Nice, Looking forward to more. Also FIRST.COMMENT.ON.THIS.STORY.EVER.

>>182038182038 Thanks a ton, I've been walking along all day with plenty of new ideas and events to place into this story, I hope that you'll like them!

>>182038182038

Second! If you don't count author comments.

Good story all the same.

>>182055182055 You could kill somepony off and I reckon I'd like it........then again that sort of thing dosen't really bother me.

>>182079182079 Thank you

Wyrn! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

....um, what? I mean fair enough he's in a bind but random crying.....it just dosen't seem right. Good chapter though.

So much... epicness.

and wow poor wyrn now onward and upwards ALLONS-Y finally I had a use to say that

>>204814204814 yes much epic

Image: http://www.fimfiction.net/images/avatars/10118_128.jpg

>>205014205014

Well thanks. It's a basic reference to my OC Maximillion. Well the outfit anyway. You basically put that outfit on this guy

Image: http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/150/f/2012/038/c/c/maximillion_fortner_by_camlio-d4oztnf.png

>>205050205050 nice

>>207083207083

Well many thanks. The author of this story is a friend of mine so I'm glad I'm drawing views to his story. He's very good at what he does he just needs someone to help him with pacing.

>>207097207097 nah I just like the story in general I just saw your avatar and thought it was cool so I finally found out how to post pictures

first and awesome I was listening to this while I read

"Thanks for the shout-out bro."

Humans as evil things

no

>>218389218389 Hey I never said all humans did I?

oh god mad herb I think thats his name thought that Twilight was Max's twilight lol

oh no he's there let the lolz commence

also I WIELD THE ALMIGHTY SWORD OF FIRST

aparantly he does anyway i wonder what that flash could mean.

An interesting story, I like the beginning!

(Greetings Wryn, this is the mod of Black-Chaos-Marazak. A pleasure!)