SPOILLERS AHEAD!!!
Note: This pic is not mine. I found a couple on the Internet and combined them. I only take credit where credit is due.
Raiden has just killed Senator Armstrong, and has managed to save his K-9000. They were just about to leave, when there was an explosion. Twilight was walking home from Zecora's, when she saw a blast of fire coming from in the forest. Being herself and very curious, she went to see what had happened. What she saw terrified her...but also made her even more curious.
Chapters (1)
I already have a MGR fic in the works... and I am still going to publish it. This won't stop me...
The chapter is fine, by the way.
Interesting...
Nice to see you get more descriptive but your pacing is too fast for my tastes, overall: pretty good.
Noooooooooo! you got my hopes up!! I wanted Snake not the grey fox clone
FUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH!!
Needs way more description. Raiden runs through the forest? Show how he runs, what he dodges and shit.
Also, I'll admit to not having beat Armstrong yet, but last I checked Raiden's HF blade gets broken and he ends up using Sam's Muramusa instead.
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Yeah. I know what you mean by more description. My editor, Lord of Nothing, didnt get a chance to edit it yet. Sorry.
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Shoulda waited to publish then?
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I was planning to. Didn't think it would get submitted so quickly.
I'm hesitant to read this after seeing the same amount of dislikes as likes, and from some of the comments. But it's MGR. It was a good game, if really short and not worth the $60, so I'll give it a read.
2267160Please notify me when you do then. Actually, I'll just follow you. Easier that way.
I loved Metal Gear Rising I was just let down that they only talked about Snake in the codic chats, maybe Snake could join Raiden in this fic? It would be nice to see those two working together again.
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I'll think about it. Thanks for the idea.
2302695 No prob, be almost like the only real time they fought back to back on MGS 2, just this time Raiden is more kickass then back on the big shell.
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Well, I actually have beaten MGS 2.....once. I was never able to beat it again.
2302716 MGS 2 is a good game, cause back them, in most Sneaking games, you got busted 9 out of 10 you won't make it out of the fight, but in MGS 2 and the above, you got busted, you had a 50/50 of being able to fight back with out getting killed.
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I know. In the newer ones, sneaking isn't as easy, but still doable.
2302733 Yeah in MGS 4 most of the time it was like fuck sneaking, cause of you being able to pick up and unlock guns.
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I know. But I intend to have Raiden sneak a lot more in this story than in MGR.
2302750 I see really I've been thinking about doing a MGR fic, but I've got the new Tomb Raider game a few days ago, and well yeah, not sure if I'm going to do an MGR or the new Tomb Raider game.
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Well, it's up t you my friend. BTW, thanks for the fave.
2302767 No prob, I'm an MGS fan, and I think MGR is a nice change from the guns in the game and at fucking last the MGS games have a jump button.
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Hehehe. No kidding. It really helped.
2302803 Yeah took the makers of the game qutie a few years to put one in. But really now it seems like that no one in the MGS world, can jump unless they have robot legs lol.
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Well, game informer only gave it a 7.75 saying that the level design was dull.......WHAT!?!?!?
2302828 Meh, the those guys must be blind to give it that rating.
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Well, they gave a Lego game a higher rating.....that really pissed me off.
2302846 You are shitting me! Who does those guys hire, little kids to do the rating for them?
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I don't know......People are blind these days. While I understand why they gve it around an 8, musty because the blocking was difficult, why give.....Lego undercover or whatever a 9.5!?!?!?
2302868 That I do not know.
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Well, nothing we can do. The next chapter will be out either next week, or the week after. I'm working on finishing MLC first.
2302886 Can't wait for the next chater of this fic.
Great so far, good luck with the next chapter.
Pretty rush, but its alright.
Khhh.... Give me about a half of hour to compile a review of this.
I won't be lying, it won't be pretty but it will be honest and unbiased(Or atleast I will try to do so.) Please understand that I only want to see this story bloom into something worthy of Feature Box
Lore... their is none.
1. Blade wolf has no need for pain receptors, he is an 'AI'.
2. Raiden's HF blade was broken by Armstrong so he still has the HF Muramasa blade at this point.
3. Raiden's cyborg body is the custom cyborg body, not the standard cyborg body.
4. Metal Gear what? What type of Metal Gear are we talking about here? Metal Gear Rex, Ray, Excelsus?
5. Also how did the Gear get to Equestria in the first place and where did it come from?
6. Story was way to fast and I feel like their should be about 80% more writing to this. Allot of the story seemed to be skipped over and almost none of the events or happenings were explained at all.
Sorry if I sound like a jerk, I just wanted to point some things out.
awww, canceled? I was just getting ready to read it too!
Ah well ,shit happens. pass the syrup. I'll still read and fave, but dissapointment will ensue when I finish reading
EDIT: that was good, if a bit fast. Hmm, mind if I take this and expand it? It might take me a while, but This would make for a good outline.
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If you're curious, I'm working on a Metal Gear Rising fic. I'm going to release Chapter 8 soon.