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It's Applejack's birthday and her friends all pitch in and buy her a beautiful new hat. When Applejack returns home she takes the time to think back on the memories her old hat holds. She relives the murder of her parents and her journey to avenge them.

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Theater Critic #1 · Apr 8th, 2013 · · · Outlaws to the End ·

Dafuq did I just read?

9/10

Theater Critic #2 · Apr 8th, 2013 · · · Outlaws to the End ·

Good story. The pacing was a little too fast. But the rest is great!

BronyHeretic #3 · Apr 8th, 2013 · · · Outlaws to the End ·

I'm gonna have to agree, the pacing was very fast and took away from the drama, and I had trouble visualizing some of the scenes near the end of chapter 2.
8/10

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The Grey Pegasus #4 · Apr 8th, 2013 · · · Outlaws to the End ·

*Me reading description.*

It's Applejack's birthday and her friends all pitch in and buy her a beautiful new hat.

How nice! ... Actually have not seen too much of that.

When Applejack returns home she takes the time to think back on the memories her old hat holds.

Okay, I've seen that sometimes.

She relives the murder of her parents and her journey to avenge them.

WAIT WHAT.

Effect of description enough to make me read story.

Needs slight grammatical work- very little. Pacing's fast. But the premise seems okay.

NadaaZahra #5 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · · Happy Birthday! ·

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