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Straggler

Vespur, a Changeling general in the army of Chrysalis, get's in a mix up and finds himself stuck in canterlot after the invasion has ended, seemingly forgotten. Can he find a way to return to the hive? If so, will his queen accept him?

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Prologue · 13th Apr 2013 · 2,167 words
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Chapter 1 · 18th Apr 2013 · 1,523 words
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Chapter 2 · 25th Apr 2013 · 1,369 words
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Swirls #1 · Apr 14th, 2013 · · · Prologue ·

"Geez! Everypony here is either ignorant, rude, or evil! I can't even catch a break now!" She fumed. I wondered what made her so angry. It's not like SHE was just snuck up on b some scoundrel! “I mean, Cadance is acting strange, and nopony even believes me! And now some RANDOM unicorn decides to yell at me for 'sneaking up' on him!” She glared at me, steam coming from her nostrils. Well, I guess that makes since. Still, The Queen has a foolproof disguise. How did she notice? I looked up from my contemplation to see that she had moved on; probably because I wasn't paying any attention to her.

Twilight is too OOC, and some spelling mistakes.

Parravin