Apple Bloom, Sweetie belle, and Scootaloo are always on the look out for ways to get their cutie marks. But like all children, they spend much of their time playing games and having fun as well.
On a particularly slow Saturday the three fillies decide to play a different kind of game; one that will send them to misty jungles, icy mountains, deadly volcanoes and pitch them against mad scientists, vicious dragons and of course, Diamond Tiara herself!
Take a trip into the imaginations of three fillies and watch as they drag the entire town into their new shenanigans.
Chapters (2)
This sounds like fun.
This was so cheesy it gave me an allergic reaction. In short, good job. That was excellent.
This is great! Had me smiling the whole way through.
"Apple Bomb" 
All of my yes. I genuinely forgot that I was sick while I read this.
reminds me of when i used my imagination to entertain myself thanks for the read ill be waiting for more from ya
Haha, great story! This reminded me of when I was a youngster and when i would watch Rugrats. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Loved it.. Especially Scoots trying to power game a-la Naruto.
2322308 Fun fact: Apparently, both Microsoft Word and dictionary.com do not like the word jutsu. Oh and I guess Fimfiction doesn't like it either. Go figure.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Scootaloo, you know you can throw multiple ninja stars or kunai right? You don't have to throw one at a time.
This was an amazing story. When I first read the description, I have to say: I was amazed. The idea to me is just amazing. It is truly one of the few great ideas that has come to this site in a long time. Everything wasn't really cheesy to me, but ingenious. So, here is what I think you should do: send this to Equestria Daily. I can guarantee that you will get accepted. But there are a few errors in here. A few are pretty serious and some are nothing big. So, reread this again before you send it.
2335112 I'm glad you liked! I really wasn't thinking about posting it to EQD, it was just intended to be silly stories I could write in between my serious stuff. But now, I just might.
This is promising. I have to say you have the best description for a story that I've read in a while. I wish I could write story descriptions as well as you do. That being the said, the story itself is really sweet and promising. It deserves a favorite.
Name of Story: For the love of god you must know the name of your own story.
Grammar score out of 10: 9 ( There was a grand total of 3 minor errors, that I could spot anyway.)
Pros:
Your descriptions of fight scenes is flawless.
All three fillies are in Character.
I could see this being some sort of mini-episode.
Cons:
The humor this story possesses is rather dull, and failed to warrant so much as a chuckle. A smile on the other hand it did achieve.
I found myself a little confused by who was talking at times.
Very cheesy!
Notes:
Dispute being incredible cheesy, Crusaders-go, managed to draw me into the story with it's pure innocent plot and writing. With only minor errors, and little confusion I would strongly suggest you consider submitting this to EQD. I thoroughly enjoyed this story's writing style, and all around fun nature. Liked and favorited, my good sir, keep up the wonderful work!
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SILLY FILLY!!!!!!! HOW HAVE YOU BEEN? OMG, we haven't talked in awhile.
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While Albinocorn thanks you, I shall do it as well. Thank you for your review. As his trusty editor, I can say that we are both happy you give it such high marks and regards. We are in the works of getting it to Equestria Daily, actually. But once again, thank you for the review.
There are more than that, but I have yet to actually get to edit this thing. But either way, they are nothing too bad, as you know.
2378194 sorry, i forgot to thank you for the review so thank you very much. And as my editor said, we will be working on it to get it to EQD.
2492690 I'm just glad I could be of help.
Hope to see this on EQD in the near future. It really is a wonderful story.
2492615 I'll just take your word of there being more errors. I'm not really the best proofreader, or even reader for that matter.
well i read it agian and still no new chapter i am missing this story
2525337 I'm sorry, I'm caught up with other projects and school. Don't worry, I'm still thinking about it.
Cheesy? No...not at all.
Very heartwarming as it bring me back to those times I played with my best friend on the playground, most definatally
25 likes? ppfffffff this needs more
Eeh! SO beautiful and sweet!
Absolutely loved it!
why did you take so long to grace me with your story i missed it
3382000 My apologies. But you know what they say, the best things come to those who wait.
The Daww of this fic. I just can't stand it!!
*journey. And automatic downvote for misspelling the description. (I'll take it back when you fix it.
3577990 ...I fixed that a while ago, I'm not sure which description you're looking at.
3578617 It was showing in the short description on the right side while I was looking at ... Sunset of Time, I think.
3578634 I can't see the description in the sidebar, it's too far down. When I went to edit it, it was already spelled right.
3578638 Strange - because it's showing right now.
3579395 Ah, now I see it. Fixed.
Hello Albinocorn, my name is KarmaSentinal and I bring you this review from the Authors Helping Authors group.
Grammar: 10/10
Pros:
1. Atmosphere is amazingly innocent and captures what it feels like to be a child.
2. The concept of the three just living their lives like children and not crusading for once.
3. Many readers can relate to what they're experiencing and remember a time like that.
Cons:
1. I can't really say anything without going back on some of my pros.
NOTE: The reason I can't name any cons is because I only read the first chapter(because I'm going to fav and read the next later tonight)but what I did read told me this story shouldn't have any cons or overlying problem. It was made to recapture a time in most of our lives where we could relate and even say "Hey! I did that exact same thing."
I think I'm being biased in my review but I love the warm and general kindness behind it. It remains me so much of Calvin and Hobbes and how wondrous the world can be for a child to experience. I want to say thank you for writing this story and allowing me to remember those moments in my life.
Thank You.
3609380 Your review made ma smile, and now, I can't stop.
Yep, this story was inspired by all of the dumb, fun things my friends and I did when we were younger.
I do plan on writing more, in case you're wondering. Whenever the mood strikes me.
Oh dear.
This is so cute!
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THE CHEEZE IS EVERYWHERE.
So much cheddar.
I love it. ONWARD!