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I write stories about the sexual experiences of small, multicolored equines. That's literally my contribution to the world.
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Well, here you have it: My inaugural chronicle of equine coitus. Because why not?
I’m not sure whether I should be proud, or whether I should reassess my life and try to pinpoint what events led to this. If you had told me a few years ago that I’d be writing a story about a purple unicorn schtupping a clone of herself, I’d have thought you were crazy. But here I am, and I’m actually okay with it.
This was written for the Selfcest is Best Cest group’s “Love Thyself” contest (that’s a lot of –est’s, sheesh). Truth be told, I’d already had the idea for this story before I even heard of the contest, and it just seemed like a good excuse to actually write it. I’m fairly happy with how it turned out, especially considering I feel so rusty with my writing.
If you enjoyed this – you little devils – then rest assured: More is on the way. Probably. I have a lot of good ideas bouncing around, and unless some creative glacier comes along to dam up the valley, I’ll hopefully be inflicting some of them unto paper.
Until then, enjoy!
Note: I actually did the bulk of the work on this back before the season 3 finale, back when Twilight was still 100% mammal, and updating it seemed like more trouble than it was worth. Though I can’t imagine many of you will mind.
Insta-faved. It's really, really good.
And that ending... ;_;
Yeah, I like this. You've done well capturing the anxiety of first dating and the emotions of all these situations, and provided with a realistic take on first sex that didn't disappoint. Good job.
Hmm, I will read this later, as I'm trying to do my own last-minute (literally) entry for said contest, even if it's looking more and more doubtful that will submit/finish it in time.
But trust you've notified someone in charge of the contest, since not really in the group as I see it (and thus, haven't added it, would do so myself but I don't feel like adding it to wrong folder even if it's pretty obv which folder should go under). Will say that I look forward to reading when I make some time (hopefully sooner, rather than later), since it's featuring my favorite mare AND selfcest and sounds interesting! 
PS: Sorry for kinda pointless comment, but just had to be sure, since again, don't see ya in group or didn't get a notice.
A very enjoyable read. It's not often I get to read these kinds of stories that aren't just for the sex. I'm glad to see someone writing more than just sex in a story.
You've captured those feeling quite well if I do say so myself. Bravo my dear author.
Those feels at the end!
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I know that feel sis..
If you tried you could have gotten the comedy tag easily. The rest of the story was pretty cool, self-cest is always good.
Fluttershy: What do ship have to do with dating? A: EVERYTHING!
everything is really good but the one thing that hits me hard is that i am the same as twilight in the beginning, so god dam alone...
This is really, really, really good! Amazing- the way the clone behaves is very much like the show. The emotions portrayed, the motivations- this is all right very natural and believable. Fluttershy and Rarity's banter was lovely, as well. I don't know what else to say, so- great job! Will definitely follow to see more of this style of yours.
2267272 Awesome shit aside from the implied hetero date coming up
But that's just me hating on males.
2306964 Heh, yeah. It's always been my personal headcannon that most mares are bisexual. In a society where females seem to outnumber males by a daunting margin, it seems like..."flexibility" with one's preferences would have a certain evolutionary advantage. Oh well. If it helps, maybe their date won't go so well. Methinks Twilight will see her share of mare-on-mare action in the future.
2307552 I have a very specific headcanon for such things that I shall be making into a story in the near future, so Peppy thinks so as well. I'd still prefer to have it not even hinted at, but it's not my story
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OH MYY GOOOD!! SO EPIC!!
Please, if you can, continue with a second chapter!
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For some reason, I think that Rarity is a virgin, at least in my headcanon. She certainly will be in my story!
Holy crap. A fic that actually has sex and invokes the feels. WTF is the world coming to?!?
A clop fic with actual romantics...
*slow clap*
>the Pool’s magic isn’t very good as replicating knowledge
I think you mean "at"
I found another error, but I forgot what it is
I love thyself already
OH, MY GOD SHE'S GONNA BANG HERSELF--OR AT LEAST HER CLONE!!!
The only thing this story was missing was some character development for Twolight. If they had pent a couple thousand words getting to know each other before the sex, it would have not only cemented the psychology of the situation, but would have made Twolight's passing truly heartbreaking. A good story nonetheless.
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On the other hoof, if there had been more development for Twolight, we would have cared if something that was essentially a toy made of real, living flesh was disappeared. I don't want that. (The cloning idea was good though. I need to find one of those mirror pools).
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That's the point. You should care. If you don't care about one of the characters having an intimate and personal connection with another and then dying, then why care about anything in the story at all?
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That's a valid point. I suppose I could've spent some time fleshing out Twolight a little.
But at the same time, there's a part of me that feels that would've just distracted from Twilight's development, which is the core of the story. It's important to remember that Twolight is really just a temporary fragmentation of Twilight created by the mirror pool. And it's not that she died; it's more that she... "re-emerged" with Twilight, I suppose.
The sex was merely symbolic of Twilight learning to accept herself, and anything Twilight or the reader feels as a result of Twolight's "fate" is, I think, rooted in that acceptance. The intended takeaway is that Twolight isn't really gone at all, and Twilight understands herself just a little better for it.
Maybe that's flimsy. Maybe I'm just rationalizing. But that's what I was trying to do. Looking back, I might not have pulled it off as well as I'd've hoped, but c'est la vie.
Thanks so much for the input!
Mmmmyes~
Wonderful, I enjoyed the part about other mares being flexible, reminded me of your other story.
Good read, as i had noticed in the aforementioned story you had made a few minor errors, i didn't want to go through and read it again just to find them, but i decided to take note of any easy fixes i see in this one, easily findable with ctrl+f:
"leaned it to kiss her" - "in"
"understand you concern, Fluttershy" - "your"
"good as replicating" - "at" ?
"to avoid the more the crowded areas." - don't need the second "the"
"watching as other unicorn" - "watching as the other unicorn"
And from that moment, I knew this story would be going in my favorites.
There were a few typos, but it was a fantastic read. My only qualm is that the clone is killed at the end, but that's not nearly as bad as the massacre that happened in the episode, so I can't really fault you for it. (Besides, I can headcanon that she brought the same clone back later on while she was studying the Mirror Pool in depth.)
Shit. Now I kind of ship it. And by "it" I mean Twilight x MirrorClone!Twilight.
...This is not the type of story I would normally admit I had read.
I don't know why I hadn't read this yet. Good stuff.
“W-what about Big Macintosh?”
“Oh, at least try to be original, darling.”
Hah!