2332362>>2332528 Hopping's not the only thing he does like a bunny .
Great scene here. The descriptions and dialogue are wonderful. I noticed a couple of verb tense issues, but I was too busy with... other things... to note where they were.
I'm off to sleep for now, but I'll finish this up tomorrow. So very favved BTW, I'm gonna have to make a blog post and send some more readers to this story.
Surprised you didn't say anything about Spike's tongue...
Makes sense Spike would go for mares and colts. He's already interspecies, at some point he he must have gone "Fuck it, I'm a freak anyway, and you all look the same."
this got a little too gay for my tastes. the idea of all the foals in town having an orgy; awesome. them doing it with M/M and F/F action; too messed up for me.
2725566 technically he states right off that they are all teenagers by now... so it's not really foalcon, i mean i know several 15-17 year olds who have had sex multiple times. So i don't understand why people refer to this as foalcon myself.
And as for the rest of the content, I don't mind, as someone who is bi everything is good lol.
Well done!
Wow.
Excuze me. I gotta call some friends...
Nice hop you write more like it.
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Damn straight it's a nice hop. Chuck hops the nicest out of anypony on this website!
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Hopping's not the only thing he does like a bunny .
Great scene here. The descriptions and dialogue are wonderful. I noticed a couple of verb tense issues, but I was too busy with... other things... to note where they were.
I'm off to sleep for now, but I'll finish this up tomorrow. So very favved BTW, I'm gonna have to make a blog post and send some more readers to this story.
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Well shit, with a recommendation from the second-in-command of Xenophilia, I think you have a winner here, mate.
Bloody hell, if I wasn't bi already...
I am now having questions about my sexuality...goddammit.
You still deserve all my moustaches though.
2334216 I gave up on my sexuality issues long ago, my friend.
Surprised you didn't say anything about Spike's tongue...
Makes sense Spike would go for mares and colts. He's already interspecies, at some point he he must have gone "Fuck it, I'm a freak anyway, and you all look the same."
Is everypony in this fic Bi?
Made it three chapters before... you know. Helped that two was a sort of 'boner killer' of sorts. Going to bed now, will read the rest tomorrow.
Now this is the kind of clop-fic I could never write...
but maybe that's a good thing.
Awesome story so far.
this got a little too gay for my tastes. the idea of all the foals in town having an orgy; awesome. them doing it with M/M and F/F action; too messed up for me.
2597471 Well, this is awkward... They actually nearing adulthood in this universe.
But hey, if foal porn floats your boat...
2725566 technically he states right off that they are all teenagers by now... so it's not really foalcon, i mean i know several 15-17 year olds who have had sex multiple times. So i don't understand why people refer to this as foalcon myself.
And as for the rest of the content, I don't mind, as someone who is bi everything is good lol.