A pony is separated from the one he loves and finds himself in a world that even he knows is impossible. How will he cope with his new surroundings, can he find a way home, would he even want to go home?
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There is a lot of promise in the premise of the story but it unfortunately falls flat. What is the point of having a Pony from Earth end up in Equestria when it is just going to act like a human?
2399659 The point of it is to be different, I get it. Hwoever this story falls flat for other reasons too, it's just not that interesting. Too much around the basis of the plot that makes it a ridiculous premise unless executed correctly. Sadly the author needs to go back and rethink this fic. It has potential, but it's poorly executed in it's planning.
Author, if you need some help just send me a message. I'm pretty good at helping with any aspect of story writing, just ask.
There's already a story with A Pony Out of Place for a title on this site; just thought I'd let you know.
2400569 Well then what should I call this? It seems then that I need to change the title of my story, I am open to suggestions then. So much for being original.
2400597 It's alright. The other story is about a Ponyta named Flare Blitz arriving in Equestria as a result of Dialga and Palkia's fight in the tenth Pokemon movie, so your story is original even if it draws heavy parallels to the other.
As for a new title . . . I don't know. Maybe "Into the Different Dimension"?
If any of you feel I should retag the story in any way as it develops let me know, because I'm still not too sure about whether or not I'm giving them the tags they need.