Rain is a store's worst nightmare. Rain means fewer customers, slower days, and empty coffers. And Rarity doesn't expect the rain to bring one of the most emotional encounters she's ever had to her Boutique. (This is mostly just to try and get back into practice with details, dialogue, and conveying emotion. I've been super busy, so I'm going to try and get back in the swing of things.)
Not a bad way to scam a free repair out of an overly sympathetic milliner.
An emotional encounter indeed.
Great job, I really liked it
A very nice story indeed! Is like to see it get a little more attention.
Very nice
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