Interesting... I wonder what'll happen.

I grant you 4 staches and a track

Tracked and submitted to some of the appropriate groups.

A very interesting beginning! If this is how you mean to continue, I have no hesitation on placing this story on my tracking list.

Keep up the good work!

The only thing that really stood out grammar wise was "I’m sure your agenda is much fuller than mine.", It just doesn't seem to flow as a sentence compared to the rest of the chapter,

Other than that though I enjoyed this chapter, tracking to see where it goes

Well done

Tracking with excitement. I like the feel of the story, seems like Slice-of-life.

Celestia obviously couldn't be bothered to teach her own sister how to behave in the new Equestria...

That's Princess Trollestia for you.

Im definitively tracking this! :D

Very well written. I look forward to some more

Congratulations on getting featured.

Twiluna? Huh, I haven't read any before now. Now that's just odd.

Tracking, of course!

a good start

now keep it going

EDIT: grats on beeing featured

A new pony ship?  Awesome!

Twilight and Luna? Ah-hah! The fun has been doubled!

No, but seriously, great story.

Me gusta

Very nice, can't wait to see this one.

Wow, has Princess Celestia never considered that Spike might be bothered by the problem of having letters passing through his internals?

moar, and longer! I quite enjoy this ship and enjoy the direction you are coming from with it.

Whoa, that was a nice beggining! I can see that something awesome is incoming, so i'll track it. You got me interested! I'll facourite and like, well.. if you don't mind.

~Morning Dart

>>248018248018

*Looks at episode 2, season 2* Nope.

>>248140248140

Poor Spike.

>>248326248326

Then again, Celestia has never been present when he recieves letters so she may just be unaware of the discomfort it causes.

Starfall? XD No offense to the pre-reader, but all I can think of from that name is Soraka, and the LoL parody song Wish! XD

Still, this is most intriguing! Tracking this!

~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

nice setup, tracking

Nice.

Me gusta!

Tracking.

The friendship has been doubled!

What is this 'English' of which thou speaks?

Looking forward to another TwiLuna.

This was a rather sweet little tale.  I particularly liked seeing a happy Luna.  I do have to wonder about the use of "English" to identify the language though.

You write well. :) I look forward to reading more. I hope this blossoms into some cute romance :). Also, you said "kind, kind" toward the beginning I think. Might want to fix that repetition. :)

Definitely an interesting beginning. Once where a plot is being established but many possibilities for expansion present themselves. I am quite curious to see what happens next. Let the stalking, er, I mean tracking commence.

Tracking with great interest

This is looking very interesting.  I can't wait to see more!

I liked it, and am going to fav and track this. But please, please, PLEASE make one minor change.

Change the word "English" to "Equestrian". Just because they are speaking in english on from our side of the screen doesn't necessarily mean their speaking actual English.

oh, and naturally....MOAR!! NOWZZ!!

Some TwiLuna is always nice. Tracking!

>>247076247076 Thanks for the s and the track!

>>247080247080 Thanks You're really fast!

>>247124247124 Eyuup!

>>247166247166 I'll see if it can be improved on, thanks

>>247348247348 Glad you think so~!

>>247354247354 Thanks! And there's the sad tag...

>>247375247375 Time has passed but in Luna Eclipsed she still acts like that... perhaps Celestia didn't want to be too motherly and over-caring? Occasionally reminding her but not really emphasizing it.

>>247381247381 Thanks

>>247394247394 Yay, thanks!

>>247448247448 I was astounded... I thought they usually mostly feature EqD stuff and I've seen some trollfics and pretty much HiE... I'm so honored that this was featured

>>247567247567 It's one of my favs, and there are plenty of great ones out there :)

>>247637247637 Yep yep~ and thanks! :D

>>247755247755 Pony shipping's awesome

>>247833247833 Thanks! Doubled doubled and let's hope Celestia's not too teasy...

>>247845247845 Glad it did

>>247918247918 Hope I can get the next one out soonish.

>>248018248018 ...She trollin' don't care?

>>248021248021 Thanks!!! And glad to hear you want longer

>>248096248096 Of course I don't mind,

>>248140248140 She don't even care if Spike's like regurgitating 3 times a minute...

>>248326248326 I felt horrible for him when watching that episode

>>248339248339 Perhaps...

>>248372248372 Thanks And I found the song on youtube LOL

>>248650248650 Thanks for tracking!

>>248659248659 Y no Luna icon~

>>248675248675 Thank you~ glad you liked it

>>248975248975 Kyoot

>>249115249115 Thanks for pointing that out!!!

>>249404249404 Yeah, I can't believe I didn't find something wrong with that... fixed!

>>249693249693 Thanks! I recognize you from dA I wanted to emphasize that Luna really found her kind?

>>249761249761 Glad you think so! But then there's a sad tag... it's there, must be a reason

>>249807249807 Thank you~

>>249991249991 Thanks, I'm working on the next one, but I'm thinking of making it longer...

>>250014250014 I'm really grateful for your suggestion I've fixed it and I apologize for not noticing that before

>>250039250039 Twi-Luna

Interesting

"Very well, we shall meet anon!" - wut

"And you’re starting to get used to the new Equestrian now!" - What do you mean by Equestrian?

I'm excited to see where this goes!

This is interesting. We'll have to see where this leads to, but from the first chapter, the good writing, I think it will be great. I liked Twi-Luna in the past.

>>250373250373 'Equestrian' as in the language, e.g. 'modern Italian'. Not sure what your other query was about?

>>248372248372 Never heard of it, I'm afraid. The name comes from my OC pony.

>>250076250076 Oh, we've talked on DA before? Can you remind me lol?

This is the only thing that came to my mind when she mentioned dragon scribe,

Image: http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/n526/Mr-Ghast/handslave.png

must have moar rawr

>>250373250373

"anon" means later, or the older form meant immedately.

I like it so far, very simple, but it felt way to rushed, at some places more than others, perhaps because you want to get the part that interest you? But nonetheless you got me hooked so far, tracking.

Think its great so far an instant track for me

And Nice Picture Mr.Ghast I was lol'ing

>>250977250977

Oh, okay. To me, anon == anonymous.

>>251927251927

Online Webster is your friend.

>>250654250654 XD Yeah, I know! (Starfall is the name of one spell/ability of a Champion of an MMO Arena game called League of Legends, whose name is Soraka. (She's a Unicorn! XD) Anyhoof, Starfall is her only damaging ability, and it summons stars to fall on the enemies, reducing their Magic Resist. So your username/OC reminded me of Soraka, and therefore the song about her from LoL! XD)

>>253351253351 It appears that I have unknowingly struck a chord, then!

Victorus Aut Mortis (Victory or Death)!

OKEYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! I'm just confuse here since I kinda recall this Fic  already concluded and originally posted over at DEVIANT ART by the Author who I can't recall as of yet, which kinda was over a year ago or more of whom had a similar starting premise such as this(I could still remember) that might have been a coincidence along its either just in my head for coming up with such a conclusion.  

Still I'm just asking just to verify if its  fine by you? If this one was the one and the same of the two Fics that had such a similar Title than I read before? And if it is then I'm surely going to rediscover the original just to see if it had some additional elements to it than its earlier predecessor.

++++++++++++

Image: http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/290/a/8/goddess_empress_of_ponykind_by_equestria_prevails-d4d6gsx.png

"Love the Empress

for She is the salvation of Pony-kind

Obey Her words

for She will lead you into the light of the future,

Heed her wisdom

for She will protect you from Evil

Whisper her prayers with devotion,

for they will save your Soul

Honour Her servants,

for they speak in Her voice

Tremble before Her majesty,

for we all walk in Her immortal shadow."

>>250751250751

LOL That's a great pic!!! And is it a coincidence that... well you'll see in the next chapter

>>254287254287

I'm sorry but it could not have been me, as I only started writing about a month ago... and this story takes place after Luna Eclipsed, which was aired in October 2011 if I recall correctly? Hmm, if it was one of the earlier Twi-Luna fics then I am sure there are lots of great ones out there... but it would not be mine

>>254440254440

Yeah it wasn't you since I've found the original Fic, which is my fault to being with for confusing the two in part of how both had there respected titles started with "Moonlit" with the tale on DA having a companion being "Sparkles" instead of your own having "Balcony" instead.

The mistake was on my part to begin with because of it and well I must ask if you already read "Moonlit Sparkles" one already for the most part you guessed of the pairing being a TwiLuna one?

++++Words of Faith+++++

Without the Dark, there can be no Light,

We have purpose

Without the Lie, there can be no Truth,

We have purpose

Without the War, there can be no Victory,

We have purpose

Without the Death, there can be no sacrifice,

We have purpose

Without the Hope there can be no Future,

We have purpose

Without the Loyalty there can be no one chapter,

We have purpose

Without the Empress, there is nothing,...

And we would have no purpose

+++++Ritual and Responses, Tome of Truths Foretold, Legiones Astartes, Library Copy-----

>>256817256817

The title itself I did not remember, but upon running a search for it I realized that I had in fact read it before! But the reason I chose this title for this fanfic is because... oh well I don't now if this counts as a spoiler but they will have tea on the balcony and it becomes a very special place for them. Wow, didn't realize that the title would be similar to another Twi-Luna

brilliant

take these mustaches, like, track, and watch

keep it up your doing great looking forward to new chapters

its even better since its a twiluna fic yay!

>>250258250258

>>250428250428 Glad you like it!

>>250582250582 'good writing'...(hides behind and squeaks)

>>250661250661 Eyup seems you already found my page first

>>250882250882 And moar there shall be~

>>251217251217 Wow, and I thought it was pretty subtle Thanks!

>>251372251372 Thanks!

>>257955257955 Glad you like it, TwiLuna!

>>250373250373 hehe you always just comment as a proof read? :D

>>263246263246

Sometimes

>>263526263526 hehe that's so cute. :)

>>261772261772 No Problem

>>263560263560 I AM NOT CUTE!

>>263723263723 with that pic yes *hugs*

I need more chapters! now!! really interesting, I like your take at Luna character! can't wait to see the interactions between Luna and Twilight

>>263723263723 LOL I agree that you can't say that with that profile pic

>>265584265584 Eyuup~

>>266447266447 Thanks There'll be some sister time between Celly and Luna, too

>>266684266684

>>266712266712 hehe what are you replying to?

Wow, that was a great first chapter.  I am almost at a lose for words.  ALMOST!

I enjoyed this chapter very much, so I must say thank you for writing it and posting it on here.  I'm looking forward to whenever you post the next chapter.  Although waiting for all these chapters to be posted is causing me to fall into a bit of madness, but I somehow keep myself sane enough to go on with day to day living.

And I went on a rant.... sorry about that.....  Okay, well this first chapter was so well done that I must give you this:

Image: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v146/Gildor_Surion/muffinbutton.png

This is showing promise.

>>269953269953 Thanks And that Muffin Button is so kyoooot!!!

>>272108272108 Thanks I expect the next chapter to be out Saturday.

[edit] consarn it, gonna make a few small edits but the next chapter is finished if anyone was wondering Thanks for your patience, all.

Nice ending there :P This is going to be entertaining.

Why would anypony ever ask Rarity whether they should wear fancy attire to an event? They're going to get the same answer every time.

YES!

I can already see it...

"Hello Luna."

"Twilight Sparkle! It good to se..." Notice's saddle. Dirty thoughts.

*wingboner*

"Oh ! Un, i see you are REALLY happy to see me uhm?" Blush.

It will be glorious.

I can see awkward relationship funtimes coming from this. Huzzah!

Dem Saddles

Great chapter though

The awkwardness... I can smell it already...

I AM PLEASED!!

Ahem...  Do continue, I want moar.

NO! Not the 'friendly' advise!

Will be pleased.

>>292786292786

Smell it? I can certainly sense the coming akwardness, but smell it?

>>292840292840

without a doubt.

I think Luna should ask Twilight and her friends to help get her aquainted with the modern culture of Equestria. Knowing the history is a good thing, but if your from an era where action a or item c means this, and then in the modern era it means that, it can cause more than a few problems.

Celestia's teasing and the saddle pleases me.

jojojojojo I'm soooo looking forward the reaction of Trollestia at the arrival of her faithful student! it's gonna be so much fun next chapter!!

"Yo, wazzup T-Sparks? L-Dawg here, lookin' for a time we can hang. Friday night chill with you?

Peace out,

Princizzle Luna"

yay new chapter great story love luna

Great chapter, looking forward to Luna's reaction to Twilight's attire.

>>293237293237

I lol'ed pretty hard at this

All this time Luna thought Canterlot had suffered a massive surge in the number of consorts

Nice lengthy updates! GJ

>>292653292653 Can't wait for some ? lol

>>292678292678 At least Rarity could control herself and not offer to make a great big poofy bling go-on-a-date-with-royalty dress

>>292722292722 Smexiness unfortunately will have to come with a price...

>>292730292730 The fun just got... quabrahrahrahtripahbled! (gibberish)

>>292778292778 Thanks, Saddles, naughty.

>>292786292786 Great. There's gonna be a surprise for sure though

>>292802292802 Hehe, luckily the writer's block has been shattered

>>292840292840 Awesome pic!!! Thanks hell yeah like woohoo!

>>292850292850 If gets her way, Luna's going to kill her lol, saddle partay, love poison in the tea...

>>292948292948 They're both quite willing to spend more time with each other, naturally. Though one-on-one lessons would be nice. Begone, other elements

>>292950292950 so so bad, facehoof.

>>293031293031 I'm not one for lightening pacing, so fun but not bang bang the first time, okay? (wink)

>>293237293237 L-Dawg. L-Dawg. That almost killed me

>>293301293301 Thanks, Luna one of my best ponies><

>>293358293358 Maybe she'll go crazy. Maybe... nothing will happen lol!

>>293772293772 Me too :D

>>293781293781 Thanks! This single chapter is even longer than my one-shot, I don't even...

>>293843293843 I would like that mug very much

“I was thinking that, should you need some additional attire, I could arrange for some well-known dressmakers to prepare something suitable. A nice saddle, for instance?”

Trollestia strikes again! Not to sounds like I am dismissing the other parts of the story but the banter between Luna and Celestia is the best part. You make Celestia so damn witty that it slays me with laughter.

>>294046294046 Thanks! It's awesome enough for me even if you only liked that part lol. Hoho, I'm so glad this could make you smile (or laugh, even) And yet she was full of wisdom (kind of full of wisdom in the first half)...

Hoo boy, the sad tag seems pretty insignificant now doesn't it

Marvelous! I am so hooked.

I like the chapter overall, however some of the conversation between the sisters feels stilted as in, there are a few things which they would merely think rather than say out loud.

And Luna's outbursts start in the "old" equestrian and switches to the new by the end of the sentence, which is jarring to say the least.

Still, not bad, eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

>>294310294310 Thanks

>>294455294455 Thanks for pointing those out! I'll look them over as soon as I can, and again, thanks for mentioning the flaws, I really need that

I have to admit that i checked once again the description, looking for "sex" tag. Luckily it isn't there! Wait, that is not a mistake?

~Morning Dart

I think I might have found my new favourite story ^_^

>>294044294044

I'm in fact more for a slow relationship development, anything too fast feels always forced In my opinion, that's why you need to write many many more chapters of this! *wink*

>>293237293237 best letter ever

>>294528294528

Well, I didn't really point out anything specific..... I could though if you want me to.