As the Equestria games approach Celestia has the royal guards out in full force to make sure nothing goes wrong. Shining Armor volunteers to patrol with a group of misfits and things go terribly wrong.
Story takes place just after season 3 and has a little bit of everything: Action, adventure, suspense
ALLONS-Y!
I love the Johner.
Aliens+TF2+The Thing prequel. IM LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!
Listening to the song as I read this.
LIKE A BOSS!!!
he gonna get it.
one quick edit you may want to make, you stated they have no internet but he pours the wine of the modem (allows internet access) so maybe the monitor?? JUst a suggestion
ending was good how about a sequel where they are found, pipsqeak dead and shining barely breathing?
Hello, Trigger_Finger! I have done a riff of this story for Carts' Unicorn Theater. It's sort of like Mystery Science Theater 3000, except for fanfics! Basically what I did was insert some of my witty observations about your story in between the lines. I hope that's okay, and obviously there's no harm intended.
You can check out the riff here if you want.
http://mlpmst.weebly.com/carts-unicorn-theater.html
2686226 Yeah, no problem, I'll have to look at it tomorrow though, I kinda need my sleep, it's 11pm where I am and I think I broke a rib at work... but kept working anyway (Figures, that's Burdy for yah) tee-hee... I always get a kick outta somehow hurting myself severly then keep on working somehow...