I'm a writer of stories, mainly focusing on transformation. I do want to start an MLP fanfic at some point in time to do a proper introduction to my pony OC.
26 year old Peter's life is forever changed when Rainbow Dash comes crashing into his house one day from seemingly nowhere. Upon finding that the pegasus comes from the land of Equestria and has been sent to bring him into her world, he follows Rainbow back to Equestria, where he meets some new friends.
Warnings: BIG story, some upsetting and depressing scenes (The events of Chapter Five are things that did happen to myself a few years ago)
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Good story, kinda wish there were more meetings with ponies, it's like the story is just beginning. Let the relationships evolve like Draco's and Fluttershy's did, and even then it was a bit too quick.
Also making the main character an OC alicorn is risky, they aren't exactly common so they stick out like a sore thumb. I didn't mind since I was focused on the fact that he was a dragon as well. Seriously how OP is he?
And you might want to actually split it into chapters, not just write chapter 2 but actually have a second chapter.
Oh I almost forgot, there was a few spelling errors but it wasn't too bad.
45.000 WORDS!!! GREAT SCOTT!!!
2359840 I would have responded to this last night, but my iPhone hates this site it seems
First off, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. Myself and Digitalpotatoroo (I THINK that's his name here) had a lot of fun writing it.
Second, there's no reason to fear about Draco being OP. The back story I have for him if he was naturally born into Equestria that he'd be the offspring of a dragon and a unicorn pony, thus explaining the alicorn look. He has magic, but it's mainly just to do everyday things. In his giant dragon form naturally he'll have more strength and that, but it's highly unlikely he'll resort to magic in that form, and the smaller form is pretty much the same as his pony form but with some extra endurance.
Third, I did have a version of this split up into chapters, but between the transition from an old, failing PC to a new one, I forgot to copy over the singular ones
2361898 Indeed, this is technically a personal best for me, as the last story I did that was a collab was around the 65 page mark, and by myself I can usually get a story between 10-15 pages.
2363854 Hmm a dragon and a unicorn. How would that work? There is a slight size difference... unless the dragon is only slightly older than Spike. Yeah that could work, depending on when dragons reach puberty.
I like the explanation, however he is still OP for me, at least compared to the average pony. He has magic, wings and can turn into a dragon.
Too bad that you don't have the split up version, but frankly the only reason it annoyed me was that I was on my phone and its a pain to scroll up all the way to favorite the story. It was such a pain that I didn't bother until now when I'm back on my PC. On that note thanks for replying, I forgot that I was supposed to favorite.
2379857 Trust me, it'd have to have happened with a mature dragon XD
That's your opinion and I won't argue with it. I'm not really fond of OP characters myself, I just thought this might be a unique and quirky character.
And I can imagine it'd be a trial to read it on a mobile device ^^;
2380000 I agree that he is a unique character, I also find him very interesting thanks to what he is. But thanks to his ability's I still find Him OP, the only way to fix that without changing who he is would be to limit his powers in some way (his problems with changing between his forms could be one example).
And yeah reading it on a phone was a pain, but it was my only chance to use the internet, it was better than nothing.
2391147 I'll keep it in mind, though it might be a while before I attempt to do full-fledged MLP fiction solo.
Draco buddy I'm going to tell you something I know what it feels like to be different your a dragon+pony=dragony
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that's my family
P.S
live a happy life with Fluttershy
P.P.S
Don't you dare hurt her