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Hope is the faith of the young. Losing everything she holds dear, Puppysmiles embarks on the adventure of her life to find her mother, her hopes of meeting her again driving her through the horrors of a world not of her making. Too bad the Wastelands doesn't care about hope.
The fiction is a side story of Fallout Equestria, a quite famous fiction published on Equestria Daily. I tried to use just the setting with the minimal interference with canon characters and even keeping the presence of the original ponies from FIM at the minimum, but it's not easy.
About where the story is going.... well... it's Fallout, everything that could go wrong already did ^_^
Well, they were 6 fast chapters: I'm publishing a chapter every 2 days, as soon as I finish re-reading the GDocs; when the publishing om FimFic will reach the published on GDocs expect the pace to slow down (it won't take very much, the story on GDocs arrives at chap 9).
For the comments I was actually expecting something like this: Pink Eyes is a side story of a fanfiction, this cuts by far the potential readers.
So, Lonesome Pony, why are you writing a fic and publishing it if you don't expect somepony to read it?
I'm writing this story because I can't play a Fallout Equestria pony RPG campaign and this story contains more or less the adventures I was going to propose to an eventual party of players, with me giving the resolution to every adventure from the point of view of what was meant to be the mascotte of the group and now is the protagonist.
As soon as I have a party of 5 interested in the story that's enough for me, because as a game master i wasn't going to get more public.
But if you have something to say about the story feel free to comment or ask and I'll try to reply, just don't ask spoilers, Puppy Please.
Aww, poor Puppysmiles.
Hope her mom is aliveish somehow(Downloaded AI in a computer,ghoul, ect.). Seeing her mom dead would probably break Puppy and make the story quite hard to write I would think, but I'm sure you have a plan for that.
I'm really liking this story. It's well written, has an interesting plot, and one of the most unique main characters I've ever seen, especially for this type of setting. There are some grammatical errors, but less than alot of stories I've read.
Looking forward to the next chapters, just don't be too really mean to Puppysmiles! Puppy please? That would make me sad.
Thank you for taking the time to comment ^_^ I'm sorry for the errors, the story goes trough a couple of pre-readers (two pre readers that help me a lot) but I lack an editor from chapter 2 so I have to deal with the adjustements myself and I'm not even English first language.
About the story, I don't want to spoiler in any way, but her armor of ignorance is something mighty ^_^
Na. I wasn't looking for any spoilers, and her ignorance has shown to be truly mighty, as is the strength and weakness of innocence, and why she can smash anything in her way with no guilt. I am curios if she will knowingly kill any ponies during her travels, and how her ignorance will hold up to that. Again not looking for spoilers, just thinking.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
It is incredibly awesome.
First thing, it is refreshing to see foal travelling wastelands. Not some expirienced mare or buck, but little, naive and cute... canterlot ghoul. Yeah, that's too. With her Mister Voice and very, very neat luck, manner of speech and ability to save somepony without even realizing it she is one of the most interesting dwellers.
And because she's ghoul she pretty much invincible, at least very resilient and regenerating. Good to see confused bandits, they surely not expected ghoul filly fresh from Canterlot.
Okay, I totally love her. She is low-int high-charisma Canterlot Ghoul that knows password for nearly everything, friends with AI, and kills bullies with Rock of Destiny. I love how Trigger Happy reacted at her zombie-ness.
Also, do you plan to sent it on EqD? I think they'll add it without second thought. I'll try to sent it myself but they accepting stories only from authors...
>8259
Nightmare Puppysmiles, mh? We'll see...
Thank you very much, i was wondering if there were music sheets for that song, maybe I'll steal it sooner or later, it seems fitting for Puppy trying to be menacing.
Can't... spoiler... must... resist...
On a lighter note, I was told by one of my two pre-readers: hey, but it's Nyx! Now I don't know if I should read Past Sins just to not go on an already used story or if I should avoid it to not get influenced...
Please, PLEASE, PUH-LEEEAZE don't read Past Sins! It's have overly written, boring, annoying, repeating again and again long angsty inner monologues in lines like "I am monster, but I don't want to, but I was born monster but I don't want to be one I did something good but I'm monster and they see monster in me" OVER AND OVER AND OVER
DO NOT MAKE PUPPY angsty whiny Nyx, please!
If that's the problem, I dont' think that Puppy has enogh brain to have an internal struggle... remember that she worships a compass...
And just to put a spotlight on the concept, here's a little treat from chap 11 (not really a spoiler)
"Some heroes fall, some heroes get killed, some heroes disappear in a Stable and never come back... well, our hero gets spanked."
DJ L.P.
I stil lthink that I have to read Past Sins one day or another, but I'll follow your suggestion and read it when P.E. willi be finished.
i... I don't know what to say. That chapter is a masterpiece. Puppy's reputation finally worked for her benefit - ponies didn't shoot at her now! Well, it's because they know she's harmless and stupid but still.
Fun trick with "Nightmare Voice... too long, you're Creepy Voice now!"
Henri and Puppy bonded just well, and it's fun that Puppy can be shot in the heart for fun and just complain about it.
"leave here everything heavy you have in your bags"
- leave everything heavy you have in your bags here
"even more important, it needed time that they didn't have"
- even more importantly, it required time that they didn't have
“ARE WE ARRIVED YET?"
- "ARE WE THERE YET?"
The mercenary spat on ground.
- spat on the ground
Those are the ones that jumped out at me a lot. Good to see you're still moving forward with this one still.
Thank you for the kind comment, I'm happy that you like how Puppy and Henri are faring: originally I planned for her to appear only in chickens/gunslinger girl, but I guess that a presonality like hers needs space on the scene.
I wanted the world arounf Puppy to be influenced by her interesting adventures, but I didn't want her to be some sort of fabled hero; whiny presence helps me keeping her "legend" at bay.
Thank you super much for the corrections. There are construction in the English language that I simply can't see; everytime you find something wrong and point it out Puppy is happy because her story gets better.
Thank you very much, I'm happy to see that the way I depict my chars is working; I'm always afraid of cutting too much on descriptions and such, so this kind of feedback tells me that somehow I'm still walking on the right trail.
On a lighter note, I have the flu and it's possible that chapter 11 will be delayed, I'm at 2k words right nao and 4k to go, but I cant focus on what I am doing. I am also looking for a decent image to use for this story, but I am not exactly a master of the brush; anything will do, as long as it is FoE related, if you have in mind something fitting, please tell.
This is a great story. Puppy is an interesting (not to mention cute) character to follow, and I can only hope that nice things happen to her. But of course, this is the wasteland, and hope can only go so far.
I suppose the only thing I can say is: can I has more?
Thank you very much, actually I got an offer for a fanart in a PVT message, we'll see ^_^
It's quite weird to reply now at the message because we had already a good chance to talk during the editing, but I think that a thank you even here won't hurt and will keep intact my policy of replying to all the messages I can ^_^ also, cheers for my editor! Yay!
Thank you very much for the kind comment, I'm happy to see that you liked the story, I'm trying to keep a good quality in the plot, but Puppy pratically writes herself the most of the time; really, that filly is a menace... =P
Eh, I try to sneak some meme here and there, mostly putting them in Puppy's lines, I think that a lot of them fits with her (since Puppy is somehow the pony bersion of a lolcat I find it fitting ^_-)
Well, it seemed almost mandatory to give her the satellite cannon, considering how you find it in N.V. - And it's powered, it needed only to launch some self repairing spell and to adjust the orbit of the satellites that form Ponymedes Net... will Puppy use this Chekov's gun? I have no idea, we'll see.
On a lighter note, chapter one has been completely edited and re-uploaded, being now at least 20% cooler and 100% cleaner (again, than you uSea)
Aaaaand i have no idea of when chapter 12 will be on, at the moment it has a word coint of 2, usually it takes a week to write the raw, so please be patient.
Oh, and Puppy hugs you all! Thank you everypony ^_^
Oh the satellites are powered just not calibrated. Mime just handed Puppy Chekov's Gun of Mass Destruction.
Luna damn ya, Mime, but ya always make me tear up everytime Puppy comes across some long lost sign of her mother. And everytime, I'm hoping that Rainy Days somehow survived whether as a ghoul or in suspended animation or as an uploaded AI.
But then again, a bittersweet ending where Puppy moves on but is loved and gland care has just as much attraction and seems more pointant and in line with the FE-verse. It ain't entirely a happy place.
A perfect counterpoint for a too dark "Project Horizons". The abundance of memes kills the immersion somewhat, but is still pretty funny. Thanks for the great story, I'm going to follow it as closely as I do with FOE and FOE:PH (FOE universe - so unpony, yet so entertaining ugh! Curse you grimdark!).
You mentioned that fan-art is already being taken care of, but maybe you wouldn't mind if somepony else try it too? Before drawing anything (with radsuit and all) I'd like to know if you're OK with this design: Pre-war Puppysmiles (or the mane should be curly? or straight? etc.).
Eh, won't spoiler the ending, sorry =P
I'm sorry for the sad parts but Puppy's story has that premise; at least I hope to deliver them in a decent way (I.E. not too boring)
I know that the memes could kill the mood, but I considered that this story has a protagonist so dumb that somehow for her talking meme should be natural and gave me the opportunity to have some more fun with the usual uber dark atmosphere. I'm happy that you put P.E. next to FoE and PH, but I don't think to be even near to Kk 's or Somber's skill. Actually I'm reading the others side stories too and I find the most of them to contain original and interesting ideas, mixed with styles that I like a lot.
Regarding the Fanart, your Puppy is super double cute and she's more than okay, I guess that i'll have to begin keeping a gallery ^_^
At the moment, if you give me the permission, I'll start putting the link into the Gdocs version of the story.
I'm trying my best and have a small staff of 2 pre-readers and an editor that help me keeping the story on the right trails; chapter 12 is halfway through the first writing, still can't say when it will be on, I'd say friday night or saturday morning (as usual, just pre-read but not edited, since uSea is editing the whole thing from the beginning it will take a bit before we reach the chapters but I'm not sure that you'll e eager to wait untill the whole thing is edited.)
Now, some commuications: after a chat with Anon Samurai, it was proposed the idea of creating a FoE side stories post on /pony/, similar to the conversion boureau one, before doing anything Anon is checking if there are enough authors to make the whole thing work; I'll keep you informed of any advancement in the project and if you have stories of FoE or are planning on writing them, feel free to join.
There is the draft of the basic post that wil lgo on on a Gdoc made by Anon Samurai, but before starting he'd like to talk with as mmany authors as possible, here's the link
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KaoFWVlFlMjYR2KmTWxwCYnvTZQcjEULO9YHSaqqk9U/edit?hl=en_US#
Chapter 2 editing is almost finished, expect to find it edited in a few days
Aaaaaand, still waiting for the FoE side stories post on EqD to update; at this point i think it should be soon, it was updated more than a month ago...
From Mime it's all, thank you for your nice comments and see you soon!
P.S. Puppy wanted to say hi, but Henri is teasing her so it will be for the next time =P
Interesting, it has a number of grammar and spelling mistakes, but, it can be overlooked for some odd reason. Must be cause Puppysmiles ain't the brightest... and that just sets it for the whole story.
I'd think the perception and intelligence stat should be 3 instead of 4. If 5 is the average...
thank you ^_^ Molten Gold is mostly a mummy robbing tombs, it seemed quite ironical to me, and very karmic
thank you, i put it on chapter 1 in the Gdocs, soon enough I will put it even on FimFic, i have still to decide how. Looking at that picture makes me feel bad for all the bad things i did to her ç_ç
Rainy Days parts can only be sad parts, so far. For the orbital gun... (deletes 3 lines of spoilers) no! must.... resist... spoilering....
I know that the work has some big flaws on the language side, but I finally got an editor and we are slowly workingto give Pink Eyes a better shape.
For the INT 3 vs 4 problem, it's a big problem, because INT 3 is the complete retarded but 4 seems too high... Puppy will qualify for a 3.5, exactly in the middle... if I am going to lower INT what am i going to raise? AGI? STR? STA?
Perception seems to me already low enough, consider that Puppy more than not noticing things simply doesn't give attention to them, but she finds stuff everywhere, so she must have a minimal PER, at least to notice them.
Ithink this is all for today, just a little communications: last night the FoE Side Stories document was discussed and we began working on it; quite soon it will appear a post on /pony/, similar to the conversion bureau post, it is meant as a place where every author can post his work in progress and projecs, looking for some help or simply a honest opinion. Feel free to join, for now here's again the link to the document on GDocs
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KaoFWVlFlMjYR2KmTWxwCYnvTZQcjEULO9YHSaqqk9U/edit#
chapter 12 is 75% done, it needs a lot of pre-reading and such, so don't hold your breath waiting for it... maybe by the end of this week, hardly soner.
From Mime it's all, thank you for your comments ^_^
P.S. Puppy took home a parador today, he's beginning to chew through the barricade, I think that me and that foal are going to have a talk about pets.
Nightmare Pup lies on the horizon...
SolOS is going to be awful disappointed when he realizes that not every town has a convenient mind-control array ready and waiting for him.
Oh, and the Steel Rangers may end up loving Puppy, if only for the technology she's inseparably attached to.
As always, a wonderful blend of adorable humor, action, and foreshadowing.
A few unintentional spelling errors here and there, but nothing to worry about. However, I was afraid you wouldn't update again. I do hope you carry this story of yours all the way to completion. More so, I hope that you have fun with it - there's not point if you don't like it. Keep it up, I look forward to more.
>>14232 
have to say its a strange feeling but im really hopeful that when she runs into the steel rangers it will be the ones of the Applejack variety im really hoping for it 
>>14282 ya i know were your coming from Ive seen to many writers give up a story or even writing without giving any word of warning :L But i think it would kill a little of me for not being able to read up on Puppy Smiles adventure 
I'm sorry I'm a little latye with this reply, but I think that now the stripes explained itself ^_^
applejack variety, you say? we'll see... mmmmmaybe...
thank you ^_^
Well, if I'll reply to this I'll spoiler a little too much, but remember that SolOS has a lot of methods to get what he wants, maybe mind control isn't anymore his option number one...
I'm sorry about the errors, uSea is editing chapter 5 in these days, but there are like 75k words to edit, so it will take some time before it's done, plase be patient and cheer for uSea amazing work! Also, check his/her stories, they're super sweet!
Chapter 13 is more or less half done, I won't toss a day because last time I was late, sorry ç_ç
What else? The post on ponychan is done and running, plase take a look at it and comment the various authors, a lot of writers are putting effort in creating a FoE Side Stories community and their fics are well written and interesting
have a link
http://www.ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/58852.html
I'm putting together a small gallery, so far there are 3 pics from 2 authors, have the links - all links are SFW
Puppy before the megaspells, by Easteu - http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/3350/puppysmiles.png
F.E.S. MK IV, by Easteu - http://easteu.deviantart.com/art/F-E-S-MK-IV-263047282
The Ghost of the Big-52, by Sip - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6697704/
thank you for your kind comments and for your attention
Mimezinga
P.S. Dead paradores smell. A lot
And I'm happy to see Llama back! I missed you ç_ç
Eh, thank you for the advice but as you can see, Sip was working on the real deal, I hope you like it ^_^
Thank you very much, I hope to not screw it all in the ending.
Can't answer to these, sorry, I think you'll understand me ^_^
What else?
We have a cover, because Sip is great! the complete gallery of puppy's drawings is in the Gdocs version of the story, at the bottom of chaptter 1, have a look, there are both easteu and Sip's works
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BFXFvkhcBln3BrsOAjF3KERPgx7GwdbJh9MP264T_MI/edit?hl=en_US#
and here is the direct link to the cover in it's original size on furaffinity
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6715167
Chapter 13 is under editing, i think that it will be out before the end of the week end, uSea is doing a super great work!
The post on ponychan about the EqD side stories is a little slow, please if you have the possibility give it a look and a comment, there are a lot of authors working on it and I think they deserve some feedback.
http://www.ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/58852.html
I think that's all, thank you for your attention and for all the comments!
Mimezinga
P.S. Puppy invited Henry at home today, now my fridge is empty ç_ç
Wow. So much win.
It seems that 'nightmare' posessing Pup powered her talismans. Not to mention she's ghoul AND Child of the Pink Cloud.
Henry is awesome as always.
Naming pony with lyre at her cutiemark Lyra is genious! Pup really outdone herself! And she used Captain Andromeda's gun of Awesomness! I can't believe how cool she is now.
>>5566 I've been following FO: Eq, and have read some side stories with other characters. I would think that with so many ponies out there in side stories doing some good, we would've herd some sort of DJ Pon-3 speech about one of the side characters. I also think that it would be a great collab for all the different minds to come together and write a few chapters with all the different characters interacting in such a way that moves along all the different story plots and ties them together better than the "It's fallout, but with ponies" shtick. It works, but could go a little more in-depth. 
Oh Puppy, you're not supposed to take other pony's things! Didn't mom ever tell you that?
Hmm.. whatever happens next, it'll probably be just as spectacular above the clouds as on the ground, Enclave might want to investigate (well, assuming the system works at all and does not just crush the satellites on the spot :) ).
Thank you for another great chapter.
wow, thanks ^_^ I hope to keep it going on its rails to the ending (we are not that far now)
ehm I won't comemnt on speculations because It would be spoilerish and i needed someething REALLY evil to make Scold snap and admit he was a brony, something like... dying lyra's mane and call her Bonbon, seemed someething no brony could stand
Well, the bully thing actually vame by itself, seeming quite a natural way for a foal to call someone that ins not exactly a nice pony; but i liked a lot battle for middle earth, so maybe it influenced me somehow ^_^
there are acouple of collaborations going on, with more than an author working on the same fic; check better laid plans, it's nice and interesting, have a link
http://www.ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/58852.html (post 58858)
Sip is the author of the cover and he is a great artist, have a link to his gallery (it's furaffinity, so some of the things could be NSFW) http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/sip/
Puppysmiles! Have you seen her mom?
Steal is a bad word, she is just curious to see what pretty ponies carry around... remember that Puppy is a nice and pretty pony! And brushie brushie brushie!
thank you, I'm selecting a fitting song for that scene right nao, I hope it will be at least decent ^_^
thank you scroll! and thank you for the spotlight on the site, too, I'm not completely sure i deserve it but it's really encouraging all the same!
again, can't spoiler! but I must thank you for that BIG help with chapter 13, as you can see now it works a lot better than it's first version (and i'll use this moment to thank all the pre-readers, they are the real heroes ^_^ Llama Llumps, Anon Samurai, uSea, Easteu and Sip)
What else? oh yes, the next week end I'll be away from home because of a comic and games convention at Lucca, Italy, I can't guarantee that chapter 14 will be out before it, so expect a 10-12 days waiting before next chapter, sorry.
Thank you for your patience and your attention
Mimezinga
P.S. Puppy wants to come at Lucca with me, but I really can't take her, because she's too small to wander alone in a big and scary place like a fair (if it's the wasteland it's okay, it's safer) so I'll need a foalsitter for a couple of days... i'm paying 7 bucks at hour and the pizza, but don't trash the house and don't let her paint the walls!
You... How could you write this? This is... abominable! At least with FO:E we rarely even hear of kids - and in PH they only serve as quick plunge into total despair. But you? You take a four year old, make her immortal, and knock her out for two hundred years - you _monster_! FO:E chapters are soul rending, this much, I have come to expect (Actually, given the choice between Cupcakes and the FO:E universe, I'll take Cupcakes - at least there the heartbreak stopsafter a few hundred words). But this is too much... and I have seven more chapters to read yet....
But, I suppose, as hateful as the premise of your story is, you have written it well. Which means I _will_ read the rest of this.... And probably be depressed for the rest of the day every time you update
Uhmm... I may have misunderstood what you intended here, and even if I haven't, you can probably blame the mistake on riting this before Kkat revealed it, but the pink cloud doesn't heal Canterlot ghouls - radiation does, like every other ghoul. The only reason I can think of for her to still be emitting pink cloud after getting shot and stabbed, and leaking it everywhere each time she does, is that the spell matrix is confused and has decided that the pink cloud is normal atmosphere, and so is replicating it. And, oh, great, she's met someone who remembers her Mom. This is going to be awkward.
Uhmm.. Actually, I was worried for a moment there that the Goddess was somehow talking to Puppy, but after thinking it through, she wouldn't want a ghoul, no matter how awesome said ghoul was. But Nightmare? What?
On a side note - damn you, ser. I should not be at risk of sweet overdose from a FO cross. Next you'll somehow justify Aliens making an appearance, and make _them_ cute too!
The Ponies had Orbital Laser Cannons?.. Still _have_ Orbital Laser Cannons? Wow, I am impressed. I am also impressed that the Rangers recognised it (then again, bright red spotlight shines on you during an attack - moving sounds smart). But, if she just blew up the Tower - how will she find her Mom (or are you being humane and leaving that particular plotline unresolved)?
Umm - incidentally, I just ran a search to see if maybe this was somewhere else where it would be easier to follow, aannnd - well. Why is this _not_ on EqD? I beleive this story would complete a trilogy of ... horrifying, yet terrifyingly addictive fics that make up the FO:E-verse. It must be brought to Kkat's attention _immediately_.
Gotta say, this is the best of the FO:E side stories. It's funny yet heart-wrenching. Puppy's innocence in the face of, well, hell itself, is admirable and awe-inspiring.
Her character itself is interesting enough. Develop her some more (I know that's coming) and this story might just end up being the third best of the FO:E universe.
Well, about the pink cloud/radiation thing, actually when I wrote chapter 3 it seemed a good explanation to toss in since I had to hide the real reason of Puppy's resilience.
About the nature of the nightmare, well... let's say it is A nightmane, not THE nightmare...
And when you are an old scribe from a sect devoted to technology and see red aims raining from the sky, a general retreat suddenly seems a good option... about the effect of ponymedes, you'll have to wait for chapter 14 ^_^
The fic is not on EqD because... ah... it's a long story and I'm almost sure that I have already given an explanation, anyway, long story short, it wil lbe on the side stories post as soon as it is updated... when it will be updated? I have no idea, sorry; I know for a fact that Kkat knows that this story exhists but she has a policy of not reading side sotries, so it's okay.
If you want/need a different access for this story, there's a Gdoc version. The links are on the ponychan post about FoE side stories.
I'm sorry if everything is not explained or seems off... usually there is a reason for that, but it could be simply plain wrong...
Thank you for the lot of comments, I hope to have replied to everything, if I missed something feel free to ask again.
Puppy, Puppy never changes - Henrietta
Thank you, but don't forget we are speaking of Solaris technology, it could simply not work at all =P
Well, this is a fanfiction of a fanfiction, so it's harder to get into it if you didn't read Fallout Equestria by Kkat before, if you have read it and can't get this fic in particular, well, I can see why thsi story isn't everypony's cup of tea, I'm sorry you didn't like it, maybe a day I'll write something that matches your tastes ^_^
Hi Garnot, it's nice to see you again, it's been a while since when we tried the soundtrack experiment ^_^ than you for the nice comment, I dont' think this can run for the place of the third FoE fic, but I'm happy to see that the readers enjoy it and that's more than enough... as I said in one of my first replies, This had to be a FoE RPG tabletop campaign, but for lack of players it became a story... I'm trying to stick to that concept ^_^
thank you for your attention and your comments
Mimezinga
This... This is beautiful. This is how a side story to a fanfiction crossover is DONE. I applaud you, sir or madame but most likely sir due to the ratio of male internet users over the female internet populace. I cried rivers of joy, then built a raft and Tom Sawyered that shit up, I was so happy. Between the original FO:E, this, and FO:E, PH, I am sure that I will develop four more eyes for the sole purpose of maximum reading efficiency. Spiders.
When in doubt, fire orbital lasers at it until it's a pile of smoldering liquid glass. It's the only way to be sure.
Very cool analysis of the nature of this strange being that thinks itself to be Puppysmiles. Wait... This means that Puppy is essentially the polar opposite of the Joy Can. Instead of being powered by the heart of a forsaken child, the suit is designed to sustain it. Neat.
The number of memes is to damn high!!
kidding,especially loved the "soon..." one 
this story is simply great,making me wonder what makes it so good. Probably that its different from other FO:E stories, not being so dark and more light hearted.
Puppy is simply adorable and her luck stat is 99 not just 9 lol,no idea how the world works or what she is doing yet getting things done so easily.
and the nightmare corruption in her head is just a awesome twist, what other pony has a dark influence in their mind, besides littlepip when she had the black book of course.
now if you excuse me. READ ALL THE CHAPTERS!!
Thank you very much, I actually didn't expected such a big feedback when I started tthis story, as you can easily see form my first comments... =P
Anyhow, since you asked, I'm a dude ^_^
Thank you, as i already explained the story is submitted, but the post where it should go doesn't update, I guess it's not that bad as long as it is here...
Puppy ALWAYS does something silly =P anyway the next chapter is under writing, actually at... let me run a word count... 2k words, i have to write other 4k and then it goes to the pre-readers and when it's okie dokie uSea will edit it... since I'll be away in the week end, it culd be ready in 8 days from now... sorry but I have things to do in RL
when in doubt, concentrated fire is always option alpha.
well yes, you sumarized it pretty well, but remember that there is also something that it's keeping the suit working despite the fact that at this point it should be a heap of junk ^_^
I'm actually trying to cut the memes in the new chapters, not sure if it's a good idea but I think they work all the same, so far. Actually, Puppy's luck is 10, since The Rock Of Destiny gives a +1 luck and double critical chance (with the damage of a spiked brass knuckle if you were wondering)
Eh, about the Nightmare tempting Puppy I can't spoiler, sorry ç_ç
I rhink I have no special communications this time, so thank you for the atention and the comments
Mimezinga
>>18273 eh, :ponyshrug: I also got a RL, but that doesn't mean that I didn't get chapters 6-13 into one word doc so I could read it w/o teh skoolz internet... which has newly unblocked FiMFiction.net! 
for only being banned for a day! I just wanna hug somepony, Imma so happeh! 
Also: 8 days? huh. Dunno why, but I was expectin' moar like 12... But that doesn't mean that you should wait longer, I- I just mean, that, um, welll... uh, gottagopleaseupdatewhenyousaidokaybye!
Congratulations on getting into the crawl at the top of the page, Mime! That ought to help Puppysmiles get the attention she deserves.
Plus I forgot to mention how much I love the description of Solaris's product line. They're like Looney Tune's ACME, Portal's Aperture Science, and Discworld's Blood Stupid Johnson combined.
And as much I want awesome Zeus-like thunderbolts of destruction from Ponymedes, there's a part of me that wants it to do it in an odd way...converting everything to methane for a fart joke or seemingly fizzling out only to have everything shatter at a molecular level and then blow away on the wind. Oooor...true orbital friendship beam. It kicks in a massive rush of seratonin, defusing the situation, and making the enemy open to conversion by the AR.
Heh, specualtion's the fun part of any fandom.
it is possible that chapter 14 will be out saturday, but if it doesn't happen, then it will be wednesday, since i'll be away from a connection from sunday till tuesday
Those guys at Solaris had great ideas, maybe too great... Ponimedes is 8 seconds from firing, so you'll find soon what will happen ^_^
Something else? yes, the Fallout Equestria side stories post updated, but it seems that Pink Eyes will go on its own post, can I yay?
Thant you for your attention and all the feedback,
Mimezinga
P.S. Puppy is bugging me because she wants the brushable Lyra, that filly already has a ton of toys =_=
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