I saw a rainboom and smiled! And that's how Equestria was made! Maybe someday I'll tell you about my bio.
One more glass passes my lips, washing away the pain I felt. But it would return as soon as the numbness of the drink faded.
Another glass, maybe this one will make me forget how to think. Let this golden morphine pass my lips and tickle my tongue as the glass slowly lowers itself to the table and maybe let me escape painful memories.
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Well done, sir....
Only edits are these:
*Schedule.
And it is "Apple Bloom," my friend, not "Applebloom". Had to learn that lesson myself from my first fic.
Have my like, fav, and feels.
That...Is deep. I cry this very night...Reminds me of the hell I went through...You did this very well, as I shed tears from my eyes. very deep.
2291402 thank you for both complimenting my story and informing me of these errors, I appreciate it!
...and this is usually where I add an emoticon, but the mobile site prevents that...
2291432 thank you!
(For a short fic, that was well written.)
So many feels; never forget the CMC:
Eh... tbh, it lacked the feels. You gave applebloom no reason other than that one stress in her life to take her own life... which i felt was unbelievable. it would have taken more then that to kill herself: a strong filly, by your words, to end her own life and selfishly destroy the lives of others with her suicide.
Also, the sisters were tight. Aj would have sensed it and do something about it...
... but for the sake of fics... it had been a decent job. Thumbs up for me