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WARNING:THERE IS A LOT OF SWEARING IN THIS!
Basically this story follows the reactions of some of my favourite characters from videogames and anime when they end up in Equestria and what happens to them over the course of the story.
Cover made by DeadlyLittleBunny (Aka. Galeking on DeviantART)
>>232743 flutter shy is the element of kindness so i dunno it looked good on paper. the thug thing i got from a show i watched the other day and the twilight at the bar thing... well before i wrote this, i noticed about 2 or 3 story's about twilight and alchoal so i thought it was a good idea i guess.
what about all the other charecters.
>>232754i've been reading a lot more fics than usual latly that stay almost as true to the charichters as though it was cannon so it might be because of that that i'm noticing small details other people wouldn't but to me it's mostly in the reacations of pretty much everyone besides the ones you crossedover cause i don't have a predetermaned idea on how they would be since i never watched their animes also you gave human names to some ponys
>>232788 well i was trying my best with the anime and videogame charecters. i kept travises ego and swearing in tact, i made krona shy as hell for the most part, tao a idiot (i love this charecter in the game but she's a absoulute idiot. there's one part were she's trying to catch a criminal, find's him and then befriends him!), i kept sonic as sonic i think, marston like marston i think ( i never finshed red dead redemption because my little bro showed me the ending! buck sack!) and noble 6 has nothing revealed at the moment and since all the spartans in the halo series have little personality, i can get away with a lot here.
>>232844 well taokaka is, as i said before, a idiot but i'm willing to forgive this because she's adorable! she act's like a little kid, she's energetic, she keeps calling one of the charecters in teh game boobie lady for obvious reasons and is genrally a funny charecter.
krona is very shy, just like flutter shy but unlike flutter shy krona was made to be a weapon and sufferd her whole life from her mother!
krona's mother bassicly made krona's life a living hell, she almost lost her sainity and when she put in prison and her mother got let out... well let's just say that i swore a lot on that day. also she's got the most interesting power i've ever seen ever. she can control her own blood and harden it to protect her from injury. AWESOME!
travis is a otaku assassin that wressles, watches anime, fights with a light saber, i mean beam katana, and is well kinda ego tistical.
he always acts like a badass and i do hate him sometimes for how he acts around his job in the first game.
in the second game he went throgh some charecter development but not that much.
hope that cleared some things up.
>>232911Eeyup? it's a freaking fandom you could find a dimond tiarea X spike story if you tried hard enough or simply made one in fandom's the law's of physichs, personalty, time, and cannon all bow to the insane like were pinkie pie on steroids coffe and red bull
>>232923 well i've found luna+fluttershy, macontosh+zecora, spike + sweetie belles (creepy), but the oddest one that's got me curious is the macotosh + rainbow dash.
also giving pinkie pie red bull: ARE YOU MAD!? SHE'L OPEN THE 4TH WALL! wait that's a good thing.
>>232933okay so marstion seems right except you forgot about how he has a wife and son back home though i can ignore that and noble 6 seems okay though if i can say something? you forgot she had cortana withy her when she was transported and sparten armour can both house AI's (Artifical Intelegnce's) and allow them to use the external and internal speakers to talk to the people around her also if you decide to alow hwer to have some wep's brought along remmeber all spartens carry around bear knifes and in the case of guns ether a assult rifle and a pistol or a assult rifle and a sparten laser also adding in dual wield energy swords as a third hidden weapon isn't out of the list of possiabilty's
>>232972 wait marston has a wife?! (note to self finsh red dead redemption)
and don't worry, i have the cortana thing. i'll have it in the next chapter for sure as for weapons, well i had the idea for the magnum and energy sword but not much else.
note: think of way for weapons to appear.
1)pinkie pie breacks 4th wall. 2)celestia summons weapons 3) speacal delivery from ditzy?
>>232989 let's try this comment again
4)you just never freking mentioned them
5)twilight enchants them to be invisable so as to not scare everypony
6)she left them under twilights guest bed
also i think Gilda X Luna was the best out of those possiabiltys and john marston left his guns in his bag also i have a plot twist idea cortana speaks rommanian because it's viata'a native tounge and so she has to translate what cortana says? google has a realy good translator if you have an account also 23 comments by 3 people and only one did less than two comments
>>233025 i'll go with number 6 for the weapons.
the romain thing sounds good but wasn't cortana designed to understand all languages or did i miss something in halo?
i guns in the bag for marston will work definatley.
the invisible guns thing has given me a idea though
>>233047nope but she has immense intelegnce so realy after about a day or two she would understand them wich explains why she dosen't enter the conversation and realt i liked numbers 4 and 5 the most but if you go with 6 we could add on a shit ton of extra ammo that was in the pelican wich therby allowed it to come with and we can give her more wepons as well like neadlers and a jet pack that for some reason works for a short time than magicly refuels...hmmm maybe it's powerd by light from the sun and moon? ahwell she's with pinkie so that can explain it for now
>>233067 well i did not know that about cortana. i assumed that since she was a computer program she could't adapt but what i did not know that.
number 5 by the way will be used but in a slightly differant way. let's just say it's be a massive surprise.
and hell i'll give more weapons. how does, 2 energy swords, a spartan lasor, assualt rifle, rocket launcher and of course her own fists!
the jetpack? i was thinking armour lock. the amount of times that has saved me online is in the hundreds.
still jetpacks are awesome.
>>233107i was actually thinking about the camo that also addes a silencer to your gun but a jet pack just seamed like more fun also Cortana is the most advanced powerful and unusualst of all AI's being a "smart" (not bult for only one tsk in particulear but for any and all tasks) AI means she can adapt to anything could hack you computer deleate your acconts take all your money and break all your relationships in only i'd say about 0.055 seconds if i had to estimate also AI's are bassed of humman brains wich die in the basing process but she wasn't because to give her spartens everything she could to help dr.Halsly creator of the spartens, their shields, their armour and their best weps and some ships had her braind cloned and then used the 1 surviving clone to make Cortana and gave her every possiable edge avalible so she's the smartest most adapteve AI ever to be made even better than many of the ultra advance forerunners who built a weapon capable of ending all life in the galexy in one fell swoop and she is also based of the brain of the smartest humman to ever live (the game is difrrent from what happens in the book but whatever she's still justt as smart ether way) though due to equestrias lack of technolgy she can't hack satalites and such since thay arn't there so she's basicly stuck inside viats armour though she wouyld only send a small part of her out to access the computers anyway
>>233154 okay so in short, she's an evolving computer? AWESOME
well considering the lack of tech there in equestia and considering that master chief has gone through some of the toughest situations against the flood (god i hate those ugly buggers) which don't really have technolygy, so cortana would be pretty useless in this situation... wait could she hack a spartana laser? if so i 've got a plan.
also i never read the halo books so that explains my lack of halo knowledge.
>>233178well she can use the suits HUD cammeras and audio recorders and such to see what's going on to provide tacticle data also she is practicly a humman (they don't call it Artificul Intelegence for nothing) just a humman who within 0.055 seconds could ruin your whole life and deleate all files onlinhe showing you exsistance since she can hack anything also she can't hack a sparten laser but since it hooks up to viatas HUD to use it's scope (same with snipers and such how the hell do you think there such good shots?) she can use it as well to see what's happening and who says magic with some help from pinkie can't make some death machine she can remotly control from viata's armour (it has data storage equal to that of a cramped space ship the size of a freaking mountin thanks to dr.Hasleys genius...so in short it's mposiable to recreate) so while she can't use any machines here she can provide tacticual data nad be your best freind also she can speed up your reaction time while she's in the armour and help you learn other langueges and such and dude it's freaking 11:30 in england why are you still up?
:>>233250 okay so she can't hack a spartan laser? damn that would of been helpful in the campaighn... but i digress.
in my plan i did make noble 6 a unicorn, just like tao so maybe they could amplyfie the spartan laser with magic? and possible cupcakes.
and the only reason i'm up is because... i have no clue. time went by i guess i'm gonna sleep now so i'll look at all this again tommorow... probaley unless i have something planned that i forgot about.:twilightsheepish
>>233292the second icon didn't show up and good night also i think making her a unicorns a smart idea and how about we say she used magic to make it so she can use two powers? but no armour lock i've seen that used way to much it's just to OP for those who know how to use it correctly i know she should get the camo one though
>>239035that's what i did with me as a pony and it turned out to be pretty good i've found tons of books with a slow monotinous and boring begining wich end up being awesome and actually are some of my favorite books i've ever read (though counting fanfictions they have literly claimed my top 3 favorite storrys)
>>239229 it was on facebook were i did these reviews. and while i can't really say anything about a person's choice of music, that song was just horrible, espechally from a reviewers point of view because they have to analyse the song in depth by listening to it multiple times.
yeah i had to burn it out of my mind afterwards.
>>239313well i can still tell you how to put youtube videos up
I find it a bit silly that at one point you say that Noble Six can't speak, and then a couple of sentences later, she speaks! 
Also, it's occurred to me that if Crona's there, then surely Ragnorok should pop up every now and then like he does in the anime? Crona's been in this story for a couple of chapters, and Ragnorok hasn't appeared once. It's totally out of his nature to just sit back and watch.
'Pinkie Pie stopped in her tracks with a look of fear on her face.“You kill people?" She asked.'
People?...
......
>>2209229 meep!
"hides under a blanket"
mareep: "coughs" okay there we, now sir there will be a sequeal, the sequel would be a romance with twilight and viata, focusing on viata recovery to full health, and if mr ezio can find a editor, i would be mature for the last chapter that would focus on umm... close quaters lets say. any questions?
>>2212107 "comes out from under the blanket"
firstly, i already have a editor for my ponies and mon story, he'll proberly edit this story as well, but if he dosen't then i'll gladly take you up on your offer.
as for other dimensions, well, there will be a story that takes place in this kind of world, involving dinky finding a dimension spell and going to many differant worlds, such as okami, brutal legend, bulletstorm, castle crashers and others. and it would be cute
*comes out of hiding slowly.*
Ok, that sounds like a really decent game, original if you ask me. And if that is true then this what I have to say. Make it that wherever Dinky goes she makes a little side effect to the whole dimension, and in this case when she goes to the okami dimension amatrasu ends up a super powerful, chibi dog. Oh god just imagine if Dinky has to resist hugging that little fur ball of amatrasu. I think...I'm... Raybony has fainted from cutness overload
twilight: if i may pass a message?
sure twilight.
twilight: if there is a sequeal to random worlds, and me and viata have... well, you know.
yes?
twilight: umm... is it possible that she could lead, i have no idea 
you read a lot don't you?
twilight: yes i do.
well, read a book on clop then.
twilight: umm.. "blushes" i dunno...
>>2213671 Dude, don't you ever do that to me again. They had to make me hear Friday to cure me.
And what is that about Twi and Viata? Are you scare that you wont have any experience on the subject because you're virgin? As far as I know she is also virgin. Or are you implaying that you want to take the relationship to as far as parenthood and wanted to have a foal with her? Seeing as you could do a spell to change one of you into a stallion.
twilight: well i-i... "blushes bright red"
aww come on twilight, viata is a virgin too so cheer up, your both in the same park i guess.
twilight: well i wouldn't mind having a little foal... and it would be nice to see how fun it can be to have someone in bed...
awww that you go.
>>2213760 I hope Viata doesn't mind but I woud like to see Twilight being the one to be in charge on the bed if you decide to go with the whole sex change thing. I'll love to see her whole character change from what she normaly is use to......She's right behind me, isn't she?
twilight: yep.
viata: uhh hem, am i interrupting anything?
twilight: not really, just something for the sequeal.
viata: aren't i heavily injured for most of the story?
twilight: yes, but near the end you and me...
viata: "blushes" oh! well... thats okay then.
twilight: it is?
viata: yes it is but i'm a bit clueless when it comes to this kind of thing.
twilight: oh i have a book somewere proberly.
well it says in the story script, by this point they are in love, and twilight has cured viata of her nightmares, and they do love each, so you two would like to show your love for each other.
twilight: "blushes" well okay!
viata: what nightmares? i don't have nightmares!
since your a spartan, you've seen some f***ed up stuff on your travels, so you would have nightmares of the rest of noble squad dying and-
viata: okay i get it!
twilight: "hugs viata" calm down, and hay, i bet it'll be fun! i hope at least.
viata: i should be careful, i'm fairly strong without armour.
>>2213998 eeyup, you two have fun.
"puts a label on the door saying "cute unicorns having fun, keep out" and then closes the door to give the two privacy"
tia: "appears out of nowere" hi there mr ezio
hi tia, did you want to ask something?
tia: something in your story were i spy on twilight and viata while there having fun?
well i..
tia: how did you know i did that in my spare time!?
lucky guess?
>>2216556 *mean while in twilights room"
twi: and... cheakmate!
viata: buck sake!
twi: told you i was clever, now for what you promised.
viata: okay fine, what was it you wanted to ask?
twi: well... i want to use your laser weapon in the story for a experamant
viata: my spartan laser? are you insane?
twi: its for science!
viata: ... fine, but you owe me a night in bed!
twi: i was already going to do that
viata: i love you already twi, this is the start of a beautiful relationship. 
>>2219179 Just what is taking those two so long? Even I know that this 'game' doesn't last for very long. Did thry fall asleep or something?
And how is the pokemon equestria doing? has chaos started spreading out to the other parts of the world? Wait, Chaos, just what would happen if Discord got a pokemon? *pictures the idea on the head* 
I think we would never see equestria the same. Although he could make a decent and funny pokemon professor.
>>2221557 oh the pokemon thing is going just fine, discord hasn't appeared yet, but hay, he'll proberly get a shedninja or something.
viata and twi: "exit the room"
twi: hi there!
viata: we had loads of fun
twi: yes, lots and lots of the fun, i think the bed may need to be fixed.
viata: told you i was rough
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And I believe it's spelt "Crona" not "Krona". That was really annoying me. And who's Mao??
your logic, it is flawless! 
And it's always laggy when I try to draw and do stuff. 
Image: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_LU9zQVi7mpQ/TKEh5SeZnWI/AAAAAAAAAE0/V0oewSQr-LQ/s1600/what-the-fuck-dancing-retards-demotivational-poster-1219205519.jpg
Twilight, if there is one thing I know is that you cant learn how to do this stuff from books. My advice to both of you is to just go by what you feel is right, you are doing this out of love. Riiiiiight?
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