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The tales of Equestria series is a series that first depicts things before Luna was banished to the moon, and before Discord was sealed away, and ties that in with the events of the present.
This includes the return of and friends and old enemies, all who are lead by an evil Alicorn who plots to overthrow Celestia and rule Equestria.
That was greate, but can we closely look at the part: "As he looked as his body, he noticed his body was decorated with even more bruises and scrapes, and his talon arm was wrapped in bandages. | Discord sighed at his wrecked body...". Don't you thing that the word "body" was a little bit overused? I am not a native speaker so I am propably wrong, but wouldn't it sound nicer like that: "As he looked as his body, he noticed IT was decorated with even more bruises..."?
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