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Pinkie Pie is haunted by feelings of self-hatred, stemming from the day she left her family to be on her own. Never wanting to see her best friend in a crazed state of distress again, Rainbow Dash resolves to reconnect her with her estranged family and bring an end to the personal demons once and for all.

Featured at Equestria Daily on September 28, 2011.

Featured at Canterlot's Finest on November 21, 2013.

First Published
17th Oct 2011
Last Modified
22nd Jan 2012

Adorable. Just plain adorable. You write so well, to me! :D

You wrote it! :yay:

Adding this one to my queue. Of stuff. To read.

That was so so sweet! :pinkiehappy: MOAR!

that was epic

went from :pinkiecrazy: to :pinkiehappy: in ten seconds flat :rainbowkiss:

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your number came up

Really loved it. Sad pinkie always makes me cry though :fluttercry:

Well done. Brilliantly written, I demand moar :rainbowkiss:

Sad Pinkie is sad. :C I like the idea of Pinkie going back to visit her family, and that Rainbow Dash is coming along. ;)

You managed to nearly make me cry without having to resort to being exceedingly depressing.  Well done. :pinkiesad2:

And the musical interlude made me :rainbowlaugh:

Looking forward to more!

A manly tear was shed for sad Pinkie:pinkiesad2:. That was a metalicious story! I cant wait for more! |,,|

Well, if anypony can do the surgery needed to extract the broomstick from the plot of the ungrateful imbecile falsely arrogating to itself the title of 'father', that pony is Loyalty Made Flesh. :rainbowdetermined2:

This is really well written.  There is one small complaint I have, though.

In the fourth to the last paragraph, it should be "cue," not "queue."  The latter refers to a line (of people/items/etc.)

>>7590

Hrm. Nice find. Don't you love non-typos? I wish Writer picked up incorrect words like that.

That was a great story, and a very well done interpretation of Pinkie's family.  I can't wait to see what you're going to do to later in this story, keep up the good work.

Scy, I've seen you around in the comments of practically every fic I've read on this site, but I never knew you were such a talented writer. What a touching story... and it features my OTP, Pinkie/Dash! I'll definitely be adding this to my watch list.

>>7825

I sure get a lot of reading done, don't I? Haha. Thanks a lot for showing interest in my work. :) Hopefully I shall continue to impress.

:rainbowlaugh:

You did wonderful!  You took a touching scene from The Cutie Mark Chronicles, and took it further.  It's a strong start to a story!

:raritystarry: Absolutely adore this story. I can't wait to see an update. :D

Sad Pinkie... damn it, Scy, stop abusing my kryptonite. Seriously.

Anyways, nice take off of Pinkie's history... think this story is gonna hinge on how you portray the parents though.

Well... the sisters too, but the parents especially.

Nice start. Could crit, but dammit... Sad Pinkie...

Quick question before the next chapter hits: Are you going the Inky is Octavia route? If it is a spoiler, I'll understand. I'm just asking for the sake of my own Head Fannon.

>>10265

I don't mind "spoiling" this to people who are curious and read these comments.  No, she will not be Octavia.  The sisters also will not be named Inky and Blinky, as I detest those names.

You guys will see what I come up with.  I hope it's enjoyable.  :rainbowwild:

>>10348

cool, can't wait to see what you come up with

>>10348

Aww. But it's actually the studios unofficial names Inky, Blinkie, Pinkie, and Clyde are the names of the ghosts in Pac-Man. It's sooooo cool.

>>13015

I know where the names come from. ;P  It doesn't make me hate them any less. I'm using different fan names.

Good story Scy! Give me a chapter 2 preview on irc next time you're on!

That was truly an amazing story! I have only one thing to say: please don't give up or quit on us! I've seen many a good story die when a writer gives up on the story, and I will not allow an incredible story to die without a fight. Now that that's out of the way, keep up the good work! Also, any idea when part 2 will be out?

>>17919

I won't give up on you, don't worry. I fully intend to finish this story! It'll just be a while. I have 5 chapters planned, but they're all pretty juicy. Writing is not a quick process for me. Sign up for an account and Track me. :)

As for Chapter 2, I'm probably a little over halfway done with it. If my muse triggers just right, I could very well complete it tomorrow or within the week.

>>17942

For the love of Celestia ScyStorm, you comment is such a tease!:raritydespair:

This is, by far, the most beautiful fic I've ever read, and it's not even done yet! The long time between updates is absolutely worth it, with this quality. 297/5 stars.

This is absolutely amazing, and so beautiful. You're sticking true to both ponies' elements (Rainbow especially at the end) and you're putting your own beautiful flair into the mix, as well as such a good plot-line. I can't wait to read more of it, it's so heartwarming.

That was a great follow up to the last chapter, I especially loved the "piggy pie" segment; it made me laugh.

I loved the homecoming and how Pinkie's parents turned out to be regretful and accepting, especially of her and Dash's relationship. The history was well put together and I can't wait for the next installment. I know this review isn't as detailed but I don't want to repeat the same points over and over with each chapter's review.

Love it so much, I can't wait for the next chapter! Haven't read such a good take on Dash/Pinkie in ages. So great!

I can barely wait for the next chapter. I do find a lot of stories, some of them are romance, but they mostly either are too much romance or don't update often enough. This one is a great balance between romance and the other emotional stuff that you rarely ever find!

This one will never update often enough! Not that I mind, though, as long as the chapters are high quality (this one being even better than the last one).

T4

This. Is. Excellent! keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

It's SEW AWESUM I NEED MORE! :rainbowkiss:

Argh, now i can't stop smiling for the rest of the day.

Great update as I am really amaze at how in-depth this story is at the life of Pinkie Pie.

I do wonder if her sisters will be making appearance in this tale as it progress ? :pinkiehappy:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as I found this to be a great read. :rainbowkiss:

I NEARLY CRIED. MANAGED TO HOLD BACK TEARS.

Good job, dude. It takes a good story to make me cry.

Another very well done chapter.

PFT

This is truly a great story! The only possible downside to this is that it is a LONG time between updates, but it is totally worth the wait! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for your comments, everypony! :heart: :heart: :heart:

>>30975

Of course the sisters are coming! Do you really think I'd leave them out? ;) The next two chapters are dedicated to them.

>>31299

Ick. Sorry about that. ^^;  Like I said in the author's note, writing is a slow, careful process with me. But you can't argue with the results, I guess.

LOL. Is one of the sister goona be Octavia?

>>31438 >>31427

Me and Scy both hate that fanon idea, heh.

Damn Scy you got me teary eyed. It's crazy to me how I can know such a great writer. You've left me speechless you amazing bastard :pinkiehappy:

Awww... well...no tears for me. Copious amounts of daww, but mine eyes remain dry.

Oddly enough, I think the strongest part might've come after the emotional part when we got to witness this little family reunion at its best and without the tears. Just the normal parts were... I dunno... a relief maybe. I'm glad that the parents didn't turn out to be monsters, bigoted or really even all that defective in terms of parenting... though there is the lingering question of exactly why Pinkie bailed... feels like that may be more complicated than what we've got so far (or maybe I'm pining for mystery or something, who knows at this time of night/morning).

Anyways... if I was going to crit anything... well, some of the dialogue seems to slip. Nothing consistently off, but sometimes there'll just be a word or expression that seems off. There's a few typos and such as well, but, again, nothing too bad ("...he raised his head to look at the two, calm azure eyes focusing on Pinkie" for example).

So, yeah, solid story still. Definitely wanna see where you go with the sisters... especially since, given what's established, you may not have any limits there.... save perhaps for the limits established by drama. Gotta have something move that needle, right?

-Lammy

very deep not just another shipping i luv it

Ohh man is this good and I only read the first chapter. I'm glad someone decides to make a story about Pinkie finally meets her family. OOOOHHHH I really hope there is a episode on this in season 2 :applecry:

Hmm...so, which Pie sisters are you going to work with?

Inkie and Blinkie, or Bellamina and Octavia?

>>36036

Bellamina and Margaret.

Can't wait till the next chaper. So you be going with Bellamina and Margaret, thats cool.

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