• Member Since 6th Feb, 2013
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One day, Jamie brought his latest invention home, hoping that he could make some final touches to it. The still faulty device starts acting on its accord and opens a portal to Equestria. Jamie and his friends wonder through the portal and end up where they least expected. The portal wont stay open forever so they'll have to decide if they want to stay in Equestria or return home.

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Comments ( 8 )

Good job bro keep it up it looks good :D

2425055 Thanks, bro! :pinkiehappy: It's nice to hear some positivity as I'm aware the whole "humans in Equestria" topic is a widely explored area for a lot of fanfics and can become quite monotonous. Because the topic is so common, I'm trying to keep this story as original as possible.

The cover art works well, dude! :rainbowwild: And I'm really liking the way you've set this out; not too different from your original plan but nicely ironed out. Keep it up, trucker! :pinkiehappy:

I hate brony in Equestria stories...

2435991 You don't have to be sorry. Some people like Brony in Equestria stories, others (me) don't.

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ya i can see that your trying to raise the bar for fim fics :twilightsmile:

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