Rainbow Dash has finally been accepted for the wonderbolts, it is a dream come true to her and she can't believe she finally made it but when a war starts her dreams are dashed down and she falls hard. A Rainbow Dash story about tragedy, romance and friendship (it is friendship is magic).
sexual references and sexual moments but no sex scenes. I feel comfortable writing them but I don't want it to happen in this story, I want it to be more romantic in these moments and not suddenly spoil the moment. I am not saying sex ruins moments but that it will just seem out of place in this story. Written from rainbow's viewpoint, most of my stories will be first person as I feel the emotion comes across stronger if it is form a character..
Also if you want Sombra to seem a little more awesome, i shall make him scarier, in the episode he said what, 2 lines that were rawr and ah
Good but at the beginning it said
Me and my friends. The correct way is my friends and I.
Any way this has great potential!!!
You probably shouldn't write that they fall in love in the synopses. It makes the whole story seem like a big fake setup to get to a clop scene. And even if that's true (I don't know; I didn't read it) hiding it is a good idea to avoid downvotes. Also, making a love forbidden does not make it more exciting.
2261659 thanks I will change that
2264818 uh thanks i guess? I don't write clop or sex or you know, i get up to the moment then skip it, also the love being forbidden, well the poies do kind of know what going on, its just they shouldn't really be dating but it doesn't really play that much of a part in the story, it is basically a whole thing so i can get rainbowdash involved in a war with a few plots going on at the same time, including one about scootaloo sending her letters.
Good I say also is it sombra and rainbow going to get together because if so that would make it pretty interesting.