Follow the adventures of Daring Do as she tirelessly thwarts the treacherous plans of the evil Ahuizotl.
Wow! If that would be a book in a bookshop, I'd definitely buy it. Good job! You got my thumb up! Oh yea, should i track? Or you won't be posting more Daring-Do?
>>284904284904 Definitely track if you liked it, this is but chapter 1. Thanks for the thumbs up! :D
Is this the group that's working from the TV tropes page?
>>286394286394 No, I'm independent of them, though I will use ideas that I like and find work. I'm really working on creating expanded novels or at least novellas on the ideas listed there. Thanks for the comment! :D
Well, you wanted me to critique it, so do you want the long version or the short version?
Long version, though I could give you access to the google docs version so you could comment on the text itself and the updated version.
The MLP team should make a paperback version of the Daring Do series and sell them in bookstores. I'd buy them instantly.
>>12295951229595 That would be amazing.
Is there going to be more?
This is AWESOAZEABLE!!!!!!!!!!!:
lukjad, will you be finishing this story? So far it's great and I'm just hoping you'll continue.
I wish rainbow dash was in this story. Imagine if rainbow meet her hero daring do!!
This story is definitely 20% cooler than some adventure stories I've read! (Had to put RD's saying for her idol XD)