My friends, my family and everypony else is gone. The only thing left are the very creatures that took them away. I am Twilight Sparkle, Element of Magic and one of Equestrias last survivors.
I was originally gonna leave this to one chapter, but I decided against it. Though the description only fits the first chapter, but I guess we can live with that.
Please give some love to NotTheOP for donating precious time to edit my story!
Art is done by Acosmicunicorn
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Chapters (2)
That ending was really good, you gonna continue this?
2390270 Nope, I ended it like that to torture all my readers :) Jk, I just love writing open endings :/
2390239 Good luck on your journey!
I don't think the "to" was supposed to be there.
Also, I wasn't sure what happened to Applejack. Did she get incinerated with the rest of the creatures?
Hit me right in the bucking heart, by the way.
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Biting the bullet isn't so bad when it's a one-shot.
Had it been a multi-chapter fic, I wouldn't have touched it with a ten-foot pole.
I can only take so much hurt.
well this was indeed interesting, I felt like I was reading the movie good work.
2390304 Thanks for pointing that out! I can't believe I missed it. .__. And yeah AJ was incinderated :/
2390331 Haha, fun part is I didn't really base it on the movie. I just couldn't come up with another title XD
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ah, that's too bad. But you know, we all gotta go sometime, and these girls went doing what we all knew they'd go down doing one day. *raises a glass* To the bearers of the elements of harmony!
2390347 May they live on forever in our memory as the ponies we love and not cannibalistic monsters!
I only read this because of that pink party whore who died.
Oh my, it's here! Seems like you got it past the approval this time
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But I don't have much time/powers left right now (oh Finnish spring, I love you too. Your way of making people get fever out of the blue is simply so incredibly pleasant!), so I will just wish you and this story the best of luck with the journey through the "New Stories"!
2390433 ... I guess I can live with that *shrug*
2390464 Thanks OP and hope you get well soon! :D
I would change "decapitating their heads" to decapitation to reduce the redundancy.
Good story. Poor Twilight.
I would love a continuation, but alas, you are done with it.
Woooah. That's a good story. Hell, I demand continuation! ...Puh-leese?
2390891Thanks for the suggestion!
2390913>>2391002 It's not as much that I love torturing my readers with open endings as it is that I probably would just end up putting it on hiatus after a few weeks. But I will consider it, just don't let your hopes soar too far :)
Oh and Josh thanks a lot, seeing as you're a bit of an inspiration it means a lot comming from you!
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You're welcome; I love to read a good story
NEED MOAR you seriously need to develop this into a full blown fic
2391161There's a lot of factors that's in play deciding wether this will become longer or not you will just have to see
Falling Off The Edge Of The World - Black Sabbath
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...this needs a dead Applejack emoticon.
What this story really needs is a Twijack sequel...'cause that's kind of rare. With Applejack not really dead of course.
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Sometimes memes are better than words.
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There is no excuse mot to expand except you dont have time.
If writing a plot is hard I would write one, your skill in this fic shouldnt go to waste!!!
give me a reason not to make this longer
Please!!!!!
2391333 I was spawned from the darkness of hell to make anyone I come in contact with have a miserable life
2391827 Yeah, that's why I tagged it tragedy :3 And no TwiJack, I just can't ship it :(
2393444 *shrug*
2393870 Give me a week and I'll post a blog on wether or not I will write a continuation okay?
2391330 Good ol' Black Sabbath <3
I don't want to be mean, but this just isn't the same quality as the first chapter. No where near really. This is more like the chapter that authors will write at the ends of stories just to milk it.
2406637 If that is the case I appologise to all my readers and I thank you for telling me. I will work hard and do everything I can to make the next chapter worthy to make up for this.
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Yeah, it's not quite as good. It's perfectly fine, and I love you in a totally platonic way for it, but... yeah, could've been better. Admittedly, this did feel like that thing where everything indicates this character is dead, and they use one little thing to prove he's not, and it just feels like you've cheated us. I'm okay with this remaining, but... you know, no need to apologise. I know how hard it is to maintain quality.
2406946 Once again thanks for the feedback and I will do my best to increase the quality again, and if ai fail I fail
liking the story, but is it possible for longer chapters?
2414067 Yeah, that's my plan :)