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Minitheif


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A ship from the stars crashes into the Everfree, but no creatures are found nearby. Where exactly did this ship come from, and what are these things inside it inside it?

Now labelled as Cancelled. I could, theoretically, come back some day, but don't expect it.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

A Red vs. Blue crossover? This will be interesting.

177038 It's not meant to be a crossover, though those are references. The man is a fan of the show, though at this point it's centuries old.

RvB and Stargate refrences. :yay:~yay~

181904 Well this is awkward. I've never seen Stargate...:twilightblush: Could you tell me what the reference was?

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A puddle jumper is a type of ship from the stargate series. it is a small transport ship that is small enough to fly through a stargate. it is caled a puddle jumper because the event horizon of a stargate looks like a puddle of water.

183696 Actually that sounds familiar. I did get the name Puddle Jumper from some show, so maybe I just didn't know it was Stargate.

I love the story. in my opinion, its perfect. cant wait for more:pinkiehappy:

Well you have a good start although the numbers like 5 need to be replaced by words eg five but it is a good start...although it does seem a little rushed at times. Have a like and keep it up! And you need to reduce character tags there are way too much

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