Griffin the Griffin
I'm writing a new story called Griffin the Griffin. I'll cycle between it and Ascended. Whenever I need a break from one, I'll go to the other. I'm not going to have the same insane update speed I did with Monster. Go check it out.
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oh :p
246299 Hey, there was no sex, despite everypony TRYING. He behaved himself quite well. In our world, beastiality is wrong, for a very good reason. In theirs, they do not consider anything capable of speech to be an animal. Ponies, griffins, diamond dogs, humans, cows, donkeys. (Even though sheep get herded, I'm not sure if they're considered a slave race or something, they wouldn't put that concept in a kid's show) they're all considered equal. Relationships between them are more like relationships on earth between different nationalities. If aliens were to come to earth, eventually there would be relationships between the species, even if they could not have children. It's the same deal, except that they have multiple species capable of speech there, so it's ALREADY widely accepted.
247404 Yeah, I kinda did botch the ending a little, I was never good that. I always dread making something a little TOO descriptive, and then losing reader interest, so I tend to under do it.
247490 fair nuff
i loved the happy-sad ending tho
ed the prologue
best ending to story
and
what can i say, i believe that happy endings are just stories that havent ended yet
It was a great story, and you are a great writer, I read the entire thing in two sessions after reading the first chapter of ascended. I sit with a keyboard to the left of my laptop desk, your story made me feel emotions, which seems to be something only fanfics can do, and only very few of them. Though it did not drive me to tears, or to the brink of tears, while I was sitting here, reading the last few words, I unconsciously reached for an A minor triad, my hand then improvising a slow sad tune, However the tune then ended with a happy major chord.
Um just a casual question, did you take control of my hand and have it play you a musical piece for your story?
250710 .......... yes
250964
Then why didn't you take control of my right hand and write it down for me! It was fucking awesome (considering it was impromptu and not conscious), and I have no Bucking clue what chord it was! (I've managed to figure out the main tune, but the ending chord makes all the difference, I can't remember whether it was a 7th or possibly even a 5th... GAAAAH) I literally spent about an hour and ten minutes trying to figure it out before I noticed that you posted a new chapter of Ascended
This is Quality in the form of a fanfic.
PS: love the sequel!
PPS: The other story "Griffin the griffin is awesome too.
303330 Magic *snort snort* The same goes for rainbow dash. In reality, NOTHING organic could possibly handle that kind of speed outside a protective shell.
303348 Hehe. Silly magic, you aren't a little pig! (The reference obscurity levels are over 9000! But seriously. Nobody ever gets my references. It always takes to long to explain it, and by the time I do, it's just not funny anymore
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303598 I know right?!?! It really bugs me when they're really long. It makes the transition to the next chapter feel wrong. That's one of the main reason I want to write my entire story before posting it. Then I'll have authors notes as an added chapter. Also, if the main characters name starts with a B, then I think we should have all other names start with something else. It just helps the reader out a little. I was a little annoyed by the similarity of the names Nightshade and Nightmare when both names were being used together in a short period of time or didn't have enough narrative to help make it clear as to who was being referred to.
303348
You Called?
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309611 Ah yes, Goku, there you are. Derpy wants to give you a muffin. No, you don't need to press the muffin button. Bet you can't guess where that's from.
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309683 Found it! It's from Goku - Muffin Button videos on youtube.........i think
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311389 Jesus didn't make us, god made us, using evolution. He made the universe with rules, and he cares enough about it to obey them himself.
311955
Jesus died to give us life didnt he, WHY!
Cause HE..DIED..FOR..US!!!!
Srry but thats what i beleive.
311955 than again...I can see where your coming from, allright you have my attention
312182 I don't like going religious online, because I don't wanna offend anyone, you know, love and tolerate all kinds. God created us, jesus died so we can go to heaven. I'm christian too. For some reason the scientific community and religious communities cant get along. I mean, there is scientific proof, and then there's faith, they say you can't have both, I say you can.
312445
...thats quite understandable 
good day
332230 .......... oops.
I just read the whole story in a single day and I have to say...One of the best HiE fics I have read, I'm off to start reading your other stories before work. Wish I could say more but...work...
this was an amazing story.
i was anon on this site for months and i finally decided to make an account so i just thought id tell you how much i enjoyed your story.
you sir are a terrific writer, but one thing, i think when nightmare came along that itself could've been a squeal instead of continuing. other than that, awesome:
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true story bro
I'm board. I will now proceed to reread Monster and Ascension! HUZZA!
I liked it a lot, but I really think you should have cut it off somewhere between chapter 15 and 17. At this point you had just finished off the main story arc, and had for the most part wrapped up the loose ends. That which wasn't taken care of was small and could be assumed easy to wrap up "off screen". After this point your tale takes a new direction, a new villain, and a new set of problems. This second arc seems more like it should have been a sequel, as there was very little tying it to any of the problems from the first arc.
Although I didn't care too much for the second arc, overall I really liked this fic. Manly tears were shed, many manly tears.
Minor critique: You seem to have a love for hours, preferably in ones. Often in this fic you'd say "one hour had past" or something of the sort, rather than the more common and emotionally based "for what felt like an hour" or equivalent. Your Nightshade seems like a very proactive character, and not one who'd effectively sit by and do nothing for an hour+ in a situation where a mere minute can feel like an eternity... Just something that kinda stood out to me every time it came up.
795551 Yah, just save the pictures, I forgot where I got them
1063839 right above where you type in the comment... There is three different buttons...hmm scratch that..... Four buttons: one for inputing a link, another for picture, third for video, and the last one is for.... Honestly, I don't know
Ugh...finally got to register on the site...stupid e-mail error something....
Oh right, found this site yesterday hoping to find some good stories to read...not disappointed there
Read trough the whole story in one go...ALL 100k words!!!
So..yea awesome story, good work, hope you don't stop making more...please
...*remember that you already finished the sequel*...I'm not going to get any sleep for a while...
303348 Tell that to Felix Baumgartner.
if i only had many thumbs which are up, id give em' all ta you! you deserve it.
You really don't give yourself enough credit with this story. This is a great story! I have read many, many stories that were far, far worse than this.
if this is so bad how come 496 people like it
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WARNING! THIS FIC IS TERRIBLE! DO NOT READ!
*checks likes and dislikes, 541 to 32*
Not sure if actually terrible, or readers have poor taste...
HEY, this story isn't terrible! I LIKE THIS STORY!!!
K.
OMGSTOP D= STOP DEM PATAGRAGH POSTERS THEY ARE GETTING ANNOYING I CAME TO COMMEMT SOMTHING BUT CANT REMEMBER SO IM POSTING THIS INSTEAD
3818340 ...Uhm...And why do you quit? What does that have to do with me?
3818366 mmmh.. how should i explain this...
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on a previous story i read a few minutes before i commented that you along with buckshot ,spetznaz pony, and the space marine brony are on every story i read
3824646 Well, I'd say it's because we are renowned critics...at least now, I guess. The more people that recognize us, the more we actually are...well renowned...we'd still be critics either way.
WARNING: this fic is terrible don't read it!!
Well....that obviously means I gonna read it
>Ecocat<
And I am the Satan like lol i just pushed it to 666
Fuck this thing i have been working on for two years is really similar to this. Shit now i feel like im ripping someone off.
only reason i dislike the clop
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(insert obligitory chocolate rain reference here)
4267165 When I first read this comment, I saw testicles instead of tentacles
you say its terrible, but yet only 42out of more than 700 readers didn't like it. It can't be too bad...
*Starts reading*
Get rid of that.
1. The fics rather good so far, granted I'm only on Chapter 4 and it could end up getting worse.(Though if Griffin The Griffin is anything to go by than I'd imagine it'll be pretty good, I just hope Luna doesn't act like she did in Song of the Moon)
2. If you did that to make people curious to read it, then that's just stupid, seeing as I saw that almost a year ago and didn't pay it any mind and just went to the next story due to the fact that most people who put something like that just do it to get others to read it.
6337761 ya wanna see the FUCKBOX?
6794798 didn't even notice that, though technically, it forms RAP as that last e is missing.
SomPie is awesome though.
.....I just board these ships. There is a reason I don't name them...and now you know why.