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Rainbowrash 20225

Joined January 2012
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    Rainbowrash's Stories (2)

    • Monty Pony and the Holy Grail
      The classic tale of King Arthur and his Knights of the Round Table, as told by ponies.

      7,537 words · 760 views · 19 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Regret
      Celestia remembers tales of her childhood.
      1,385 words · 189 views · 5 likes · 1 dislikes

    Equestria, 932 A.D. A kingdom divided. To the West, the Anglo-Stallions.

    To the East, the French. Above, nothing but Celts and some people from Scotland.

    In Guinard, Palace, and Difford, parasprites.

    In the kingdoms of Wessex, Sussex, Essex and Kent, parasprites.

    In Mercia, and the two Anglias, parasprites, with a 50% chance of cutie pox

    coming out of the Northeast at twelve miles per hour.

    Legend tells us of an extrodanairy leader who arose from the chaos to unite a troubled kingdom.

    A pony with a vision, who gathered knights together in a Holy Quest.

    This pony was Twilight Sparkle, King of the Britons, for this was Equestria!

    Based off of Monty Python and the Holy Grail (duh) and My Little Pony (doubleduh)

    Just so you all know, this story is pretty heavy on copy pasty. This is because I want to get into writing fanfiction, but haven't written stories not involving ponies in about ever, so this is mainly a random topic I chose to practice with. I will redo it with no copy pasty after this one.

    First Published
    4th Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 29 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowderp: Sweet Celestia... That was cool.

    First I was like this: :rainbowhuh:

    Then I was like this: :unsuresweetie:

    Then I was like this: :rainbowlaugh:

    Then I was like this: :twilightsmile:

    Congrats you win my approval. :eeyup:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    You have pleased the Soup Nazi.  SOUP FOR YOU

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This ought to be interesting to read once kinds stop getting mentioned.:twilightblush:

    Also, wouldn't Rainbow beRainbow Dash the Loyal?:rainbowhuh:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    *kings:facehoof:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ... OH MY LORD WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THIS!

    This was hilarious!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #7 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Haha! So funny.. :rainbowlaugh:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh my god, this is one of my favorite movies of all-time.

    Tracked, because this this is just pure awesome.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    For the record Sir Robin should be Scootaloo because their both chickens.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    You can't go wrong with Monty Python's comedy.

    Hey, why the heck is this not featured yet? :flutterrage:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Go back and fix some things like "I move for no pony" Things like that!:twilightblush:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·
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    YOu forgot the Knight that no one remembers or mentions.

    Wait...:rainbowlaugh:

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, William, I'm the Batman.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    My only complaint is that I think you shouldn't have set it in some mix of Briton and Equestria; you should pick one or the other (preferably the latter) and adapt the story accordingly.

    So, for example, Twilight had ridden through Mareheim or Prairis rather than Mercia. And she goes around calling herself queen of the Equestrians, not the Britons. That kind of thing.

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I loved the remake of the song of Camelot. I've been like :rainbowlaugh: through the whole story. And I love Trollestia.

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Carrot Cake? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :fluttershbad:

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Not bad. Seems a little rushed, but I like it so far.

    If Tim the Enchanter ends up being Trixie, I so called it.

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Laura de la lu Faust.

    icwutudidthere

    /tracked

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Very good, but you mixed up he and she a lot in the witch dialogue. Please fix :pinkiehappy:

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 64w, 12h ago · · ·
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    I haven't even started reading this and already I can guarantee that this. Will. Be. EPIC! You earned yourself a pre-reading track just for mentioning Monty Python. You win everything!:yay::moustache::eeyup::twilightsmile::scootangel::rainbowdetermined2::heart:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Hmmm, you say that this is mostly just a copy/paste...DON'T CARE! *continue reading*

    #22 · Chapter 4 · 64w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>256521 only the first two chapters are copy-pasty. the rest is done by mind

    #23 · Chapter 4 · 64w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>256626 YAY! You are making me even happier! How is this even possible? :rainbowlaugh:

    #24 · Chapter 4 · 62w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>257243 the power of friendship. That and bacon. Mainly bacon. Actually, only bacon.

    #25 · Chapter 5 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    AWESOME!!

    btw some scene suggestion

    For the bridge of death.

    Rarity: Heres an idea, why don't one of the pegasus go first, you know since they have wings and all.

    Fluttershy: Umm, but what if the thing that cast us down there prevent the pegasus from flying?

    Rainbow dash: Oh don't be such a wimp! Look i'll go first if it makes the rest of you babies feel better.

    (Now for lancelot i see this)

    HERBERT:  But I don't want any of that -- I'd rather--

      Cranky doodle donkey:  Rather what?!

      HERBERT:  I'd rather... just...

          [music]

          ...sing!

      Cranky:  Stop that, stop that!  You're not going to do a song while

          I'm here, you know i have nightmares of singing thanks to that pink pony!

    #26 · Chapter 5 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>310503 Thats genius....

    #27 · Chapter 5 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>310503 I had a general plan like, that but I didn't think of donkey. I'll throw that in. I also have an awkward twist on that scene, so stay tuned

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You sir, have the gift of novelizing movies that should have been novels to begin with..

    For that, I applaud you.

    P.S. I raise you one laughing/giggling Twilight:twilightblush:

    #29 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "You were in grave peril!"

    "It didn't seem that bad"

    "We must escape the peril!

    "Let me face the peril."

    "No. It's too perilous!"

    Always made me laugh.

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