interesting.

>>284602284602

Thanks!

Wow! If that would be a book in a bookshop, I'd definitely buy it. Good job! You got my thumb up! Oh yea, should i track? Or you won't be posting more Daring-Do?

~Morning Dart

>>284904284904 Definitely track if you liked it, this is but chapter 1. Thanks for the thumbs up! :D

Is this the group that's working from the TV tropes page?

>>286394286394 No, I'm independent of them, though I will use ideas that I like and find work. I'm really working on creating expanded novels or at least novellas on the ideas listed there. Thanks for the comment! :D

Well, you wanted me to critique it, so do you want the long version or the short version?

>>767630767630

Long version, though I could give you access to the google docs version so you could comment on the text itself and the updated version.

The MLP team should make a paperback version of the Daring Do series and sell them in bookstores.  I'd buy them instantly.

>>12295951229595 That would be amazing.

>>12486701248670 Ikr?

Is there going to be more?