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Charliemane


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After the debacle at Ponyville, Trixie finds making ends meet becoming harder and harder. And when vandalism strikes a heavy blow to her wagon, Trixie is forced to stare bankruptcy in the face. How will she find the money to keep going?

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Excellently done! I commend your fic.

I was hoping to see a little more plot development, particularly with Mrs. Pie's loudly voiced doubts, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. The characterisation is excellent, the writing is sound, and I liked how well it fits into canon. Bravo!

This story is both great and powerful, and any who say otherwise are simply neighsayers. But, this is a fiction written by Charliemane -and- starring the most powerful unicorn in Equestria - was there ever any doubt?

Excellent fic. Trixie's character was done really well and I thought the integration with Magic Duel was perfect. Bravo!

Very cool stuff.

"The road to Hell is paved with good intentions."
Very nice story. Is there a chance of you giving your take on what happened to Trixie after she apologized to Twilight and ran out of Ponyville?:derpytongue2:

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I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

I don't know if I'll follow up or not. I've certainly kicked a few ideas around but nothing's really stuck too well yet, but we'll see.

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Oh, oh, I got another

In life, the road to darkness is a journey, not a light switch.
-Lex Luthor.

And for the author: Very good chapter, good sir. Here's your mustache. :moustache:

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