Bits. Everypony wants them, everypony needs them. Even if it causes pain and destruction to gain them, whats the loss?
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Really good work! Exceptionally detailed and well written. However my only complaint here would be how sudden everything is and how it felt rather rushed at the end. Please do continue writing.
Interesting...
I certainly want to see where you go with this. Update again soon, my good Brony.
2424999 THANKS MAN! you dont know how good it feels to get a comment like that! thnx!
2424995 thanks ! and double thanks for improvemnt!
Othen then seprating a few long pragraphs you did seriously well with this, I enjoyed such cruel actions from greedy stallions or mares, hoping to see more, poor Flutershy
You know, seeing how dangerous and unnatural the Everfree forest is, it's about time somepony cut it down.
2452743 thanks man i aim to please ! oh and thanks for follow!!!!!!
2453974 i guess it is justifiable!
2457928 I sure hope so
And never a problem, you earned it
Damn, Flutter's is really out od it, how tragic, other then the long wall of text at the end and capitalizing Angel one last time I'm very pleased to see this update though feel bad for Fluttershy
2528625 FIXED! thnk for help!
2537612 No problem
i should really update this story... sometime... mph...nah
Wait what!?
From your elegant description of the morning sun i thought this was going to be a peaceful story. actually, now that i think about it, greed would bring that kind of action.
i think you just over did it on the description, but i like the concept.
I didn't read everything, but i saw a few grammatical errors. (but between you and me, if it helps the story flow, fuck grammar in the ass with a scolding cup of coffee) i'll try not to be so lazy and read the rest, but it seems a little too descriptive.
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yeeaaaaaaaa too descriptive I know what u mean, also I didn't realise my grammer was messed up! Thanks for the criticism!