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  • M Way to the Top

    Vinyl Scratch loves her sister - so much so, that she'll risk everything to help Octavia achieve her dreams. With luck, she'll even get to have a little fun along the way.  · Lapis-Lazuli and Inky J
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  • T The Code's Apprentice

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  • Thursday
    Halloween Story

    So, ladies and germs, a fine night of fright approaches us all.

    Unfortunately, the special story we'd intended to be ready for this - "Twilight's Treecastle of Terror." - a trio of sexy, scary, disturbing short stories featuring our favorite ponies thrown into frightening what-ifs, is not going to be done in time. Unfortunately, our plans for getting it done were undermined by illness and real life bullshittery.

    The first of these short stories, however, is done. So, I am going to ask you, my beloved readers, if you would like us to release this first story as its own stand-alone short, and plan to release "Treecastle of Terror" at a later date with the other two proposed tales (And perhaps a few more.)  Since I am going to soon need to put more work into Magnificent 7 and, with NaNoWriMo about to kick off, my proposed project for the month-long event.

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  • 1w, 12h
    Happy Birthday to Lapis!

    Today is his birthday. No fic updates today. He's going to spend the day playing the new Civilization game and eating tacos.

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  • 1w, 4d
    The Adventure Begins!

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  • 2w, 9h
    State of the Author Update - October

    Merry all hallows, everyone!

    Yeah, It's been a while since the last one of these, but... well, School is hard, okay?

    So yeah, the reason for my (and Inky's) recent silence has been the specter of school and homework hovering over our lives like Zuul. Unfortunately, neither of us is the Keymaster and so we are forced to fight this all-encompassing infestation of ghoulish boredom with sullen and uncompromising bashing of our heads against the homework. Ahem.

    With that being said, stuff is settling down enough for me to send up a flare and let everyone know what we're up to over here, and give you guys some information on stuff to come. First up, lets handle the elephant in the room.

    The stuff we're writing.

    This has been a big hanging shame over my head these past three months, especially given how much I love to write and how prolific I was this time last year. I blame all of this on my current classes being both boring and time consuming, but what are you going to do?

    Regardless, Inky's ability to write at this present moment is actually pretty limited. He's doing what he can, and we appreciate him, but right now Nuke School takes priority. This also means I myself am greatly slowed as I am forced to go hunting for editors and assistants in keeping me on task. Fortunately, that's getting a bit easier.

    Right now, I'm primarily shooting to publish the first chapter of The Great and Magnificent 7 at some point this weekend, with an undetermined update schedule. (Possibly every two days? We'll see if the momentum I have keeps going.)  With a brand new major project, The Avatar's Call scheduled to follow it starting in November at some point.

    But between now and then, I'm going to be doing some short, fruity and fun stuff in order to help me get back into the mojo groove of writing. Prominent amongst these will be at least one small Codeverse story to whet the appetites of my loyal readers as I gird my loins and prepare for one of two major releases before the end of this year.

    The news of which leads me into my next question....

    Important Stuff regarding The Codeverse

    Firstly, I'd like to thank all of my followers for being patient with me during this quiet period and especially as this year has been a deal less productive than last year. Fortunately, I'm hoping to fix that.

    As some of you probably remember, I made an ill-conceived attempt at making some cash off of my fanfiction musings that basically crashed, burned, and went nowhere. However, from the ashes of that attempt I have been spurred to finally stop beating around the bush and confront the demon that I have so assiduously stayed away from until now. The concept of publishing original fiction.

    Of all of my creations so far, only The Code's Apprentice and its constituent world building and concepts speak strongly enough to me to actually make an outright original series out of. First off, I think a female-centric adventure series could be a major draw, especially as I would work hard to avoid a lot of the teen-angst / Twilight-esque drama that simply does not represent my own creative views. Secondly, the Codeverse as a concept has a lot of rich potential to be exploited that I simply cannot do in the environment of an MLP fanfiction.  So like so many other authors before me, I have already begun to file off the serial numbers in the hopes of launching an original fiction series, with the first book tentatively titled "Student of The Code" which will be the origin story of (tentatively named main protaganist) Lillian Lorne and the discovery of her ability to manipulate the world around her through the mysterious power of The Code of Harmony.

    So what does this mean for my Codeverse stories on here? Well....

    That's where things get complicated.

    Serious Talk: I absolutely want to write The Code of Dissonance. If for no other reason than to deliver on the promises of Queen Twilight's interactions with Dissonance's power, the conflict between the hidden hooves of the Solar Crusade and the new forces of social equality in Equestria, and how the corruptive nature of power will cause a great many interesting things to happen. With that being said, I need to be very honest with myself. Above everything else, I want to write for a living. Since no market apparently exists to support the creation of fan works in terms of fiction (As opposed to fan works in terms of visual art, but whatever. I'm not going to dwell on that.) I need to break in to original fiction and start taking my chances there.

    That means I'm going to need to devote writing time that previously would have been tapped for Ponyfiction and ideas that previously would have been tapped for these stories as well. That means that Code of Dissonance becomes a much harder project to devote my time to as I want to avoid internal confusion until I establish the fundamental differences between my Original Code stories and MLP code stories.

    I believe it is important to deliver the best possible product and experience to my readers. So at this time, I am forced to make a difficult decision about how I will proceed with my writing. That decision goes like this.

    Code of Dissonance will be written, regardless. I want to make that utterly clear, I am GOING TO WRITE THAT STORY. I promised a sequel, a sequel is coming. However, it may be a while before I am ready and prepared to write that sequel. How long is a while? I cannot say for certain. If Student of the Code is published and does well, It will probably be a lot sooner rather than later but that's crossing bridges that haven't even been built yet.

    I would like to stress that I'm not in danger of becoming homeless or computer-less, but my budget is what you would call tighter than a corset. I have almost no wiggle room in my monthly expenditures. I have no fun money and a very small 'disaster' fund. Until these things improve, I am going to have to pursue naked commercial ventures over passion projects. I hate this, but this is life right now. IF anyone out there has any suggestions or ideas on how I can improve this situation (I already have a job and no, I'm not getting a second job.) feel free to sound off in the comments.

    Those are the two big things which have been clogging up my brain lately. If anyone out there has questions about what we've been up to or what we might be up to in the near future, please feel free to speak up! I'll be making another blog post in the near future to muse on some story-related things, so keep an eye out for that.

    Thank you all for your readership, and I remain ever humbly yours,

    Lapis-Lazuli

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#1 · 80w, 10h ago · · 3 ·

A sexy, romantic One-Shot inspired by the #FimFiction chat room.  This one goes out to you guys.

You flatterer you. :twilightblush:

But I somehow feel I do not belong to the ones you meant. :raritydespair:

#2 · 80w, 9h ago · 7 · ·

Original, sexy and fucking amazing overall. 1000/10. Faved, liked, loved. :heart:

#3 · 80w, 9h ago · 16 · ·

Please chekhov your guns at the door.

#4 · 80w, 7h ago · 1 · ·

>>2447073

You. I like you.

#5 · 80w, 7h ago · · ·

>>2446985 Thanks so much for the compliment! I really appreciate it. :D

#6 · 80w, 7h ago · · ·

>>2447590

You are very welcome!  Here, I'll be following you for more good fics :twilightsmile:

#7 · 80w, 6h ago · · ·

You should throw an AU tag on it to ward off the people bitching about how those two are not related in any possible way.

#8 · 80w, 6h ago · · ·

>>2447760 Given that there's no offical canon one way or another, meh.

But sure. Why not.

#9 · 80w, 6h ago · 3 · 2 ·

>>2447776

Wellll, if you put it that way then theoretically the canon is that they haven't even been in the same room together.

But my policy is not to judge. If you say that they're sisters, then why not.

Fanon > Canon.

#10 · 80w, 6h ago · · ·

>>2447796 I Suppose it's worth the tag, given that peoples headcanons say otherwise. I just really didn't think of it.

#11 · 80w, 5h ago · 8 · ·

Interesting: check

Good pacing: check

Good characterization: check

Interesting idea: Double check

Leaves audience wanting more: check

Decent word count: triple check

#12 · 80w, 2h ago · · ·

Thank you to those who've read, faved and liked! Spread the word and keep new readers coming in! :rainbowlaugh:

#13 · 80w, 1h ago · 1 · ·

Absolutely amazing writing.  

Yin
#14 · 79w, 6d ago · · ·

I have to say your timing is perfect. I found myself thinking (hmm. i just realised, i actualy have yet to read a single story with vinyl and octi in it. I should look for one.) then poof, your story shows up. im rather happy with this and like the idea of the two as sisters.  I rather enjoyed what i read and have faved it. ^_^

#15 · 79w, 6d ago · · ·

god damn that was awesome

please never ever stop writing

#16 · 79w, 6d ago · · ·

During the club scene.

#17 · 79w, 6d ago · · ·

that was just...stup-azing!!!

no dictionary word can describe this so I had to delve into my headtionary and bring out stup-azing for it....because that's what it is...stupendously amazing:moustache:

#18 · 79w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

Words fail to describe how excellent this story is.

This one goes in my above favorites category.

#19 · 79w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

I'd love to read a sequel to this... it may have been partially clop but this had the tone that I've been looking for in the terms of romance with it. It is really awesome in my books! Thumbs up times 9000.:pinkiehappy:

#20 · 79w, 5d ago · · ·

gonna have to replace my mouse from hitting the fave button so hard....

#21 · 79w, 5d ago · 1 · 2 ·

Not very original in the actual content of the story.  It's the same as hundreds of other fics about them, besides the incest part.  Good writing, but PLEASE do something more original next time. :pinkiehappy:

#22 · 79w, 5d ago · · ·

loved it :D

if only 22k words werent such a roadblock

#23 · 79w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2457547 You mean to having lots of readers? Yeah, I agree, but whatever. Some people liked it, read it, and that's good enough for me.

Besides, I learned a lot writing this thing.

#24 · 79w, 5d ago · · ·

hi there. i got some doubt : what did rarity gave tavi? a posion?:rainbowhuh:

Your main idiom is spañish. Isn't it?

Pd: nice story man, really cool:twilightsmile:

#25 · 79w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

>>2459249 As to what Rarity gave Tavi - well now, that would be spoiling things. (Hint: Im gonna write a sequel to this.)

Also, my main language is English actually. I just have very weird English.

#26 · 79w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>2457651

sure, its totally worth your time. but you could easily split it into chapters...you already have those small breaks^^

#27 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2459711 Sadly, it's already submitted as a one-shot. Can't really change that.

Maybe for the sequel.

#28 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2459756

that would be highly appreciated :twilightsmile:

#29 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

seriously great story words can't praise this enough keep writing ill be watching

#30 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

This story was certainly interesting. I commend you on a well done fic. :moustache:

#31 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

Nice story. Good word count. I'm a sucker for long stories :twilightsmile:

Noticed a small error though. Near the end just before Vinyl plays the piano, it says:

"Octavia gently squeezed her sister's shoulder, lifting her hooves up to take off the DJ's shades and set them down on the keys."

and later : "Vinyl couldn't restrain her smile in return, her shades lost somewhere along the way. "

But made no mention of putting them back on. Just a small thing I noticed.

Good story. Looking forward to sequel.

#32 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

Well, I'm not into the whole thing where Vinyl and Tavi are sisters, and I do notice a lot of bronies are jumping on that bandwagon, but whatever, it was OctaScratch clop so I can't argue.

#33 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

very nice! love the whole sister thing!

#34 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

Heh. Bistro named Pommes Frites. In Equestria, that actually makes sense! I mean really, if you don't know the 'between the lines' part of that name, you end up with "apple fries".

Always love seeing other languages I know (some of) included, even if it really is nothing worth mentioning.

#35 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2463347 Hooray! Someone got it!

Also : I enjoyed naming the head chef "Allez Cuisine" too much.

#36 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2463366 I just got to that part, and it's equally amusing. :twilightsmile:

#37 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·

Hoh, shit. This was amazing. Not just incest smut, actual romance and story. You, sir, are amazing. :moustache::twilightsmile:

#38 · 79w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Longest, most story driven bit of one-shot clop I've ever read. You get a like, a follow, and a mustache. :moustache:

#39 · 79w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Daammnnn, this made for an absolutely wonderful read! There was D'awww, there was emotion, and there was good clop!

One thing bugged me though, why didn't Vinyl stay in contact with Octavia? From my understanding she had moved out from the parents before Vinyl ran away.

Besides that small issue, which could just be me being stupid, this was wonderful, and the first time I've ever seen or thought of them as sisters.

Edit: I was going to follow you but I just couldn't when I saw that you had 69 followers, I just can't do it.

#40 · 79w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Intriguing, captivating and breathtakingly moving..... Bravo, simply bravo. :twilightsmile:

#41 · 79w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2472543 Vinyl was on the run for a very long time - almost 8 years. Speaking as someone who has known a few runaways in his time, it can be very hard to keep track of things like addresses and such.  Especially when you have cut all contact off from the primary caretakers of the person you are trying to contact.

Hope that helps explain things!

Oh and my followers number has increased quite a bit, if you haven't done it yet. :pinkiehappy:

#42 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·

It's... Nice.

But the eye descriptions for Vinyl's eyes almost nearly killed it for me.

Petty, I know. But I suggest you keep the description of Vinyl's eyes as nonexistent.

Who can complain when nobody knows the eye color?

#43 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·

Found out the pawn shop owner never sold the darn thing. He's been using it himself, keeping it in his shop. Said he knew I'd be back one day for it and kept it tuned. He wanted it to be there when I came, the crazy old coot." there was some heavy emotion in Vinyl's voice. Some old pain that Octavia could not simply stand there and let be.

I wanna hear that story....

It was pretty good.  Somehow a lot longer than I thought it would be - I would've expected to get through 8-9k words easily, but it took a ridiculously long time :derpyderp1:  Meh, that's just me, though.  I found a couple lines that I really enjoyed - for instance, Octavia's thoughts on techno.  I think some of the scenes could stand to be a little bit longer, but it was still good.

Grammar-wise, I noticed a problem that was consistent enough to bring up.  When you end dialogue, your use of punctuation and the subsequent capitalization of the next letter is somewhat off.  Just remember that all the normal rules are still in place - if you end a sentence, you use a period and capitalize the next letter.  If you don't end a sentence, you use a comma and don't capitalize the next letter.  The only time when that's different is with exclamation points and question marks, where if you don't end the sentence, you still use them, you just don't capitalize the next letter.  So just keep that in mind :twilightsmile:

#44 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2447796

Rarity Micro-series comic.  Released after you said that.

#46 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2504545

Hey, don't diss the comics.  I know Andy.

#50 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2507986

Alright... guess you don't want to know about the pony who may, in fact, be a prostitute.

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