I demand moar

on a another note I had to reread this like your other story.