My best friend, Veronica, had turned twenty-one today, and I wanted to do something nice for her. Everything was set: the food was ready, her gift was neatly wrapped on my desk, our apartment looked a hell of a lot tidier than it usually did – it was perfect. Until I realized that I'd forgotten to get a cake.
But then after braving the snowstorm that had blown in and getting to the bakery, I found two strange-looking, half-frozen butt-naked women on my way home.
This was not how I had expected the night to go.
[Background for the cover art by this guy on deviantArt.]
Chapters (3)
I don't normally take interest in human stories of any kind, but this one caught my eye. Keep up the good work!
:D love it !!! Keep up the awsome work !
So far nothing bad has caught my eye. Good so far.
Now I can't wait for what's in store!
Awesome work, man! Next Ponyfall: Majestic Royalty? Yes! Keep it up!
this looks promising
can't wait til' the next chapter!
Ah like it so far.
Stupid, sexy Sidaine indeed. Ah, this is going to be a funny one.
I can tell that this is going to be quite interesting. Please update soon.
Thanks for your kind words, everypony.
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Ponyfall? Nah, this is unaffiliated with that group. It is for the most part a very similar idea though.
2373050 Well, either way it's one of the best PoE stories I've read for ages. Keep it up, bro!
The entire chapter I thought
dafuq
dafuq
dafuq
dafuq, etc.
But yet I am being pulled toward a strange green thumb and star like icon...
EDIT: Who drew your cover art, it looks awesome!
The only gary-stu in this is Google, and that is totally ok. Google knows all.
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I must be doing something right then!
And believe it or not, I actually just screen captured my cover pic from this...eheh
...Japanese hentai dress-up game that I found a few months ago. 
Really, I did. I was messing around with it all morning and came up with that picture, plus some post-editing in photoshop.
"The first would suck because I wasn’t a damn nurse, and the second would suck because I did not want to have a Hisao-case on my hands and I wasn’t the damn Nurse."
DAT KATAWA SHOUJO REFERENCE!
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I was wondering when someone would catch that.
I like it......wanna see where it goes!!!
2378101 He stole what I was going to say!
Also it will be interesting to see what will happen when these two mysterious women wake up...
Since they used to be ponies, Celestia and Luna probably won't notice they're naked. It wouldn't make sense for them to wake up, then suddenly scream and slap the first guy who sees them (which is what ALWAYS happens in situations like these)
2369707 if mother earth likes it then I like it (see wat I did there)
Was not expecting to see a Katawa Shoujo reference here
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Hanako and Lilly
Dude, take showers more often and make em longer, godammit! And don't think that way!!
I have a feeling katie's been raped. That's just me tho
I think this chapter was funny, I did enjoy it, and I hope you add more soon!
You'd think they'd be hobo prostitudes, but no! It had to be people tripping out of their mind.
Still great so far! I could definitely see this happening.
On a related note, my harem senses are tingling. Whether it's a false alarm or not remains to be seen...
This is good. I'd love to see more!
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It made more sense to my brain when I was writing it.
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Romance isn't my thing, but you never know what'll happen down the road...
Lol when she introduced herself as Princess Celestia, I face palmed. Ok crazy lady, just talk to these nice people an they'll help you out
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Well, what else is she going to say? She has no idea what a normal, human name would be, so she went with the truth.
I really like it so far, keep up the good work.
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No I agree this would be the logical responce for her. But so too would haveing this strange person committed for psychiatric evaluation. I doubt Panda would do that... Seeing that he belives she is having a drug induced delusions. But it would be a hilarious Bad End.
2401308 Wow. That's kinda dark. Be weird if you're right.
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Holy crap, I really did not notice that. That particular implication wasn't my intent.
I can't help but feel that this story wants to be entitled Crazy Naked Frozen Hobo Prostitutes. Maybe it's just me.
In any case, amusing thus far. I look forward to more.
2403472 it comes with the stereotype. Katie strikes me more like a pinkie pie type though more than anything.
I'm just impressed that Giovanni carried two grown women at the same time, especially as they were pretty much dead weight at the time.
Not to mention he has darned good friends not to jump to odd conclusions...
Keep going! ;)
Katawa Shoujo reference Hell yes
-_-
good idea Celestia confuse the poor lad
Trippin' ballsacks!!!
other than that, I find this story to be most amusing, also I like the cover-art.
Glad your back!!!
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Moar
IT'S BACK
YAY
By Celestia's beard, I'd completely forgotten about this one. Shame it's so short though.
I wouldn't say Celestia's all that OOC, considering she's in a place where everything, including herself, is completely alien to her. She handled herself as well as can be expected, which suits her; she's likely got a lot of experience in keeping a cool head. Now Luna on the other hand...
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My thoughts exactly.
Glad to see this shambling back off the slab. Not much to say beyond that, though I do like the comparison of Luna and Patrick. ("Is this Castle Canterlot?" "Nay, this be Luna!")
Hey, nice to see an update! A small inconsistency though, Luna asked "who" not "what" ...
But that's okay, the adventure continues!
Keep going! ;)
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I figured that, in her sleepy and bleary state, Luna would assume the humans to be diamond dogs because of their semi-similar silhouettes. That's my excuse anyway.
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Makes sense.
Why no updates?