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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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"Awkward, but worth it."
This is the phrase Twilight Sparkle used when Rainbow Dash first attempted to work up the courage to confess her love for Applejack. Rainbow quickly realized that she was right--it was awkward, but worth it. What she didn't realize was just how applicable that statement would be throughout all her life. That first conversation. That first kiss. That first night spent together. That time Apple Bloom walked in on them. That first apology after their first argument. The arrival of that acceptance letter. And on so many more occasions.
Throughout it all, Rainbow kept smiling.
It was awkward, yes. At times so much so that she wished she could sink into the ground and disappear forever.
But in the end, every time--every time--it was always so very, very worth it.

Dear Tchernobog: This is all your fault. I hate mildly disapprove of your guts. Sincerely, bt.

Chapters (29)
Comments ( 451 )

Oh, this is even better than I thought it would be! :rainbowkiss:

Unless, of course, Rainbow Dash was referring to Apple Bloom. In that case, the pegasus would probably never leave this kitchen alive.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Just about killed me.

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...oh, stoppit, you...
I wrote that line and I still crack up when I read it.

Commence read.

Looks like something to dive into.

Oh, t'is gonna be good! i.imgur.com/TAf9J.png
i.imgur.com/0zTKq.png And of course, Tcher here regrets nothing, sug.

2299386 Yes, yes, let the AppleDash flow within you! :rainbowlaugh:

This competition just keeps coming back doesn't it. Well, more specifically, Tchernobog keeps coming back with his obsession with AppleDash. Then again, there are a lot more obsessed people on this site (I for example have the quill and sofa guy appear in all of my normal-universe stories). But he hooks me up with good AppleDash, so no complaints. and no complaints on the story either. Perhaps a little more thoroughness/length would've been nice, but a small complaint.

This fic is not destined to fulfil the 'missing their fifth anniversary' prophecy, right?

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Hopefully there are no sharp rocks at the bottom...
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Well, at least, I'd like to think so. And judging by the response (it hasn't even been technically approved yet) quite a few people think so, too. Hope I don't disappoint.
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Thoroughness / length meaning longer chapters, better descriptions, less dialogue, or what?
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Oh, it's no prophecy, if that's what you're asking...

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What I'm asking is, that I don't hope that it will follow your prompt to the letter since this is an elaboration on it, isn't it?

Sure enough, it described it when Rainbow had to miss their fifth anniversary for Wonderbolt detail.

My good sir, I believe you have peaked my interests.

A fave, you will get.

Love the misdirect with RD kissing the pitcher. Classic!

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Oh, don't worry. I'm not that cruel. :twilightsmile:
I think.
*cough* that chapter is already halfway written *cough*

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Then I hope I continue to deserve such a gift!

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Even in my sleep Data is watching me... denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw629_130819885463.gif

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Thanks! I try.

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I know, right? :rainbowlaugh: I couldn't resist.
They'll kiss for real (and for awkwards) next chapter.

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Well, we better dispose of the chapter then huh? I demand you write fluffy perfect AppleDash:pinkiecrazy:

Mr. Bahatumay, I'm looking forward to your updates and will keep a close eye on you! :pinkiecrazy:
... No pressure

Three is a "flow" of downvotes?

i thought big mac was a tad bit to forward for his character, but i also kinda liked him this way. seems more like a big brother when he acts that way. outside of that, awesome chapter!

YOU!

You are never allowed to worry again. That was sweet and funny and this whole fic is shaping up to be amazing. There should be more "like" buttons for fics like this.

Oh man, this is hella entertaining. I like AppleDash and this is just so cute and hilarious all at once... really well written. Please continue. :rainbowwild:

This... this is even better than I expected.

But this part, right here?

“Nyeh~!”

I completely lost it at that.

You are not allowed to stop. EVER.

...carry on.

I hardly ever admit it when I squee at something, but dammit, I squee'd so hard at this chapter. :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

This story is definitely made of win. :moustache:

media.tumblr.com/2d92d780bac85aa214db929ee9c8304a/tumblr_inline_mk74p7mOpw1qz4rgp.gif I can't stand still and can't wait for the next chapter! :rainbowkiss: And see all of those comments? Awww :ajsmug:

2320653 As the eldest of two younger siblings, I can totally relate with Mac in here :rainbowlaugh:

2320650 The red tides approach...

Goddamn cute chapter, and props for that. I loved Big Mac here, how he's alternately being helpful and teasing Applejack with his better knowledge in relationships. The banter about french kissing was probably my favorite part... It does sound really nasty when you don't know what it's like.

Please continue, 'cause this keeps getting better and better.

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*laughs* I know, right? "Three downvotes? Cry some more!" :flutterrage:
Nah, I was expecting at least one downvote or at least one comment on the pun "deus ex Big Mac-china". I thought it was hilarious, but some people really hate puns. I dunno why. I think a good pun is its own reword.

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True. Come to think of it, I don't think he's ever laughed in canon... But I figured he might be a bit like me; a bit quieter when around many people but much more relaxed and open at home around just family.
And besides, as the oldest child in my family, I know I can't pass up an opportunity to poke fun at my younger siblings :trollestia:

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Glad you liked it and I'll try not to disappoint in the future. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Ever?
Ever ever?
Careful what you wish for...

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That makes me feel successful. Hopefully the next few chapters provide plenty of squee-worthy material, too.

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Well, with all these nice comments fueling my creativity, you might not have to wait very long at all. :ajsmug:

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Thanks! I think they have a good sibling relationship, and no sibling relationship is complete without a little teasing amidst the good advice.
It totally is! First time I heard of it, I was like, "and people do that on purpose?"
*cracks knuckles* And trust me, I'm just getting started...

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Reword... O U! :rainbowlaugh:

And Big Macintosh has laughed on the Hearts and Hooves Day episode.

Anyway, cute, hilarious, and in need of MOAR! Please continue. :pinkiesmile:

Too cute!! Keep it up ^_^

"Ah have my ways."

:rainbowlaugh:

Poor AJ and Dash. I'm so loving this. The fic title is so appropriate. :heart:

This is simply not true. The Equestrian universe Their Maker is just as much a sadistic bastard as ours is.

Fixed that for you. :derpytongue2:

......................Words don't describe........................the awesomeness......................

the universe is a mentally twisted jackass.

>_< The first thing I thought when they mentioned garlic bread was, "WHO EATS GARLIC BREAD ON A NIGHT LIKE THAT?!?!?!" Too cute, too funny, and keep going ^_~

Rainbow had been expecting a few different reactions. The one she hoped for the most was a, ‘Mmm, that’s good!’ and maybe a hug or something.

Shut up. Hugs feel good.

Rainbow is taking lessons on how to break the 4th wall by Pinkie?

I guess that'll be...
*puts on sunglasses*
awkward but worth it....?

This was very cute. Looks like i'll be following another story. Dammit.

Man I keep on loving this every chapter this felt a lil too familiar but I reckon AJ and Dash will have a much better result than I did ;) at least I hope they do any who keep up the awsome work please

Bonus points if this song played in your head at Applejack's line.

HA! I wondered if that was intentional or not. I love that song. I love this fic too. It's all full of cute. :twilightsmile:

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lol i am teh evils!

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Thanks! Hope it continues to please.

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Thanks! I'm hoping that I'm not coming across as cruel (picture above notwithstanding).

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I know, right? You'll have to forgive them--it was (supposed to be) their first time; and besides, garlic bread is easy enough that Rainbow can make it no problem.
Wait...
On second thought, scratch that last sentence.

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YEEEAAH!!
I think it's more of her trying to convince herself that it's ok, and she won't lose any coolness points by liking hugs. She will also have a bit of a similar discussion in a later chapter when she realizes that she kindof likes the long dress she's wearing.

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:applecry: Hope I didn't accidentally bring up bad memories or anything...
Yes, they will. I'd feel too guilty if I made them be in awkward places ALL the time.

2348314 lol no bad memories they're all made for a reason right and that's all they are is memories but I suppose it's besides the point and something I shouldn't have really brought up on the Internet but nonetheless as I said great story and can't wait to see the rest :)

I was gonna say, this chapter felt a bit too silly :rainbowlaugh:

Still...

Yep. All those stories you hear about kidnapping foals or giant dangerous lightning-powered generators? Rumors to keep other ponies out of our business, if you know what I mean." She winked playfully.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

It is with great trepidation that I click this chapter. April Fools is not kind to me, but this story is just too damn good to chance missing a chapter! :fluttershyouch:

EDIT: :rainbowlaugh: Totally worth the trust exercises I'll have to do!

I think you should actually keep this as canon for the story! It may be a little off-track, but its also really funny! I like it!

Seriously? :rainbowlaugh:

EDIT: You know, I was wondering what other ways the Rainbow Factory works :rainbowlaugh:

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