what the hell did I just read, dude so many grammer errors....

>>55745574

Obvious trollfic is obvious.

I remember when this was featured on ED. Still hilariously mind-bending.

I rate this story a BILLION STARS.

This stoy alasw makess m e derp!

The best thing about this story is the accurate depiction of average, slice-of-life elements in everyday pony life, and the quiet reflection upon common angst of the target audience.

The next best thing is SPIDER SEX!

Thanks to this fic, my brain is attempting to drill its way out through my ear canals.

wat

HOW DARE YOU GIVE THIS ANYTHING LESS THAN FIVE STARS?!

Ahem:

[GODLIKE] Every once in a while, I open my mail box and am instantly hit with a sense of absolute peace.  The feeling is indescribable.  This happened just yesterday, and I immediately forwarded the submission to the pre-readers to share the newfound joy I was now blessed with.  

Four of them came back with super powers, and the other seventeen cryogenically froze themselves, because absolutely nothing else in this world could possibly top the experience they all shared while reading what has come to be known as the ultimate masterpiece of human intelligence.  

Pre-Reader Quotes

"Every once in a while you get the chance to read a story that sets the bar for it's entire genre. This story will forever be the one by which all others are measured. You are witnessing greatness here ponies." -Pre Reader gifted with the ability to create life.

"There's a certain level of writing that simply cannot be explained to the regular reader.  It cannot be comprehended.  It's quality is so far past it's time that few, if any, will be able to recognize it's greatness." -Pre Reader gifted with the ability to cure any illness, and imbue their patient with immortality.  

"A boundary shattering tale that pushes the envelope on what fanfiction can be."-Pre Reader gifted with the ability to travel across time and space.

"I wept pure hot tears

Literature so awesome

My world, now spiders"-Pre Reader Gifted with the ability to Haiku about anything

"I came"-Pre Reader... I'd rather not mention his new powers.

Author: Argembarger

Description: After a spell misfires, Twilight and Big Macintosh find themselves trapped in a world like none they've ever seen before. Together, they will face adventure, hardship, loss and longing, as their shared experience brings them closer together.

I remember this, the amount of LOLs i got cannot be measured with only 4 dimensions

weve been trolled :)

Thiz... thiz iz, da bast fanficl Ive evl reed.

This fanfic is the best fanfic ever!

I remember this story. It was awesome.

WTF AM I READING

Still the perfect story.

This is so said and depessingng. i criede wehn the spidr babids had to gos int o the forst to life adn be separate from momym adn daddy adn tiwight wsa refusd loev from bestest alicorn

ps that hurt my fingers to type that

"lik dis if u cry evrytim" But seriously, what the fuck? Even more seriously, this is the greatest thing ever, in the history of ever.

> Finds a dramatic reading.

>Be reminded about my own arachnophobia

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Hmmm ...ok

Its Half Life, FULL LIFE CONSEQUENCES

I'm listening to Azekahh's reading. This is freaking awesome.

This fic is so awfully bad it has reached a state of bad fanfic nirvana five stars

If you can stomach this, Cupcakes, and My little Dashie with no break in between them you must be some sort of cyborg or something not human. That is assuming you've never read them before, or in the case of Dashie that doesn't matter because you just know what happens next and it hurts emotionally in ways you didn't know were possible

f lol nice story about   and

I remember when micthemicrophone did a dramatic reading of this and airshipping is magic, I had never laughed so hard before

Nice story, but TOO MANY F*CKING GRAMMAR ERRORS! This could be a good story, but you just had to f*ck it up.

This reminded me of Octocat's adventures.

Genius. Pure genius!

oh.. Sweet Celestia. I've never laughed so hard in my life, it's so idiotic that it entered the time warp and became awesome! The part where they just spit out Spike bits and reassemble him.. Oh Celestia.. I need a minute

Wonderful, simply wonderful

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>>161720161720 You don't recognise the most famous trollfic of all time?

"being alive was more good than eating bugs was bad so she did it"

I think you should have put "more gooder" for extra lulz

What.. What the.. I.. WHAT.

You should be happy to know that this has become a sort of legend as a troll fic. Don't feel good about yourself. Don't you DARE feel good about yourself. This is the first time I've actually needed to read it out loud to comprehend it, and the logic in it is.. I don't even have a word for it. Someone make a new word to describe this.

The part that confuses me the most is that I find it funny. WHY AM I LAUGHING AT THIS?! I should hate it, but I don't. This is either this fanbase's worse story or the world's best riddle.

Oh, you've posted it here now, Argem? Excellent!

The thrilling conclusion to a thrilling saga.

I NEED A SEQUEL

Wha- I ju- I mean... wh- uh... Ok let me regain my thoughts. *ahem* Dafuq?

sir i think you have a future in trolling

Oh so everyone on EqD just says it's the best cuz it's a trollfic? I don't understand, what, why, how, the hay is this.

Spike amz dead.

I jsut laek teh fraze "solid black mass of itchy screaming death".

horribly written. i like the plot though.

This. Just this. A trollfic that will go down in history. I Crai teirs Afrtur readgying dis storeh. (My brain hurts after attempting to match the way the story was typed )

THIS IS HILARIOUS!

try writing the story again but, in Word document, then copy and paste it over here

>>469126469126

Uh, alright, whatever you say.

It was a beutiful spring daty in equestrias when tilight sparkle was in her study where she lived. Spike! She sayd, come here spike! And spike camed over to her, What do you want Twilight spike said and twilight said "Spike I need you to gt me the book of magic ok spike said I will get it for you and he went over to the bookshelf to get the book for Twilight Sparkle. It was a dusty book and spike almost sneezed but he didn't.

He gaved the book to twilight and she said thank you spike go away now" and spike said ok I will go away and he slided away like a dragon. TWlilight opened the pook to chapter 5 and said ok magic please happen and the magic began happening in her horn and she did the spell!

it was a magic spell and she knew that it was magic which is why she casted it because her cutie mark is magic because she is a uunicorn.

The spell made everything bigger and eight. "why is everything bigger and eight?>?" wilight said. oh it is because i am a spider now

spider twilight wet up to the bookshelfs to find a fix spell to fix the spell. but she culdn't open teh books or even grab them because she was a spider and not a unicorn and her horn was gone and also she did not have a voice that coudl speak loud enough for spike to hear her adn go get her book for her adn even if she did she probably woulnt want to because Spiek would see her as a spider and maybe get scared or angry and then stomp all ove r her which would make her dead spider twilight abd that is bad.

and then she herd a voice well not really a voice but it sounded like another spider! she oculd understand the spider clicks and she new that it was a spider and that she had to go and talk to this other spider because that is what spiders do (talk to other spiders)

a red spider appeared and said "helo twilight I am a big mac spider now?? why' and twilight spider said "uh big mac spider is it because I casted a spell that wsent wrong" and the big red macspider said ok well maybe but can you fix it and twilight said

oh ok said the red spider wlell if we are going to be spiders forever lets have spider sex and twilight spider said ok well but i don't know how to have spider sex and big spider mac red said it is probably easy ok are you ok with this i am asking permission to have spider sex with you

twilight said i dunno spiders are creepy and weird

and then big mac said twilight WE ARE SPIDERs

and then tiwlight said you have point ok i guess we haf to make the most of it right

and then big mac said that is the spirit yes ok spider sex

they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.

after the spiders sex twilight felt funny on the inside like something real not normal. big mac spider said is it ok twilight spider if i live here with you so we can have more spider sex and twighti said i dunno i gues so but i dont want to hav spider sex for a while that was werid  and big mac spider red said this is ok i will wait for you to be ready beacuase i am a gentlespider and twilight said ok i appercieate it.

chapter two : spiders

there was a living like that for a while time where they lived together and had some spider sex sometimes but only when twilight felt extra sorry for big mac. spidke was downstairas and crying lotgs because he didnt nkow where twilight went to and twilight wanted to go make spike feel less ad but she was a spider and couldn't talk?

twilights belly got bigger and bigger and she didn t know wat was hapneing and then spider mac red big said uh i tink you might be getting redy to have spider babies : and twilight said WATTT and big mac said "eeyup" excupt for he couldn't actually make that word sound because he was a spider and doesn't have pony voice boxes anymore.

twilight was real sad and upset because spider babies were gross and creepie and wierd and she creid an little bit but big mac red spider gaved her the biggest mos happy hug ever and said i always watned to be a daddy and even though i didnt want to be a spider daddy i will try to be the best spider daddy ever and be here for you all the times and ok? and twilight felt the most happy but still was not happy at the same time.

then one day twilight had to laye spider egegs adn it was the most strangest it felt like a bubble wrap bubbles being poopd out. and then she was sad and upset agin but big mac spider was tehere the hole time and made her comfort. he borught her spider food which was bugs and twilight was finally ok with eating bugs with spider big macs help she nkew she had to eat them to be alive and being alive was more good than eating bugs was bad so she did it and was sad and upset because the bugs were gross but it was ok becas she was a life.

bbig mac spider helpd her gaurd the eggs for many many many many days until one day the egs were very big and had dark thins movin around inside of them and twilight knew they were her babies and she was kind of happy a little bit and big mac was happy because she was happy and then she was even happier because big mac was happy but they didnt hav espider sex because big mac new how much twilight didn t like that because it felt werid and also she didnt want to have more babvies and neither did he really but he was redy to be the best spider daddy so that twilight didndt have to worrie.

a fter a few more a days the eggs started moving and they knew that the eggs were going to hatch because twilight was smart and she knew all about eggs. they watched the egg pile of eggs move around and then they heard little baby spider clicks and they new it was the baby spiders and they watched even more much.

The eggs all hatched simultaneously and vast multitudes of tiny spiderlings swarmed out in a screeching horde. Twilight and Big Mac started to scuttle away as quickly as they could, but they soon found that they were in no real danger - the spiderlings had no intention of killing their parents. They witnessed a solid black mass of itchy screaming death cover every surface of the library. Millions of spiders continued to swarm out of the eggs. The flood seemed to be endless.

Spike lay curled up in his little dragon bed, moping. Things hadn't been the same since Twi's dissappearance, and it had been over a week since he had any decent ideas about what to do about it. He was depressed and miserable.

Suddenly, he heard a scratching, high-pitched noise coming from upstairs. His curiosity overcame his melancholy and he plodded up to investigate.

He was intercepted by a solid wall of spiderlings pouring down the stairwell, which overwhelmed him almost instantly.

Spike had just enough presence of mind to scream, but doing so did nothing but allow the swarm of spiders access to his lungs and stomach. The spiderlings drained his fluids for sustenance, and Spike died in horrible terror and agony.

chpapter three  : spiderday

allf the spiders runed away from twilight and red spimder mac and tehy didn't know what to do tbecause they were so many spiders of the eggs. big Mac said "hey you spider babies you are my spider babies now litsen to me!!!" and but the spider babeids didn't listen because they were making too much noise but they wuld of listen if they could because mac spider was they're daddy and they luved him and there mommy tewilight more than any of the bugs even the juicy ones.

big mac spider said to twilight spider "i am so sorroy I am the wurst spidder daddy even tho i promised I was gonning to be the best one even " Twilight felt really bad and sorry for big mac spider because she knew that he tried his best and but if there wasn't an biggest problem happening she would give him the hugs.

twilight thought hardest with having ideas and then had one idea "spider big come here and help me ok" and spider mac sd alright what do you want me to do twilight and?" twilight said I need yo to throw me into the spiders and red mac said are you sure?????/? you tohugt spiders were creepy and wierd! and twilight said I knmow but i need too do this ok becaus big mac, WE AR SPIDERSs and big mac said ok"

Big mac pickeded her up by her legs with his legs and thre wher at the spider babies. She screamed a little bit but not really becasue she was trying to be brave like rainbow dash would be brave if she was a spider and flying at spider babies.

Then finally after falling for time she landed in thes pider babies and they diddnt know she was their mom because they were still just babies and crawling annd twilight spider tried to click at them to stop but they didnt know waht to do because babies are confused

Big mac watched all the babies carry Twiilight away and he felt the most terribel and sad and said ' it is my fault that twilight is being carreid away by spider babies because i aws the one who had spider sex with her and she made babies because

I have to resuce her! he sed"

chapter 4: when spidrs are

I dont like this ? twilight spider thoguht I wish big mbac waer here he nows what to do every time!

but big mac was chsasing her and the spider pabies and she didnt know it

it was wery exciting.

all the spiders ran thru equestria and all the ponies were scared and ran into house but except for one pone who stood in teh street and angry!

Stop spiders! she said and they stopped

an big brown spider jumped off of her hed (her head was gray and her coat was gray too and her hair was straighT) and the spider was bronw and big and made angry click.

Twilight heard the clicks clicking and knew that the spider had name: miriam webster! and miram webster spider told all the baby spiders to stop being bad! tehy coudln't do what they did because what they did was something bad to do! and they had to stop and listen to their mommy spider like spiders do every

Twilight mom spider thoguht rely hard and all the baby spiders watched her and then big mac got over to where she was and said 'twilight Im so glad your ok!" and twilight said "ssh I'm thinking" and big smider mac said "oh ok sorry

Twiligth said I love you baby spiders but you did bad thing and made my friend spike dead! why you do that? and pelase so go make spike better and then go to everfee forest wer u belong as spiders! it will be" ok?

and the spiders said ok mommy and they wetn back to where sipke was and tehy barfed all his juice back and he was better! spike said t"henk you spiders you are my best friends ' and the spiders made a happy face and then they hugged but this time they didn't drain all of spike's vital fluids

then the spiders all listened to mommy twilight and wet to the Eferfree forest where spiders live happy and free and it was good

Twilight and big mac spider red talked to miram and the gray pony listened (the gray pony was pinkie pies sister from cutie mark chronicles and she worked on the rock farm in case you were wondering) and twilight clicked thank you! to miriam webster and miram websetr clicked its ok listen twilight spider I am a wizard and I know yo and the big mac spider are not spiders at all but ponys who are spiders by accident?? do you want to be ponies again

chapter 5 : the end spider end

twilidn and big mac said yes! we want to be ponies again and miram sadi ok here I will do my spider magic and the spider magic happened! twilight and big mac were ponies again! they gave each other a big pony hug and because they were friends from being spiders together and it was good

Miram clicked and they cudlnt understand it anymore because they were ponies and not spiders but the gray pony (pinkie pies sister) could undersand and she transtated the spider speak to pony speech and so they could talk some more

Miram said i hope you learned something from being a spider and Twilight said yes I did I will always remember! and I am aslo happy because I made a big mac friend  and big mac said eeeyup and then big mac said listen twilight about being spiders and twilight said its ok big mac I understand and we can still be very good freinds forever ok? and big mac said ok

Thank you miriam I said and miraim said did you learn anyhting and I thought about it really extra hard and I sed yes I did learn something but I will tel celestia about that ok? and miram said 'that is fair" and

then I saw my bestest friend in the world Argembarger who was the most hadnsome aleicorn in eqeustria! and Argembarger siad "helo twilight it has been a llong time" and i feel mysef blushikng because of how charming Argembarger alicorn was and I said yes it was had been a long time do hyou think we can spend some time alone together?? and he sed "I don't think so Twilight I have lots of important things to do becase I am an alicorn but mabe someday ok" and I was very sad because he was teh niceset alicorn ever but I said I understand adn he flew away and it was amazing!! I was so impressed and amazed and happy taht I got to see him

then I went back to the library and found spike and gave him the biggest most happy hug ever because he was happy to see me because I was gone for so long because I was spider  and I said spike pease take a leter and he said ok I will take a letter spike and then spike took a letter

Dear Princess Celestia, today I learned that spiders are creepy, but being a spider is better than being dead. Your faithful studnt, Twilight Spackle

the end of the storei! you can stop reading now thank you for readingh my story

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>>469267469267

Did that help? Let me know if there's anything else I can do to make your reading experience the best one possible.

this story is so confusing, I just quit after the first paragraph. BRAIN OVERLOAD!

MY BRAIN HURTS! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!

>>469516469516

How can you judge a story without reading the whole thing, that is very unfair!

No, I refuse to even look at this story!

Begone evil monster!

*Story spits out previous readers brains*

"Holy FUUUUUUU-"

"it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore."

This caused me to laugh my ass off.

>>57345734

when you typed godlike, i couldnt help but read the entire post in morgan freeman's voice.

>>113119113119

twilight sparkle who was shining armors sister was one day in a library reading a book

>>469168469168

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>>579940579940

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This story is made up of so much win.

i lost it at  "it is probably easy ok are you ok with this i am asking permission to have spider sex with you"

VRISKA

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But seriously, this is obviously the cornerstone of MLP literature.

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>>201242201242 This isn't the most famous trollfic... I think we all know what that is.

>>674690674690 Well, Cupcakes was more just a horror story. This however is designed to piss people off. Or at least that is my point of view as a grammar nazi.

.>>674772674772

I think he meant My Immortal

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This is so intentionally terrible...I fucking love it!

This story was so brilliant I had to stop reading half way through so I could have a sneaky one in the bathroom.

Wow, the spelling and grammar in this are atrocious. The author clearly didn't even bother to run this through a basic spellcheck. The descriptions and metaphors are uninspired, to say the least. Twilight is totally off-character, displaying none of her usual planning and thoughtful nature. She seems to have lost about half her IQ points. Spike's character is totally flat, and I felt no empathy for him when he died.

Big Mac's character is spot-on though.

The plot is rather disjointed and there are serious pacing issues. Events just happen one after another without allowing the reader to absorb the meaning and implications. Twilight and Mac's roles as parents aren't given the exploration they deserve, and the uncomfortable, lonely nature of their relationship could stand to be elaborated on. The bit about Spike's revivial belays an ignorance of basic biology, and his reaction on coming back to life is unrealistic. The ending introduces two new characters who seem to serve only as a Deus Ex Machina to wrap up the plot and restore the status quo.

Twilight's letter to Celestia is passable, and though I'm not a personal fan of TwiMac shipping, the shared experience between them this story presented might actually serve as a believable basis for a further romatic relationship; I'm glad the auther left to the viewer's imagination what happens next.

In conclusion, despite a few redeeming qualities and an interesting premise, this story has dismal execution. The author would be well-advised to put more care into the technical aspects of writing (grammar/spelling/word choice, etc.) and perhaps read some more literature to get a proper sense of things such as pacing and character development. I offer my services as proofreader for any future works from this author.

Also, the author may expect a bill for the monitor and keyboard that have been ruined by my spitting my drink upon them, and the medical costs associated with treatment of my bruised ribs from the uncontrollable fits of laughter the story induced. I trust it will not be necessary to get the courts involved.

These words of genius will be inscribed in a wall of a museum one day. Forget Stephen King, Edgar Allen Poe, George R.R. Martin, etc. This man is clearly a genius of literature perhaps the next Da Vinci right here......No matter what fan fic I write now, it will never compare to this masterpiece of spider sex, fantastic grammar, no spelling mistakes what so ever.

"He slided away like a dragon." Genius.

He sed... Lololilolololololuli

Yes what

this is my favorite story and big inspire

i think of it today

Didn't know this fic was so famous lol but now I know why it's infested youtube.

Oh good lord, this is on FIMFiction. I need to clone myself so I can cry in every corner at once.

Famously stupid maybe... or something. yuchy. oogly groos. nsty. Most looking forward to now watching Rainbow Dash presents on youtube; will probalby make this story worth having been written.

I'm a fan of MacxTwi, but this . . .

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Hey all, here is a video, of this story, being read my people

>>674690674690

Dianetics?

Oh hai dolan i ded nt thank i wud sey u hur ritin sum funficshun

WATATATTATATATTATATTAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAA?

I love this so much.

*looks at tags*

Is Flam one of the spider babs? I bet he is.

Big Mac: Twilight, is that you? I recognize your hairy purple butt.

Lol, thanks FIMflamfilosophy.

Gooby, pls

The first time I heard this story was by FIMFlamfilosophy on youtibe. It was ersum.

dont know what the fuck this is..... but i liked it

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Brilliant.

This may be the greatest thing ever written.

I'll read this once you learn to spell... and write.

The greatest troll fic ever written. Truly sir, you are a master of your craft.

>>16000071600007

il jsut leve thsi is a one here for you to have lclic on with mouse http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29698/Pepsi%C2%AE-Twist

free cookie to anypony who can take this story, edit it grammatically and rewrite the plot into a moving romantic tragicomedy about the married life of Twilight and Big Mac as spiders. Free brohoof to anyone wiff da comen sencts to knw tihs us a trlolfic and nut cmment aboot hou bad iait iz.

I understand this is a trollfic, but how in the world did ur brain not crap itself when intentionally butchering the english language? I for one could not write like that...u sir have godlike skill!

"Barfed all his juice back" is the single funniest thing I have ever read.

....wut