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TheInvisiblePony


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With a dead pony looking strangely like an older version of himself appearing in his living room, Starswirl discovers a journal containing fantastic spells and ideas, the likes of which a primitive Equestria has never seen. Chief among these is a revised time spell, allowing a pony to travel through both time and space with no time limit flaws. Never one to withhold curiosity, Starswirl sets out bounding across now, then, possibly, and everywhere in between.

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Nice intro. Very mysterious. I'm curious to see where you go with this.:rainbowdetermined2:

Could've done without the constant italics, but that's certainly nothing that'll doom this intriguing idea. I, too, am curious where it'll go next, so I will watch. :twilightsmile:

2295205 Well, I suppose I was using the italics specifically for the prologue, to help differentiate from the rest of the story. I suppose it is a bit superfluous, though. If it really turns out to be a problem, it should be a simple fix.

Oh, and I'll try not to disappoint. :twilightsmile:

Anything coming from this fic?

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