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Fruit Heart, a market-seller mare, finds her house smashed after the Canterlot invasion, and to her troubles a changeling was responsible.
Now broken and hurt; Fruit Heart finds herself looking after the angry creature, but as time goes on, can she help the changeling see what kindness can do, or will his feral instincts force her away.
And will she adapt to caring for the changeling.
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This has huge potential from the description alone.
I tabbed it for later, I look forward to reading it
Im likeing this so far keep it up :)
Haven't finished reading this yet, because I'm busy with others things. However, my one, really big suggestion here is to get a pre-reader, as this has many grammatical errors. Nevertheless, I'm liking the story so far, and will be watching this for more.
Grammar could use some work and the dialogue seems a bit awkward but otherwise a nice start to a story. You’ve caught my eye for now.
Best of luck with it.
Just starting reading and you need to space out your paragraphs and dialogue really badly.
This has tons of potential and I'd hate to see another changeling fic not hit its full mark.
Have an editor or proofreader go over this, there are many groups of people willing to help.
2264009
Quit spamming.
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It's not spamming as it states my reactions to the events in the first chapter.
So fuck yo couch
[youtube=-Ur36D0YPEA]
On topic: I look forward to the next chapter as I sense a shitstorm
2264185
wat... I don't even.
I was referring to the fact that you post that image very frequently. Plus it's not even a real image, it just says "please go to funnyjunk"
2262394 I thank
2262577 I look foward to you reading it
2262584 I will
2262618 You are right I need one. Don't know where to get one
2262880 Thanks
2263738 Know any?
2264009 Don't spam on my work, please
2264185 And that video is...?
2264278 Don't worry, he's an idiot
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Any right off the bat? Not really. My team is busy enough as-is and don't like me shoving stuff into their hands.
Like I said, there are plenty of groups of people willing to edit for you. Maybe try a blog politely asking for help?
As for the spam posts, just delete them
2264842
Done
Mkay, glad that's under control.
Going back to the main topic, nice chapter. I'm interested to see how his missing wing will play a part, if any.
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Hmmm, I never thought it will play a big part. I might figure that out as I go along.
High hoof /)
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(\
Yeah!
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Oh and I thought about that, and it will.
Its alright.
You should really consider getting a proofreader for your story. There's loads of spelling errors all over the place.
I like it, but I've become a sucker for some of these changeling stories
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Congrats: You have just been taken over by the power of the Changelings
Also; Scar better not die at the end
2271177 ahaha in the end that would be my option, but would bring the sorry down to dark level if i was to do that.
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Please don't. If you do that, it would make the story depressing and unkind.
If he manages to pull through, however, it would definitely make for an interesting romance.
Em... "couch" not "coach".
You seriously need a prereader bro.
Other than that, loving it so far.
Also, "bowl", not "bowel". Two very different things.
I like how this changeling has a bit of an attitude.
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Will change.
Also cool.
i.imgur.com/YQIXCoN.png
I'm liking it so far. also i made this video today but i almost wish i didn't
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Yeah, I noticed a lot of misused words in this chapter (Chapter 2) You should either find a proofreader, or use a program that comes with a spell/grammar check.
2309804 Epic.
2309183 You just had some.
"Wait do I do?"
don't you meen "What do i do?"
2346226
Changed. Thanks for that.
If not, it wouldn't be much of a story would it? Also, nice punctuation.
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Thanks
I WANT MOAR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WWWWAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Let me finish the next chapter of "End of the Rainbow Factory"
2373900 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw
10 bits says she calls him Scar face
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2380557 WHY IS EVERYONE YELLING>>>>>>> WHY AM I YELLING>>>>
oh my caplock was on never mind
2435938
I wasn't yelling, I was using the Royal Canterlot Voice.
Sorry, I had been hanging around with my wife too much.
2435943 oh
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Really? Will do.
Thought I find it a little hard to believe minor mistakes can do that. Still, can't argue with that.
2447213 K
hee hee Fido the changling... yeah I don't see any of the proud, the chitinous, the buzzy being willingly called that..
Yay he talked!
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Too proud for that
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