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    • Luna's Crossing
      A story in which Luna learns to grow up, and live her life.

      1,141 words · 233 views · 3 likes · 0 dislikes

    Note: Takes place before Nightmare Moon.

    Luna loved her sister dearly, she loved her mother, her father, and even the guards that watch her every night. Things change though, and Luna definitely doesn't love them.

    First Published
    11th Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    12th Feb 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Is anypony going to comment?!? The suspense kills me!

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    #2 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    hmmmm...not bad although there isn't enough chaos!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>??? It's only a first chapter. Discord is introduced in the next one, I'm writing it right now...

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    #4 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    0_0, sweet mother of Talos this is amazing. You've managed to do most of it well but the jumping thing only works when it's between chapters.

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    #5 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    HAZZAH!!!!

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 65w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Hey, good story! :twilightsmile:

    I hope you release some new chapters soon. With Discord. Lots and lots of Discord. :yay:

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