One thousand years ago Celestia was forced to banish her younger sister. Time doesn't always heal all wounds and the pain of the sun is the greatest of all. At least until a small filly comes into the picture.
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Not as angsty as I thought it was going to be, which is a good thing since normally I can't stand angsty fics. You did good with this, yes she feels the pain but no "Woe is Me" attitude, she has a student/daughter and a niece to keep her steady
As Admin of the Protect Celestia group I deem this an acceptable addition to the group.
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I am a Celestia fan and I wanted to write a brief story about this. I might expand it, but I'm not thinking so, it's good as it is. If anything I'll do another set when Luna returns.
I'm glad that my story has such a high approval
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I guessed you were when I saw that you are a member of the group. I think a chapter with Luna wouldn't go amiss.
Momlestia is best Celestia.
My only problem with this is that Celestia seemed out of character in the flashbacks to talking with Luna, she seemed strangely harsh, yes she admitted she was harsh but it still seemed weird to me, I cant actually picture Celestia calling her sister a "Brat".
But other then that I loved it.
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That's the thing about past Celestia, we don't know much about how she acted in the past. The fact that Luna became Nightmare Moon tells us, that perhaps Celestia wasn't all that aware of her sisters plight.
To me it was more of Luna constantly asking and complaining about why nopony enjoyed her night or attended her Nightcourt and Celestia getting fed up with hearing it.
But that is just me.
2323237good point
Celestia's voice felt a tad "off" when she recalled reprimanding Luna. I think it was the hypocrisy of telling her to decorum it up while phrasing it like a frustrated teenager. I guess she doesn't sound like an adult really?
Otherwise, Cute story, good fluff.